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inlvwithehmmbh

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Shivrajput52 - Thanks Shiv!! i'll try to soon!

Prem Prem - Thank you!!

khusam - hehehe thanksss!!! i love your updates!!

luv.u.zindagi - hello!! its been super long... glad you enjoyed! will try to do so soon! :)

jasminedayal - awww you were? sorry have been super busy these days have not had the time to do anything at all... you liked it! omg yay! sure will try to as soon as i can! no worries whenever i do i'll definitely PM you :)

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inlvwithehmmbh

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Preeti_Shadia - thanxx! will try to and no problem! :)

AshhLuvVirman - haha yea its months not days... i am here only today will be missing again till monday... thank you! hmm i did not wanna show that as this is something like what i feel might happen and as far as i heard, viren and virat will have a tiff so was keeping that in mind while writing... anw, i'll definitely try to as much as i can... im keeping a little busy still... thxx though!! love ya comment!! encouraging!

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nishi12345

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

please cont soon

waiting for the update

please pm me if u can

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Luv-abhiNikk

@Luv-abhiNikk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

:'). Continue soon feel so bad 4 manvi but anyone in Viren situation would think like dat cuz he dosent know the reason behind her actions. I actuallky belive this could come tru in the actual EHMMBH. I don't even need to ask 4 a pm cuz I already know that I'm bound to get one cuz I'm already added to ur buddy list. Lol.
Amazing nd heart wrenching Post!!!

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Kanwal_chohan

@Kanwal_chohan

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Posted: 13 years ago

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After reading this os
i wish there was a love
Button to press because I just
Loved it please continue it and if u
Do then do pm me please

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virmanforever

@virmanforever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Wow that was very nice please PM me when you update

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..Jessie..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Jit dear firstly welcome back to os land after days!!!!!!!

i was missing your os and works!!!!!

this was completely magical one...i just loved this one!!!!!!

from starting to ending Maanvi's pain was brilliantly portrayed!!!!!!

as always you are an emotional writer who puts the emotion in right place!!!!

the love , the pain ...the anger ... frustration everything was here!!!!

beautifully written!!!!!!!!!!!!!

completely loved it...especially the virman moments were at best!!!!!

jit so so superb one !!!!

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Mahnoor

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

nice...! pm me when updated next part plzzz

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inocence

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

I really wanted sone one to write a os about viren and maanvi ad how that track is going to go!!
i think thats ur story is fantastic!!
Please pm me when u update!!