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Sharon

@viratnmanvi

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Posted: 13 years ago

20 saal ke baad

charcter sketch:

choudary family:

manvi singh choudary: The biggest buisness tycoon Prem singh choudarys youngest, fun loving, chirpy, bubbly, full of mischeif daughter.

jeevika singh choudary: manvis big sister and the oldest daughter of Prem and a loving brother/mother as long with sister for manvi, alsois in love with viren.

Prem singh choudary: the father of two beautiful, fun loving daughetrs, best friends with preet singh vadhera his childhood friend.

Vadhera family:

virat sing vadhera: lives in london sudies law, loves to sing and is very fun loving, handsome, and full of mischeif.

viren singh vadhera: loves jeevika, older brother of virat but he and his family live in chandigarh.

vanshika singh vadhera: mother of virat and viren and is the eldest bahu aslois the beautiful wife of preet.

preet singh vadhera: father of viren n virat, the eldest child in the family, is vanshikas husband, a famous lawyer, and the child hood friend of prem.

the rest of the ehmmbh characters are in the story but i didnt want to put all cuz they are not the main characters.

for short:

virat-v kadambri-k chachi-chachi

manvi-m inder-i chachu-chachu

jeev-j shlok-sh dabbu-da

preet-pr swamini-s

prem-p dadaji-d

vanshika-va badibeeji-bb

viren-vi beeji-b

Note: both families live in chandigarh, also both families are neighboors,but virat is in london and will be coming very soon.

Prolouge:

preet had gotten a call from london from his youngest son virat saying that he is coming the day after tommorrow bcuz he finished law school.preet is so excited he goes n tells everybody n his friend prem and their family. everyone was so excited when they heard this news, but one person was more happy than any one in this room n that was manvi. she coudnt wait to see her love. virat coudlnt see manvi bcuz he was london so he loved to call her, he loved her so much that he would call every hr. and if not than he would text her to see what she was doing. no one knew that virman like each other except virika. everybody knew virika were in luv n had no prob. with it. manvi was so excited that she coudnt wait to see the luv of her life.

tell me if i should continue plzzz...🤔

part 1: page 2

part 2: pg 3

part 3:pg 4

part 4:pg 7

note: pg 8

part 5: pg 9

part 6 and 7: pg 10

IMPORTANT NOTE PLEASE READ: PAGE 10

love Sharon😉

Edited by viratnmanvi - 12 years ago

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Jiiya

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Posted: 13 years ago

Great Concept.. Please Do Continue Soon.. And PM When You Do..

Jiiya <3

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@wanderlust09

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Posted: 13 years ago

ufcourse...do cont soon n pm me wen ya update!!!!😊

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Sharon

@viratnmanvi

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Posted: 13 years ago

thanks i wasn't sure if it was good... thanks...now i will defiantly update but i might be late cuz its the weekend and over that my sister doesn't know that i have an account. so you might have too wait like 2days. if you want pms please add me to ur buddy list.😊

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ehmmbh_luvr

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Posted: 13 years ago

hey ya nyc character sketch😃...wauting eagerly for an update...so continue soon...plz pm me when u update😃

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Veronica

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Posted: 13 years ago

Continue soon please! And pm me when you do!

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sonika sharma

@sonika_virman

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Posted: 13 years ago

hey
It was really good. I really liked it .
PLZ ADD ME IN YOUR PMLIST

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girl_rocks

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Posted: 13 years ago

ha ha widout thinking anything just continue...it seems interesting as they are already in love

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kushi

@divyabhallax

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Posted: 13 years ago

pls continue it is really good,

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Sharon

@viratnmanvi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#10

thank you for ur fabulous comments. so heres part 1 i hope you like it. it took me all night to make it up cuz i coudnt decide what write. thank god my sister left for mahatten other wise i would never be able to write.

part:1

2 days have past by very fast except for manvi she felt as if 2 days was 2 years.so finally the day came when virat will be coming the vadhera house was filled with beautiful decors done by only manvi. it was 9am n virats flight was to come at 10am. the choudary family n the vadhera family except jeevika n manvi went to the air port to pick virat up.

10am:

virats airplane landed and he got out of the airplane he spotted his family. he went up to them and took their blessing he had a smile but he was looking for someone his somone manvi she was no where to be seen.

va:kya hua beta kisko dundreho(looking for).

v:kuch nahi ma vaise sab log yaha pe hain sivai manvi aur jeevika ke kaha hain voh dono.

vir:tumhe itni kyu fikar hai.huh

v: nahi bhai aise koi baat nahi hain bus 20 saal ke baad india aya hu toh unse kabhi dekha ya mila hi nahi so.

viren was about to say some thing when preet said to get inside the car so they could go home and talk peacefully with everyone.

vadhera mansion:

vanshika did virats arti, they came inside n tarun took virats bag. jeevika had come down already its been 30 minutes yet no sign of manvi. virat was about to ask about manvi but then suddenly he heard a laughing noise which sounded so similar. someone rings the bell to the vadhera house and everybody looks toward the door to see who it is was especially virat.

precap:

pr:prem mujhe tujhse kuch baath karne hain

p: haan bol kya hua

pr:mein chatein hu ke meri bari aur chote bete tumhare bari aur choti bete shadi kare.

p: kya mein kuch samjha nahi

pr:matlab ke ye bachpaan ke dosti rishtidaryion mein badal jaye.

kya kyaal hain.

tell me how it was and im sorry if was too awkward or there was any spelling gramars plzz 4give me.