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😊HE FELT HER LOVE😊
Part -1

They were running through the woods,trees, sand…they were struggling to survive….

Just then he had a thud in his mind…..his mind stopped working…everything was shaking..he could heard a faint voice…a very faint but echoing voice…a voice that he loved so much always and now even more…."ARNav jiii…..ap thik h…….arnav jiii" and then he could hear nothing….only his dying heart beat…his head became so heavy….and he knew he was collapsing….he was going down….

Bu he found two hands grabbing him trying hard to shake him Wake him up…but nothing seems the solution

He landed under a tree ,took the take and then he slightly opened eyes only to see a face, a face he longed for and his only wish to see that face before he closes his eyes forever…there she was worried…what has happened to him….she was shaken from innersole but trying to cope up with what was coming for her….

But he has lost his fight….:(

then she gained her senses…..arnavji….uthiye…please arnvji uthiye…..kya hua apko??????

Unki dawai….?????

Ha …arnvji apkne dawai lit hi?????

Please uthiye ….arnavjiii

She got up in hurry…..went to search for help….food…water….anything that she could get….

Then suddenly she spotted a shop….and rushed towards it….

She yelled…."humein pani chaiye or apke pass kuch khane ko h????" she was loosing her breath as she said that….

Shopkeeper brought a bottle of water and a bowl or some sugar coated sweets….she hurriedly took them and was about to leave when she was shouted at fro money..…

She was stuck…as there was no money…but then she got an idea… and sold them….the earrings….shopkeeper was surprised to get something so precious and let her go

She rushed to him….he was close to dying…mouth slightly open…eyes shut….gasping for breathe…

She get hold of him and she heard faintly her name said by him…."kkkhhhushi"

"bas arnv ji…hum a gye h…kuch nhi hoga apko…"

She let him take the support of her to sit and she started feeding him first with water….then the food…

He was not completely in his senses but obeyed her…

Slowly slowly he opened his eyes…face upwards to see her….just then a tear rolled from his eyes..she wiped it and said…"ap thik h "arnavji???

He gave a faint nod and just stared her..with guilt eyes, with loved eyes….with pain…with carving for her…

She was looking at him when she realized that she still has her purse with her whom she had put the medicine to enquire about it from the stores ….she hurriedly looked for the purse mean while…he was still looking at her….was completely lost in her and his own guilt of hurting her so much….

She took the purse that was hanging across her arm all the way….she took the medicine and water and helped him take it….

Then she made his head rest on her chest and made him feel as comfortable as she could make…but she didn't notice that this place has become the most comfortable place for him….as he longed for her…and had a fear that may be this is the last time he could hug her…rest on her…though he was very weak but this thought has not left him…

The guilt stays and take away your all guts and wishes….


Precap:-he enters a room ,

a room full of darkness but still there was light…a light of love …hope…but only for a short while…



ps-i know i have given the prrecap but,will continue to write only on the basis of comment and likes...

means hey frienda i am not a born writing just what i dream everyday,i am converting it in to a short story about our own Arshi...

so please do tell me should i continue...dont htrough anything if you dnt like...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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vry nice please update soon nd pls snd pm
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THAT WAS WONDERFUL
PLEASE CONTINUE SOON
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nicely pictured plz conti...and plz pm me if possible 😊
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PART -2
darkness to light

There was dark….all dark…

He opened his eyes…felt his head and eyes heavy….no body was around…he opened his eyes completely and his eyes searched…searched and searched for the only face he wanted to see…his ears longed for the only voice he wanted to hear….but he was all alone….he was on bed….alone in dark….

He tried to speak but he choked…..then gathered his complete strength to scream her name….kkkhhhushhiii

No response was there..all came back was his voice echoing…the room was hollow….NO WHERE HE COULD SEE HER OR SENSE HER….

He was all alone…he felt as his life was at the verge of ending…he couldn't think properly…tears rolling came from his eyes….

His greatest fear was in front of him…he was left alone without her…he kept on screaming…just then he saw a shadow…he could sense there was she…and he longed for her…he ran..onwards the shadow but nothing came in his hand except the pompom he had…..

there was one more thing that was as hollow as room or rather more….HIS HEART….

He was shattered and about to collapse when she again saw her face….she called arnav ji…he saw her…she was going far far far and far…and disappeared. With her last glimpse his heart got in cage he couldn't breathe or cry….and with the last and only breathe left in him ….he screamed her name.kkhushiii

He his eyes opened…with shock….he was choking but screaming her name…with that he again madly searched for her….khushi…khushiii……khushiii

He gathered his senses…he was in a hut….AGAIN A ROOM…..AGAIN ALL ALONE….chill ran through his spine…..fear of his dream coming true grabbed him…..

His breathing was increasing….tears falling from his eyes…it was matter of fraction of seconds that he was about die similarly like his dream….

