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Posted: 13 years ago
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😊hey frndz...this my first attempt at writing so plz excuse the mistakes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

this happens when khushi is trying to attempt suicide...and takes place after frday's episode...it has a total of 10 parts...9 of which I am posting rite now...and the last part will b cmg up soon!!!!!!
(i noe that this is very unlikely to happen...bt still...)

ENJOY!!!!!!!!

WHEN THE TRUTH HURTS...

ASR: Khushi kaha ho tum?????he bhagwan...ye ladki muzhe pagal kar dengi...

(comes into the room and sees a piece of paper on the table...)


" Humari akhri vasiyat...hum poore hosh aur awajon mein yeh likhte he ki humne apni marjee se khudkhushi karne ka phaisla liya hai...kisi aur ke hatoh se marne se achcha he ki hum khud apni jaan de dein..."
Khushi kumari Gupta Singh Raizada...


ASR: WHAT THE...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


**________________________________________**



KHUSHI: Hey devi mayya...hum aa rahe hai...amma babuji humari liye jalebiya bana kar rakhna...

(closes her eyes and is about to jump off...when suddenly she feels a grab in the opposite direction and she is in a pair of warm arms...she could smell the sweet perfume which often intoxicated her...she was in no doubt that she was in the arms of arnav singh raizada...)

KHUSHI: (eyes still closed) chodiye hume...kyu aaye aap hume bachane jab ki aap khud hame marna chahte hai?????

(she opens her eyes and stares into those soft brown eyes which were staring at her in disbelief)

ASR: Khushi tum pagal ho gayi ho kya????mein tumhe kyun marna chahunga...aur marna chahta bhi to tume bachata kyun????sach mein khushi tum din by din pagal hoti ja rahi ho...

KHUSHI: Hum pagal nahi hai...hum jante hai ki aapke kundali mein dash hai...ki aapke pehle biwi ki maut higi...isliye aap hame markar dusri shaadi karna chahte hai...hai na???

ASR: Wat the hell , KHUSHI KUMARI GUPTA SINGH RAIZADA???????? mein bhagwan pe bhi wishwas nahi karta...to ye stupid kundali mein kyun karoonga...mein tumhe marna nahi chahta...aur nahi doosri shaade karna chahta hoon...samjhi tum?????

(Khushi stared those brown eyes full of concern...ya she could now believe that he didnt want to kill her...bcoz his eyes said so...)

KHUSHI: Par phir aap ne...
(she couldnt believe this was the person who had made her life hell!!!!!)

ASR turned to go...he could see in her eyes what she was going to ask...

KHUSHI: rukiye...to phir kyun ki aapne humse shaadi????aaj apko hume batana hi padega Arnavji...

(asr saw the tears brimming in her eyes...so her rosy lips quivering as she said Arnavji...n he replied without thinking...)

ASR: Kyunki mai tumhare aur shyam ke rishte ke bare mein janta hoon...



HEY!!!!!how was it...a bit lame...i noe...bt the nxt part is awesome scroll down!!!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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HEY!!!!! guyz...here goes the nxt part!!!!!!!
its totally unexpected!!!!!!! plz like and comment!!!!!!

WHEN THE TRUTH HURTS...
(part 2)

KHUSHI: rukiye...to phir kyun ki aapne humse shaadi????aaj apko hume batana hi padega Arnavji...

(asr saw the tears brimming in her eyes...so her rosy lips quivering as she said Arnavji...n he replied without thinking...)

ASR: Kyunki mai tumhare aur shyam ke rishte ke bare mein janta hoon...

***____________________________________________________________________***

She was shell shocked...she couldn't believe what she heard...
Was it possible ...was it possible that she had not known her husband's real feelings...deep down maybe yes...but this?????
This was beyond imagination...

She flung her arms around his neck...and sobbed unashamedly...

