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Posted: 13 years ago
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Heya Guyz..

M here with a new story..

It's a horror story.. I hope I will get a good response'

1st of all its my 1'st attempt for a horror one.. and m zero at it..

And 2ndly its just based on Kriyansh , Swaron and Viha..

Ok here are the Character Sketch

Katherine Kriyajeet Singh Raichand

Kavya Swayamjeet Singh Raichand

Neharika

Vickramjeet Kalsi



Reyaansh Sinshania



Sharonjeet Kaur Rai Prakash


Story Line :

Katherine aka Kriya and Kavya aka Swayam are vampires' they are siblings' they live in a big mansion in a hunted jungle' there parents don't know their whereabouts.. they are missing from 1 year' their parents are totally broken by this as they have just two children and that too are missing..

Sharon, Rey , Vicky and Neha had heard many spooky things about this jungle so that's why they came here for camping as they take these things a joke..and now they have lost their way back'



Index


The Strange Girl

First Step Towards Death

The Handsome Prince




checkout my other works..

~~Betrayed * The End Of Love*~~

""// MeIn ShArAbI \\""



For pms add Nimmi_Devil

Thank You !
-Urs Devil

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Posted: 13 years ago
#2
hey ... jor ka jhatka haye joro se lga ...
smile j tune kya kiya ...


tum to maar hi dalogi ...


dono bai behan vampire bna diye ...( u know i fell from my chair ...)


but it gonna b interesting ...

kyu ki baki stories main rey vampire tha isme kriya ...


itne heart attack mat do main ek booli c bachi hoo ...


but i love the surprise ...




ab to mere se waiot nahi hota update ka ...



or kisne bola to isme zero hey ...


minny heart attack to tune muje dey diya or dekhna bakio ko b jatka lagne wala hay



vo b 440 voltage ka ...



but kya baat kya baat kya baat ...


or dekhna kinjal b ati hogi ... hahaaa
Edited by aromakriyaansh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#3
Sounds interesting wil b waiting 4 d 1st part...
Thanx 4 d pm
Edited by --Kinjal-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice story...waiting for d 1st update !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice concept👍🏼
pm wen u update :-)


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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow continue and pm me when u do thanks for the pm though
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey nimmi...
Congo fr new ss...
Liked der intro...
Stry is strng...
U sud definitely continue...
All d best fr dis...
N please at least fast in updatein dis ss yaar... 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#8
Plz do continue ya... it sounds realy amgzing nd mstly their nams are awsme!!!! lvd it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Kinjal--

Sounds interesting wil b waiting 4 d 1st part...
Thanx 4 d pm


mene bola tha na mere thik baad kinjal ayegi ... m to gud ...
dekha kinjal muje pta tha ...
or smile m first oe mene lanba comment kiya to is baar no tana
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nimmi kahan se aaya yeh idea
its awesome...loved the idea
wow kriya and swayam vampires...interesting
ab jaldi se update karde warna mai tujhe bahut pareshan karungi

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