But then came a sweet voice…..ARNV JIII

He called khhushiii

But this time no echo…..but again her voice soothed him a little….ARNAVJIII…..HUM YAHA H….

Khushi where are you????khushi I can't see...u….

Please khushi kaha ho???he was choking…..

And then he closed his eyes….he can't bear this pain……anymore…

Just then he heard…"arnav jiii…..yaha aiye….jaldi.."

He jumped like mad..as if she was about to lose her….

But things was very different from what he had dreamt of…

She was standing behind a cloth and asked arnvjii ap thik h????

Khushi tum kya kr rhi ho??? bhahr ao…..what the hell are you doing there…..???

Arnavji hum apko sab batate hai…..par please phle ap humein vo saree de dijye jo vaha padi h….

WHAT????

Arnvji what the…what the baad mein…phle huamre kapde de dijiye…..

He grabbed the sari and passed to her….

Jaldi ao bhar…..

Patanhi mein kaha hu…..or meri shirt???

Kya ho rha h ye…..mein pagal ho jaunga….he thought….but was relieved and felt very lighter as his love was near him…..

Just then he ended fighting with his thought….a lady….in white sari….and most beautiful face in the world looked at him….

He just couldn't stop staring……it was no that sari was very beautiful or she was wearing something unusual but..there was she in a plain sari….her simplicity…..beautiful hair…face eyes landing upon him made him go lost in her….he forgot everything….where was he, which place is this, how he arrived hair, everything was meaningless now…..he walked towards her….

She was asking …."arnavji ab apki tabiyat kasii h….ye to achha hua ki vaha vo……"

She couldn't complete her sentence as he was standing so close to her….

He gently touched her cheek….brought himself closer to her….she could feel his breathe, her sense went wild and his desire for her was so visible in her breathe and eyes….

Precap—they went into each other….just then he realized something….something very realll…and heart broking….


PS-TELL ME how it was and i hope it entertained you


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supe...cant wait 4 more...😳
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very nice update...thanks for the pm...and plz conti. soon😊
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Please PM me for the next part.Thanks
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PART-3
LOVE AND ONLY LOVE

He checked her from down to top'.for him she was the only thing mattered now or perhaps always mattered'.he went so close to her unknowingly as if his feet were not in his control'..

She saw him coming so close that all that she could see or feel was his eyes and his breathe'.

Her heartbeat was taking a roller coaster ride'.her mind not working'she couldn't take her eyes off or he couldn't put his hand away from her any longer'he put one hand on her wasit'so slim and soft'..and made it slide'inner inner'and deep'..this made her go lost in his senses'..

She closed her eyes'.and just felt'.she was too nervous'.he brought her more close'such that nothing can pass through between them'..she opened her eyes abruptly but they locked themselves on his brown'lusty eyes'.filled with desire for her and only her'.he bent a little'.she just followed his gaze'.and was completely lost in him'.

He slightly put his hand on her back firm and lifted her'.she still looking at him like an innocent and idiot lamb '..he then gazed her like a hungry and wild man 'who was so into her that all he want is she'..

Then he put her down on hay stack'..now he was on her and she was locked in him'.

Both were lost in each other'..then he looked at his pink,soft lusty lips'..carving for him to kiss her'.and that vibration in her lips that shivering of her body on his touch made him carve for her more'.. 'he bent a little and her bare neck made him go wild with love and desire'.she closed her eyes'he '. continued to reach her soft white milky neck'.and put a soft kiss from his lips ,the shiver went her spine and she titled her neck on the other side and moaned'..he continued to kiss her neck'.and then turned TO HER ears...kissed them and she felt thousands of butterflies running in the stomach...he sensed it and he gave a wild ,sexy titling smile...and said..."khushi i love you"...kya tum mjhse...pyar krti ho...???? whispered in her ears which made her open her eyes...

then he faced her'cupped her face'and looked at her for response ...she gave a soft nodd which filled his eyes with glow of tears and love...he then moved up and put a peck on her forhead and this touch made her go filled with love and love '..only love'a small smile appeared on her face'which made him shine and go further'.

A tear dropped from her eyes..but before it fell he stopped it by kissing it'.he then kissed her eyes slowly slowly'.

She put her arms around him very slowly as he reached for her lips'he was about touch them'she cou ld feel his breathe'so cool yet so hot'..and he could sense her breathe,heart beat and her nervousness which made him realize more that she was her only her''

He was about to kiss her and make her own for ever'..they were about to become one'.for the whole life'.

Btu god had Some other plans''HE had something very unusual but cruel for them'.

PRECAP-------NARAFRAT OR MOHABAT KO ABHI OR JANG LADNI THI'..IS ZINDAGI MEIN UNHE OR BHI DURIYAN MILNI THI

Edited by tanvia - 13 years ago
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oooh...wats gona hapn now???????????do update sooon n thnx 4 pm!!

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