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HEy guys,
I thought, today our wonderful writer will write OS on Premeer, but guess all are busy.. so just me for the first time trying to attempt, very BAd OS....😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
Happy Birthday Prem
Heeerrr...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 Heeerrr...!!!!!!!!!!!!!! prem comes shouting from stares by rubbing his eyes in early morning.
Kya huwa jiju??? - asks Meher..
woh heer kahi dekh nai rahi hai... - PreM
Pata nahi, maine vi nahi dekha hai, yahi kahi hogi.. aaja yen gii...- Meher
hmmm.. yaaa- Prem ( then goes into his room)
talking to himself- pata nahi kaha gayi subha subha, he search for towel to bath and then sees note below the pillow
Prem,
my friend is so much ill and is in hospital, so going to check her out, she needs me, she is my best friend NIsha. so, u please tek care nd Nasta karke hii office jana... have a nice day Hobby...!
Heer
Then Prem anger totally went up in the sky... he threw towel in the bed and was fuming in anger...
Maa- Preemm... prem... tyar ho gaya tuu??
Prem- nahi maa... avi hone ja raha tha..
Maa- Janamdin ki bohut bohut Muba rakho...
Prem- with forced smile... Thank u maa, and touches her feet.
Maa- thik hai tyar ho ke niche aaja, teri man pasand khana banaya hai...???
Prem- Ji... aya...( picks up the towel and leave to bath)
All in dinning Table...
Kul di-- loh aa gaya Birthday boy,... itni deer kyu ki.. raat bhar Heer se sath B'day mana ya kya...??? huh?
All laughs...( prem feels awkrd and sad, bt dont show that)
he takes asirbad of bauji and takes wishes from all and have breakfast and leaves for office...
Office me uuska bilkul maan nahi lagta... he keeps seeing his phone expecting heer will call, coz today he decided he won't call her...
Next Scene
heer with Rajbeer trying to discuss Sammer( the black mailer case with CBI)
whole day went, and heer actually didnt remember its prem Birthday... ðŸ˜)
it was late now, then she sms prem saying that," it will take time, nisha is in OT.. so, i will be late..."
At Night.. Prem in Mood off, reaches home.. and sees the lights off, as he enters, all Starts singing HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO U>>> HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO U>>> HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO U>>> HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO U>>> HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO U>>> HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO U>>> !!!
Then he smiles and thinks , so it was heer Plan to surprise me, the same way i did for her... MAin Vi naa...??? all comes and hugs him, his eyes search for Heer...
Kul di- prem , Heer kaha hai?
Prem- in Shock.. woh... woh... heer ki fren bimar hai so...
Kul di- Oh then, tum dono ne kaal hii akele me birthday mana liya... romanctic tym bitaee hogi naa at 12 am... hmmm...!!!
Prem- ( was speechless) Nahi woh...!!! Haaa...!!!! we celebrated very nicely ( was extremely hurt now, had teary eyes)
Maa- cholo then cake Kato...
All cuts the cake and enjoy but Prem is lost in the world and is very much angry as well...
then Heer Enters hurriedly..??
Kul di- aaree Heer aa gayi...???
Prem Looks behind...
heer is shocked to see all the decoration and all...
before Kul di reaches to Heer, prem goes , then Kul di.. stops,..
Heer- Prem , Yeh sab Kya HAi? kyu celebration ho rahi hai...?? asked in confused way?
Prem- In broken voice and with anger in Eyes, Kuch khas nahi... baas,,.. Its my birthday...!!!!! Thats it...???
prem moves by saying this much...😕
Heer felt like she was thrown from the Up high... She widen her eyes and then... was speechless...
Kul di comes, and ask- baata naa, kal raat kaise celebrate kiya prem ke sath... tell telll... and teases her...
heer was unable to say anything... just smiles with teary eyes...
Party OVer and all went to their rooms, Prem in Study room.. starring at moon...
Heer enters , and stand besides Prem, and says
Heer-By crying Prem, woh...!!! pata nahi main kaise Bhul gayi... woh Nisha Hai naa.. uska ka operation tha.. aur mAi?? prem please look at me... please ... please I am sorry...
Prem- Its Ok... he says and leaves...!!
Heer feels guilty...
after some time... heer comes in Room and then catches Prem's hand and drags him to terrace... Prem keeps saying- kya hua? mujhe kaam karne do...?? chodo mujhe...???
They reaches Terrace, Prem sees, whole Terrace is filled with roses., candles, and there was Bread in the middle of Table... PRem turns to see heer but she is missing again...
HEer...!!!
Then she comes in white Sari...
Prem couldnt take his eyes away from him... she looked absulutly like an angle and beautiful..
heer comes closer, closer and closre.. and hugs him, and says HAPPY BITHDAY PREM..!! m so sorry... please forgive me and lets make this moment Memorable.. please,
Heer moves away drags him toward the table and says" cake toh nahi hai... yeh bread hii cut kardo please... please...
Prem- smiles and then blow the candle and cut the bread.. then heer make him eat that, so do prem...
