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Okay, hello guys it's been ages since I've written anything and my other FF is incomplete but I guess I'll stop that there as I have no clue what how shall I continue it.. Anw, hi all I'm here with a OS so I won't have to give any promises of continuing hehe mean me but yup! I read the confirmed article that there are going to be problems between the brothers and our dearest jiju- sali, hearing that this, there were plenty of things running in my mind and this is one of the things I though of.. okay but I need to warn all of you that I've not written anything since 4 months or more and I must say I have no skills at all abt writing so this might be super crapy to many, please bear with me and Do pass all criticisms as I love them! The like button Is always there to be pressed if deserved! So without saying much after saying so much, here you go! Enjoy! I Wrote this like 2 weeks ago but finally got the time to post it..
In this OS,virat knows about the cancer but jeevika and viren are in the dark..
Manvi has come to meet her Di a about 2 weeks after jeevika came back Chandigarh but was still asked to take bed rest despite drastic improvements in her health.
"Di! Kaha Ho app?" "Di kaha ho app?" chanted manvi walking towards her sisters room sounding worried... She was about to rechant her Lines one more time when she was stopped by viren who was looking unusually different... Manvi as usual was very happy seeing her jiju and was about to hug him when viren moved a step away and coldly said " Tum jeevika se nahi mil sakti" , " yaha apni humdardi jatane kyu aayi Ho?" " aur yeh Di kisko bula Rahi ho? Yaha tumhari koi Di nahi hai"...
Manvi was in tears hearing these words form her world best jiju.. She was hurt, his words pierced her heart.. Not knowing why her jiju was saying that, she asked
"jiju aap aaise kyu Bol rehehai? Aur mein apni Di ko kyu nahi mil sakti? Humdardi nahi, mein apni Di ko Apna pyaar dene aayi hoon mein jeevika Di se mafi mangne aayi hoon, wo apni Mannu se thodi naraz hai kyunki uss din maine unki baat nahi mani lekin mein jaanti hoon wo mere baat suneji.." and was about to walk away without waiting for virens reply when a furious viren pulled her back by her arms in full force and said ;
" Maine kaha na Tum jeevika se nahi milogi, aur behen Bhagwan tumhari jaise behen kisiko na de... Apne ap ko jeevika ki behen kehti Ho lekin apni behen keliye Apna thodasa bhi khoon nahi deh sakti? Jeevika jab jeene aur Marne ke beech me zul Rahi thi tabh apni behen ka khyal nahi aaya? Ha? Aur abh jab Bhagwan ki daya se jeevika theek hogayi hai Toh Tum Aagayi apni behen ka hakh jatane! Chali jao yahase aur jeevika se Milne ki koshish bhi mat karna! Samaj gayi abh jao!" screamed viren loud enough for virat to hear and come there... The other members of the vedera had gone out, only jeevika viren and virat were there and now manvi...
These words were as good as poison for manvi, only she knew why she did not give her blood for her sister, she could not afford her sister to have cancer to suffer and to die...She never wanted to be the reason of her sisters pain and problems but now the very opposite was taking place, she was being blamed to be the worlds worst sister, the reason why her di was in pain longer and the reason why her sisters life could have been lost... She started crying and could not control herself she felt very bad, she felt she was the worst sister and now the worst sali according to her one in a million jiju and fell on her knees her head buried in her hands manvi cries inconsolably...
Viren was very mad at manvi, he never thought manvi was so selfish, he added, " khoon ka rishta sirf bolne se nahi hota manvi, aur abh mujhe Pata chal Gaya hai ke Tumhare khoon ke rishte ka matlab, Tum bolne keliye khoon ke rishte se bandhi Ho mere Biwi ke saath lekin abh Pata Chala ke ye sirf sur sirf bolne keliye hai, issliyad mein aaisa kuch nahi hai, Waah manvi Waah!" and walked away from there leaving a shattered heartbroken manvi on the floor.."
Virat saw and heard everything from the back and slowly walked up to manvi after viren left... Virat kneeled on the floor beside manvi who was crying like there was nothing left, she seemed completely heartbroken knowing the reasons for manvi not donating her blood to her Di, virat without saying anything engulfed manvi into his arms... He wrapped his arms around manvi gently stroking her hair and asking her calm down in spite of knowing that nothing was going to work... Manvi hugged him back, her hands clenching on tightly to his Tshirt, and cried... She and let out all her tears in his arms and virat just continued giving her his assuring hug, letting her pour her heart out.. She felt safe there, her soul told her that no one else can understand her like how virat did.."
They sat there hugging each other for approximately 15-20 mins when suddenly virat realized something was wrong, he separated manvi from his hug just to see an unconscious manvi in his arms... He panicked and also knew that she was already very weak and her crying just made it worse, he immediately Carried her in his strong arms and brought her to up to his room and gently lay her on the bed...he called dr manan and informed him that manvi fell unconscious once again worry was clearly visible from his words, dr manan informed virat to give her her medicines and told him that she will regain consciousness after awhile once the medicine would begin to show its effect... He Knew where she kept her medicines and therefore took them out and made her have them while she was still lying down there looking angelic to his eyes... He immediately brights of the thought from his mind knowing it was not the right time to think of all that.. He went and sat down beside her on the bed with his hands on her forehead...