KHUSHI: ARNAVJI!!!!!!!!!! hume yakin tha ki aap shaitan nahi rajkumar hain...!!!!!!
Aapko pata nahi hume ye baat sunke kitna sukun mila hai...hum kabse ye baat aapko batana chahte the...lekin hum darte the ki agar aap humpe vishwas nahi karenge!!!!!!!!!!
Ab hume koi darr nahi...kitne dino se hum uss nalayak aadmi se dur bhag rahe the...ab uski koi jaroorat nahi...
Hum milkat usse sabak sikhayenge!!!!
KKGSR aur ASR se panga lekar bahot galat kiya he uss Shyam ne...

Use kya laga humse mangni karke aur buaji se meethi meethi bateein karke... vo hume shaadi karne par majbur kar denge????

Achcha hua ki havan ke uss din hume unki asliyat pata chali varna na jante huye bhi hum aapni aur Anjali di ki jindagi kharab kar dete...

Hum uss din Anjali ji ko batane aaye the...par vo uss par bahut yakin karti hai nur beinteha mohabbat bhi...

Hum ne shyam se kaha bhi...ki vo Anjali Di ko chchod dein...issme di ki hi bhalai he ...kyunki vo insaan unke aur unke bachche ke layak nahi hai..."

( Arnav listened...and listenend and listened...he couldn't do anything else...he was dumbstruck...)

AND he realised for the third time in his life that HE HAD LOST HIS LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



HEY!!!!how as it...wasn't khushi's reaction unexpected?????
we'll ignore that I HATE YOU and Tumne jo chot muzhe pohochaye wala scenes!!!!!!!!

part 3 cmg up in 20 mins...


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great OS , Please continue and PM me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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chib awasom up dat keep it up
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Posted: 13 years ago
#5
HEY!!!!!!!!!part 3 is here...
bt plzzz yaar like and commment...there have been so many views bt not a single like or comment!!!!!!plz frndz!!!!!!!even if you don't like it...do comment and suggest improvements...

WHEN THE TRUTH HURTS...
Part 3...
ASr stared into those brown eyes which stared at him imploringly...he found it hard to believe that he had suspected her...)

KHUSHI: kya hua arnavji????
aap hume aise kyun dekh rahe hai???
(She suddenly realises their close proximity...she gets shy lowers her eyes and her cheeks blush crimson...)

(she tries to turn away...)

BUT, for once Arnav holds on to her and whispers...

ASR: KHUSHI...

_______________________________________________

KHUSHI: Hmmm...??????(she looked up...she hardly knew her happipness...maybe all would be all rite now...her life which was disturbed by this man...would be put straight by him himself!!!!)
And she was thinking that he wanted to kill her...she felt a smile curving around her lips...Oh yes!!!!!she was back !!!!!)

Arnav looked how her mischievous eyes twinkled and her tiny lips threatening to burst into laughter...yes ...she was relieved no doubt...he managed to stammer out...

ASR: Khushi...ghar chalte hain...


When driving back he couldn'y hold back his tears...1st hs maaa,then his di...and now KHUSHI...he ahd failed to protect all the three women in his life!!!!!!!

and in the case of Khushi he himself...his own inner monster had been resposible 4 destroying his faith in Khushi...his deep feelings for Khushi...

KHUSHI: Aap ro kyun rahe hain Arnavji??????(She lifted her hand and wiped away his tears...like he had done on the holi day! He shuddered at her warm touch)
Aap chinta mat kijiye...hum bilkul theek hai aur aapse naraj bhi nahi...aur hum di ke sath kuch bura nahi hone denge...!!!! Aur hah...hum aapko satayenge bhi nahi...😛(her mischievous grin!!!)

Arnav looked at her ...she was smiling after such a long time!!!!he promised himself that he wud never let that smile go away from her face...YES!!!!he could do that much...and he would nake upto her for the past three months...even if it took him an entire lifetime!!!!!!!!
ASR: Khushi agar tum chaho...to hum kuch aur din yaha rhe sakte hain... :)


HEY!!!!!!!!how was it...now its redemption time for arnav...bt will he succedd or will khushi know the truth before he got a chance to explain himself...??????
nxt part cmg sun!!!!!!
hey i have sent pm to those all who commented...those who want future pm's budy me plz...!!!!!!