Suddenly it starts raining...
Heer- offers the hand and says" may i have pleasure to dance with my Handsome Hubby...??
PRem- Nahi woh.. !!
Heer stops him and takes his hand to her waist and start moving with full love in her eyes...
prem also looks at her eyes,
song
HUM HAI ISS PAL YAHA>..
Heer and prem starts dancing... Heer, hugging him, loving him...taking his hand to her waist, kissing his cheeks & neck prem also starts losing him selves...,he too start kissing her neck and cheeks in full mood.., heer starts moaning and enjoying her hubby touch...
Then sudenly Prem LEaves heer... Heer is shocked... TUme kya laga ?? yeh sab karke tum mujhe khus karo gi...?? main maan jauunga...??
Heer- Prem, i am sorry...???
Prem- Soorry... srif Soory...?? Mera Gift KAha hai...?? haa,.,.??? aj tak koi gift diya hai tumne mujhe... main tume diamond ring diya tha,... what u hav?
Heer- by smiling goes closer to him and says" kya chaiye aapko Mr Husband?
Prem- by smiling n making face...?? kya dengi... aap...??? and aapko nahi pata mujhe kya chiye Hota hai?? wht i need...??
Heer- takes her hand around his neck n kisses his lips in passionate way... Prem too starts responding... then they broke up, and heer says, " aur kuch..\? in a seductive way.."
Prem- Bas inta...???
heer- Yaha , terrrace pe isse jyada kuch kar vi toh nahi sakte naa...??
As soon as prem hears that , he picks up heer in his arms and moves towards their room... then was about to place heer in the bed,
herr says- NAhi Prem, ruko.. we are wet... bed gila ho jaye ga...?? let us change... chalo..
Prem leaves heer and heer is about to leave bt prem catches her hand and move closer and say... " Change Kyu karna hai...?? we dont need any clothes now naa...??? Kapdo ki jarurat nahi hai aavi?"
Heer feels shy and becomes red...
Prem Removes her white paluu from her shoulder and start kissing her neck , heer too un botton his shirt and romes her hand in his hair and back... they both are with out clothes under bed sheets, enjoying them selves...
after an hour...heer comes closer to prem by coveing her self in blancket and kisses his chest an says " HAPPY BIRTHDAY PREM"
PREM- ( BY HUGGING HER,) WHISPERS SLOWLY " LOVE u"
hEER SMILES AND THEY BOTH SLEEPS PEACEFULLY...!!!
sORRY SORRY... FOR THIS BAD ONE... SORRY HAA...!!!!! 😳
I thought, today our wonderful writer will write OS on Premeer, but guess all are busy.. so just me for the first time trying to attempt, very BAd OS....😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
Happy Birthday Prem
Heeerrr...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 Heeerrr...!!!!!!!!!!!!!! prem comes shouting from stares by rubbing his eyes in early morning.
Kya huwa jiju??? - asks Meher..
woh heer kahi dekh nai rahi hai... - PreM
Pata nahi, maine vi nahi dekha hai, yahi kahi hogi.. aaja yen gii...- Meher
hmmm.. yaaa- Prem ( then goes into his room)
talking to himself- pata nahi kaha gayi subha subha, he search for towel to bath and then sees note below the pillow
Prem,
my friend is so much ill and is in hospital, so going to check her out, she needs me, she is my best friend NIsha. so, u please tek care nd Nasta karke hii office jana... have a nice day Hobby...!
Heer
Then Prem anger totally went up in the sky... he threw towel in the bed and was fuming in anger...
Maa- Preemm... prem... tyar ho gaya tuu??
Prem- nahi maa... avi hone ja raha tha..
Maa- Janamdin ki bohut bohut Muba rakho...
Prem- with forced smile... Thank u maa, and touches her feet.
Maa- thik hai tyar ho ke niche aaja, teri man pasand khana banaya hai...???
Prem- Ji... aya...( picks up the towel and leave to bath)
All in dinning Table...
Kul di-- loh aa gaya Birthday boy,... itni deer kyu ki.. raat bhar Heer se sath B'day mana ya kya...??? huh?
All laughs...( prem feels awkrd and sad, bt dont show that)
he takes asirbad of bauji and takes wishes from all and have breakfast and leaves for office...
Office me uuska bilkul maan nahi lagta... he keeps seeing his phone expecting heer will call, coz today he decided he won't call her...
Next Scene
heer with Rajbeer trying to discuss Sammer( the black mailer case with CBI)
whole day went, and heer actually didnt remember its prem Birthday... ðŸ˜)
it was late now, then she sms prem saying that," it will take time, nisha is in OT.. so, i will be late..."
At Night.. Prem in Mood off, reaches home.. and sees the lights off, as he enters, all Starts singing HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO U>>> HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO U>>> HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO U>>> HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO U>>> HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO U>>> HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO U>>> !!!
Then he smiles and thinks , so it was heer Plan to surprise me, the same way i did for her... MAin Vi naa...??? all comes and hugs him, his eyes search for Heer...
Kul di- prem , Heer kaha hai?
