Soulmates-THBUTF #2 update page 20

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Soulmates-The heavens brought us together forever
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Welcome to you allšŸ¤— So we have just finished a thread of this FF...and let me thank to all my readers for supporting me in this journey though out...always being so encouraging and always overlooking my mistakes.😳

This is important because this is my first FF,before that I wrote merely few OSs and a SS...So dil se thanx to you allšŸ¤—

Story so far- Soulmates...is a beautiful journey of a married couple who was completely detached...the story brings out some marital affairs which are enlightened by the efforts a wife made for her husband knowing that he is unable to forget his past and move on...even though he loves his past girlfriend after marriage she never loose hopes and never run away from her situations as she knows that this might be appreciated by a wing of society which fights for women-men equality but in real sense it would be nothing but an escapism...!

As Mayank the husband had lost his own dignity,self-confidence and was more like a lifeless creature..he not only hurts nupur but hurts himself more cruelly...his wife Nupur instead of leaving him alone to die in his loneliness seeks to change his soul,by making him to realize the reality, a difference between solely love and lust instead of escapism...!

apparently it portrays emotions,loneliness, jealousy,rage, betrayal,perversion,love-lust swing etc.Finally Mayank undergoes changes and accepts himself,his life and nupur as a part of it.


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My other works:



Mayur OS gallery

Mayur FF Mirror(going on)


MN FF Love Story mey Twist(just Started)


Index

Previous Thread(chapter 1 to 23)


Chapter 24-Page 1

Chapter 25 -Page 7

Chapter 26 -Page 17

Chapter 27-Page 20


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Part-24

The blissful morning

continue from last sequence...

She remained silent,squeezing in his arms,listening his hartbeats under the sky,stars were twinkling dimly as though dint want to disturb them...everything was calm and soft,clearly nature had given them modest ambiance to lost in love...

"Nupur..."he said softly brushing her cheeks.

She squeezed even more,hiding her face in his chest.

"Its too late..I think we should sleep now..."he said holding her.

She dint say anything but stayed same...mayank embraced her and caressing her hairs softly he again said,

"Nupur...have to office tomorrow..lets sleep.." there was a regret plus request in his tone for which she

could'nt deny.Slowly she raised her face upto his and leaning by his side she smiled in herself..."okay!Lets go..." she said and they both climbed down to sleep holding hands.

While Mayank saw her heading to her room,he stopped suddenly.She turned to see him,he was stood there quietly and disappointed,she came near him,holding his head kissed on his cheek,

"Good night Mayank!" said she and turned back to go just then he hold her hand and evading his hesitation he spoke up,

"Do you mind if I see your peaceful sleepy face in the morning..."he said smiling.

How could a girl deny such a beautiful proposal,nupur smiled and came in his room.That was the first time she was entering in his room holding his hand...there was nothing new yet everything seems to be new...because their feelings were new...she was rotating her eyes in the room with amazement when Mayank picked her in his arms...

"Mayank!!!"she exclaimed in surprise.

When he lied beside her,she made a smirk,"you are so behaving like a good typical husband Mayank..."

"does'nt suit me,no?"he said with a sly smile.

She lovingly cupped his face,"I dint mean so..."

He looked at her,her eyes were saying that she dint lying...he lost in them for a while...she felt his intense gaze was making her sensuous..she was loosing her senses...it was difficult to hold even difficult to avoid his intense gaze...she put her head on his chest and tried to control her unexpectedly increased heartbeats...he enclosed her warmly and passionately...they both lost in arms of sleep living the most beautiful dream together.
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Mayank opened his eyes lazily with the first ray of sun...when he realized a soft figure on his chest...opening his eyes fully he found her hand on his chest...he turned to look at her..she was still in deep sleep..seems like she had have such a peaceful sleep after ages...

"she must!" thought he realizing how much she had suffered.

He took a slight turn so that her hand won't fell and broke her sleep...he brushed her cheeks which were glimmering in the light of sunray.He put his hand softly in between ray and her cheek and found her closed eyelids reflecting comfort.He slightly brushed her lip line...that made her a bit conscious and with a moan she took a turn..now he was facing her back.

