OS: Don't Leave Me -Arnav & Khushi - Page 2

Originally posted by: -Stutz-

JOT!!!! I love you 🤗 *sorry ami*
Someone finally wrote me an OS (did u owe me.. i forgot😲 otherwise i would have tortured you till u have written it 🤣)
I am SO happy you actually wrote an OS yayayay!

Ok.. coming to the OS!
I LOVED it!!! We actually NEED this
Why don't the CVs show something like this! *shakes head*
You beautifully portrayed the love, faith and understanding a couple should have!
What a confession <3

Awesome OS momzypie 🤗
And oh.. Thank you😆

Originally posted by: -Ayeshaa-

RES - - OMG cant wait to read this :O

K haven't read anything yet, but dude I am in love with how you just layed this story out, the font is so easy to damn read, and your story is not too short and not too long, perfect and professional! reading this after i go and eat dinner <3

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OH EM JEE, this is so beautifully written Jot, intense, touching, sophisticated, and your words are soo heartfelt. I simply loved and enjoyed reading this beautiful OS. Loved it from beginning to end, it started out so intense and tragic, and loved the happy ending you gave to it. Kudos to the way you described Arnav's angst and the heartbroken Khushi. It was very sad and uplifting when it seemed like Arnav wasn't going to turn around and embrace Khushi, it was very heartwarming when he eventually did and gave in to the love he had for Khushi <3 I could seriously feel every emotion through this OS, it was damn heartwarming, fierce and tender at the same time, and very passionate. This was a very empowering OS, a really exquisite scene even CV's wouldn't be able to depict as divine and perfect you have through words.

Originally posted by: shareen

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Wonderful OS, Jot! Beautifully written..I absolutely love how you penned own their feelings. I'm a sucker for emotional stories(with a happy ending?! :P) and thoroughly enjoyed reading it <3