Prem- in Shock.. woh... woh... heer ki fren bimar hai so...
Kul di- Oh then, tum dono ne kaal hii akele me birthday mana liya... romanctic tym bitaee hogi naa at 12 am... hmmm...!!!
Prem- ( was speechless) Nahi woh...!!! Haaa...!!!! we celebrated very nicely ( was extremely hurt now, had teary eyes)
Maa- cholo then cake Kato...
All cuts the cake and enjoy but Prem is lost in the world and is very much angry as well...
then Heer Enters hurriedly..??
Kul di- aaree Heer aa gayi...???
Prem Looks behind...
heer is shocked to see all the decoration and all...
before Kul di reaches to Heer, prem goes , then Kul di.. stops,..
Heer- Prem , Yeh sab Kya HAi? kyu celebration ho rahi hai...?? asked in confused way?
Prem- In broken voice and with anger in Eyes, Kuch khas nahi... baas,,.. Its my birthday...!!!!! Thats it...???
prem moves by saying this much...😕
Heer felt like she was thrown from the Up high... She widen her eyes and then... was speechless...
Kul di comes, and ask- baata naa, kal raat kaise celebrate kiya prem ke sath... tell telll... and teases her...
heer was unable to say anything... just smiles with teary eyes...
Party OVer and all went to their rooms, Prem in Study room.. starring at moon...
Heer enters , and stand besides Prem, and says
Heer-By crying Prem, woh...!!! pata nahi main kaise Bhul gayi... woh Nisha Hai naa.. uska ka operation tha.. aur mAi?? prem please look at me... please ... please I am sorry...
Prem- Its Ok... he says and leaves...!!
Heer feels guilty...
after some time... heer comes in Room and then catches Prem's hand and drags him to terrace... Prem keeps saying- kya hua? mujhe kaam karne do...?? chodo mujhe...???
They reaches Terrace, Prem sees, whole Terrace is filled with roses., candles, and there was Bread in the middle of Table... PRem turns to see heer but she is missing again...
HEer...!!!
Then she comes in white Sari...
Prem couldnt take his eyes away from him... she looked absulutly like an angle and beautiful..
heer comes closer, closer and closre.. and hugs him, and says HAPPY BITHDAY PREM..!! m so sorry... please forgive me and lets make this moment Memorable.. please,
Heer moves away drags him toward the table and says" cake toh nahi hai... yeh bread hii cut kardo please... please...
Prem- smiles and then blow the candle and cut the bread.. then heer make him eat that, so do prem...
Suddenly it starts raining...
Heer- offers the hand and says" may i have pleasure to dance with my Handsome Hubby...??
PRem- Nahi woh.. !!
Heer stops him and takes his hand to her waist and start moving with full love in her eyes...
prem also looks at her eyes,
song
HUM HAI ISS PAL YAHA>..
Heer and prem starts dancing... Heer, hugging him, loving him...taking his hand to her waist, kissing his cheeks & neck prem also starts losing him selves...,he too start kissing her neck and cheeks in full mood.., heer starts moaning and enjoying her hubby touch...
Then sudenly Prem LEaves heer... Heer is shocked... TUme kya laga ?? yeh sab karke tum mujhe khus karo gi...?? main maan jauunga...??
Heer- Prem, i am sorry...???
Prem- Soorry... srif Soory...?? Mera Gift KAha hai...?? haa,.,.??? aj tak koi gift diya hai tumne mujhe... main tume diamond ring diya tha,... what u hav?
Heer- by smiling goes closer to him and says" kya chaiye aapko Mr Husband?
Prem- by smiling n making face...?? kya dengi... aap...??? and aapko nahi pata mujhe kya chiye Hota hai?? wht i need...??
Heer- takes her hand around his neck n kisses his lips in passionate way... Prem too starts responding... then they broke up, and heer says, " aur kuch..\? in a seductive way.."
Prem- Bas inta...???
heer- Yaha , terrrace pe isse jyada kuch kar vi toh nahi sakte naa...??
As soon as prem hears that , he picks up heer in his arms and moves towards their room... then was about to place heer in the bed,
herr says- NAhi Prem, ruko.. we are wet... bed gila ho jaye ga...?? let us change... chalo..
Prem leaves heer and heer is about to leave bt prem catches her hand and move closer and say... " Change Kyu karna hai...?? we dont need any clothes now naa...??? Kapdo ki jarurat nahi hai aavi?"
Heer feels shy and becomes red...
Prem Removes her white paluu from her shoulder and start kissing her neck , heer too un botton his shirt and romes her hand in his hair and back... they both are with out clothes under bed sheets, enjoying them selves...
after an hour...heer comes closer to prem by coveing her self in blancket and kisses his chest an says " HAPPY BIRTHDAY PREM"
PREM- ( BY HUGGING HER,) WHISPERS SLOWLY " LOVE u"
hEER SMILES AND THEY BOTH SLEEPS PEACEFULLY...!!!
sORRY SORRY... FOR THIS BAD ONE... SORRY HAA...!!!!! 😳
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