He slightly heaved up and brushing her hairs,gave a pack on her forehead.Leaving her in arms of sleep he got up for routine work out and jogging.

After when he returned he found her completely fresh making breakfast in the kitchen...her haris were tied on back and a strain was hanging in side touching her cheeks disturbing,she making a face in irritation.Ramgopal their servant was helping her in making breakfast.He came to kitchen and said,

"Ramgopal...go clean my car..."
He made a questionable face,"saab...raghu..."

"is on leave.."he cut him short.Raghu was his driver who used to take cace of his cars.

Ramgopal,like an obedient sevant went out to wash and clean car...after he went nupur glanced at him..he was chuckling without any reason...she knew that he intentionally created that privacy...she pretended to be concentrating in her work...put bread in toaster when he hugged her from back...crawling his hand around her waist...she blushed...he rested his head on her shoulder,"nupur its all like a dream..."

She patted slightly on his cheek,"Mayank..go get ready...lest u'll be late for office..."

"What office nupur!!! lets have a holiday.."he pouted.

She pushed him away and dragged to the door,"NO!!! go to office..work is work Mayank.."

"But..."

"no if no but..go now get ready.."she ordered and he returned back with faded face.
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Mayank was a bit unhappy in his cabin...anisha entered...

"Em!good news...Neil had called a shareholder's meeting for reviving the proposal.."she said excitedly.Mayank raised his eyes,and gave a sly smile.."okay!"he said.
Anisha was startled on his frail response...in worry she asked,"what happened Em!"

He said nothing..and that made her even more worried..."must be some big problem...that's y he is tensed..."thought she and again asked,

"Tell me Em..we will sort out your problem.."

That worked,he raised his face and said sadly,"I want a break Aen...tired of routine life..."

She was stunned,a person who never took a break even during recovery from a deadly accident was asking for a break..it was hard to believe...she gulped hard,

"What...say again!!"she said in astonishment.

"c'mon Aen..everyone needs a break.."he said a bit annoyed on her examination.

"O.K."she said" I'll handle everything here...you can make a plan.."she said still in disbelief.

He looked at her annoyed,dint she want to ask with whom I'll go for a holiday??? but when did you tell her that you want a break to go on a holiday...now tell her clearly..you know you can't plan without her suggestion...

"I mean..a holiday..with...nupur.."he said hesitately.

She jumped on her feet stunned...it took a few minuted to her to believe on what she just heard...then she said,

"Em!is it so..?I mean I am very happy for you...really..."

He smiled and she hugged her tightly..."I am so happy Em!!!" saying so she parted and ranted,

"Lets see...there are many destinations..bangkok,switzerland,paris,london..."

"Aen...I need only one location.."he said in between.

She beemed,"I think Em..you should go on her favorite place..what's say?"

He nodded,"hmmm..nice suggestion..but how do I know where she wants to go..."

Anisha slammed her head,"ufff..Em..do I need to tell you...i mean you used to be a master of ideas...no? c'mon you can do it..."she patted his back and he felt like a soldier ready for operation 'nupur's favorite place'.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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congratsss Ruchi for second thread šŸ¤—well u deserved it dearšŸ¤—
coming to update...it was beautiful and well written
loved their hubby,wifey moments
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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its such a lovely update ..
so loved filled, romantic and amazing... i am loving it...the night the morning indeed was bliss..

and the conversation in offcie was am zing.. loved ur last line

many congrats to u for new thread...
this ff really deserve it ...

keep writing...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Di...
Awesome update
loved it lodss
loved der cute moments in d morning...
Mayank was sooo Adorbale here...
i was totally AWWW...-ed
loved it lodsss...
so now we can hope for MayUr's cute n Romantic moments...
loved it lodsss
love u DI...šŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤—

ps: n Congratulations DI🄳 for d new Thread u Deserve it...ā­ļøšŸ‘ā­ļø

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Congos 🄳

beautiful update indeed!ā¤ļø
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congo.. for your new thread.. dear...

amazing update...
so finally they leading a blissfull husband and wife life..
and planning for honeymoon..
nice part...
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congrats for new thread. beautiful update
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hey congratulation for your new thread...
and about the update...its really a beautiful part...
loved their lovely moments...

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