Okay peeps that's abt all for now, there will be one more part to this If there is positive feedback! and that will be the end. As I said above, I like criticisms more than just praises so please be truthful! Looking forward to your precious comments! Thank you!
In this OS,virat knows about the cancer but jeevika and viren are in the dark..
Manvi has come to meet her Di a about 2 weeks after jeevika came back Chandigarh but was still asked to take bed rest despite drastic improvements in her health.
"Di! Kaha Ho app?" "Di kaha ho app?" chanted manvi walking towards her sisters room sounding worried... She was about to rechant her Lines one more time when she was stopped by viren who was looking unusually different... Manvi as usual was very happy seeing her jiju and was about to hug him when viren moved a step away and coldly said " Tum jeevika se nahi mil sakti" , " yaha apni humdardi jatane kyu aayi Ho?" " aur yeh Di kisko bula Rahi ho? Yaha tumhari koi Di nahi hai"...
Manvi was in tears hearing these words form her world best jiju.. She was hurt, his words pierced her heart.. Not knowing why her jiju was saying that, she asked
"jiju aap aaise kyu Bol rehehai? Aur mein apni Di ko kyu nahi mil sakti? Humdardi nahi, mein apni Di ko Apna pyaar dene aayi hoon mein jeevika Di se mafi mangne aayi hoon, wo apni Mannu se thodi naraz hai kyunki uss din maine unki baat nahi mani lekin mein jaanti hoon wo mere baat suneji.." and was about to walk away without waiting for virens reply when a furious viren pulled her back by her arms in full force and said ;
" Maine kaha na Tum jeevika se nahi milogi, aur behen Bhagwan tumhari jaise behen kisiko na de... Apne ap ko jeevika ki behen kehti Ho lekin apni behen keliye Apna thodasa bhi khoon nahi deh sakti? Jeevika jab jeene aur Marne ke beech me zul Rahi thi tabh apni behen ka khyal nahi aaya? Ha? Aur abh jab Bhagwan ki daya se jeevika theek hogayi hai Toh Tum Aagayi apni behen ka hakh jatane! Chali jao yahase aur jeevika se Milne ki koshish bhi mat karna! Samaj gayi abh jao!" screamed viren loud enough for virat to hear and come there... The other members of the vedera had gone out, only jeevika viren and virat were there and now manvi...
These words were as good as poison for manvi, only she knew why she did not give her blood for her sister, she could not afford her sister to have cancer to suffer and to die...She never wanted to be the reason of her sisters pain and problems but now the very opposite was taking place, she was being blamed to be the worlds worst sister, the reason why her di was in pain longer and the reason why her sisters life could have been lost... She started crying and could not control herself she felt very bad, she felt she was the worst sister and now the worst sali according to her one in a million jiju and fell on her knees her head buried in her hands manvi cries inconsolably...
Viren was very mad at manvi, he never thought manvi was so selfish, he added, " khoon ka rishta sirf bolne se nahi hota manvi, aur abh mujhe Pata chal Gaya hai ke Tumhare khoon ke rishte ka matlab, Tum bolne keliye khoon ke rishte se bandhi Ho mere Biwi ke saath lekin abh Pata Chala ke ye sirf sur sirf bolne keliye hai, issliyad mein aaisa kuch nahi hai, Waah manvi Waah!" and walked away from there leaving a shattered heartbroken manvi on the floor.."
Virat saw and heard everything from the back and slowly walked up to manvi after viren left... Virat kneeled on the floor beside manvi who was crying like there was nothing left, she seemed completely heartbroken knowing the reasons for manvi not donating her blood to her Di, virat without saying anything engulfed manvi into his arms... He wrapped his arms around manvi gently stroking her hair and asking her calm down in spite of knowing that nothing was going to work... Manvi hugged him back, her hands clenching on tightly to his Tshirt, and cried... She and let out all her tears in his arms and virat just continued giving her his assuring hug, letting her pour her heart out.. She felt safe there, her soul told her that no one else can understand her like how virat did.."
They sat there hugging each other for approximately 15-20 mins when suddenly virat realized something was wrong, he separated manvi from his hug just to see an unconscious manvi in his arms... He panicked and also knew that she was already very weak and her crying just made it worse, he immediately Carried her in his strong arms and brought her to up to his room and gently lay her on the bed...he called dr manan and informed him that manvi fell unconscious once again worry was clearly visible from his words, dr manan informed virat to give her her medicines and told him that she will regain consciousness after awhile once the medicine would begin to show its effect... He Knew where she kept her medicines and therefore took them out and made her have them while she was still lying down there looking angelic to his eyes... He immediately brights of the thought from his mind knowing it was not the right time to think of all that.. He went and sat down beside her on the bed with his hands on her forehead...
Okay peeps that's abt all for now, there will be one more part to this If there is positive feedback! and that will be the end. As I said above, I like criticisms more than just praises so please be truthful! Looking forward to your precious comments! Thank you!
ps: pardon my spelling errors..
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