Edited by chib - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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HEY!!!!!!!!!!!!PART 4!!!!!!

WHEN THE TRUTH HURTS...

They were back at the RM...many days since that fateful day!!!
the dfay was a turning point in both of their lives...a hopeful one for khushi and a despairing one 4 arnav...

Khushi was feeling very awkward ever since the came bk...4 d 1st tome in her life she wanted this marriage to last...
arnav followed a monotonous routine these days...in his free time he would do wat he could to make Khushi happy...he knew he could not redeem his mistake...bt he tried his best...

and on the other hand he could do nothing about the fact that Shyam was still in the house...

he and khushi had decided that they wud wait until the baby was born...

seeing khushi happy made him happy...bt he knew this was wrong...they were struggling to find a meaning to their relationship...to give it a name...there wa s void in between them...which Khushi was to shy to bridge and Arnav reluctant...as he knew he wud break her heart once again when she knew the truth...


He dreaded that day!!!!!!


kk i noe a bore part...so m typing the nxt part rite away!!!!!!
PLZ COMMENT AND LIKE!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WHEN THE TRUTH HURTS...
(part 5)

One morning...

KHUSHI: Hey...devi mayya ...aapka lakh lakh shukar hain ki aapne hume arnavji jaise pati diye...vo humara kitna khayal rakhte hai...

SHYAM:(he had been hiding and watching khushi do the pooja...)
Kyun Khushiji...aisa kya hai Arnav main jo hum mein nahi?????

KHUSHI: Aapki himmat kaise hui unse aapni tulna karne ki????

SHYAM: Kyun Khushiji????humne kam se kam humare jasbato aur iradon ke bare main kabhi jhoot nahi bola!!!!

KHUSHI: Aap kehna kya chahte hain?????
(she always got scared when shyam satrted talking in riddles...it often meant that he had done something bad again and was trying to trick her into saying or doing something...)
Aur waise bhi humare shaadi mein dakhalandaji karne waale aap hote kon hain?????

SHYAM: SHAADI!!!!!!!!!!
Aap iss saude ko shaadi kehte hai...????
Kya aap janti nahin ki arnav ne aapse jabardasti shaadi kyun ki?????

KHUSHI: (she was very confident...she knew afterall...he had told her himself hadn't he...and she had seen the truth in his eyes...he believed in what he had said...)

Haan hum jante hain...aap jaise ghatiya insaan se bachane ke liye...hume khd bataya hain inhone...aur hume unpar poora vishwas hain...

SHYAM: nahi khushiji...kis galatfami main reh rahi hai aap???? arnav ne aapse shaadi aapne di ki shaadi aap jaise ghatiya ladki se bachane ke liye ki hain...
Saale sahab ne hume uss din chchat par dekh liya tha Khushiji...aur aapko yeh kehte huye bhi sun liya tha ki main ranisaheba ko chchod doon...

KHUSHI:(no...no...nno...he was lying this couldn't be true...her arnavji had doubted her..??????had thought that she would break anjali ji's marriage!!!!no this wasn't possible...)
KYA???????(she was shattered...)

SHYAM: haan...aur wo aapse bahot nafrat bhi karte hain...kyunki humne unhe bataya ki aap bhi humse BOHOT pyaar karti hai...kart hain na aap KHUSHIJI??????

KHUSHI:(nooo!!!!!!!!!!!!she screamed...words failed her...no sound came out of her mouth ...she was drowniong in the depths of despair...her heartstarted aching!!!!she remembered all those moments spent with arnav!!!!no!!!she thought he couldn't betray her so much!!!!!!!!!!)

she turned to hid eher face...and there he was...her perfect dream...standing on the stairs shocked...he had heard all that had happened...she questioned him with her eyes...

AND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...she collapsed...
She had seen the guilt,the acknowledgement of his mistake in his repentant eyes!!!!!!!!



how was it????????plz comment and like!!!!!
nxt part cmg tonight or tomo.morning...pakka!!!!!
HAVE A NICE DAY!!!!!!!!!!
Edited by chib - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Interesting story.👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I am enjoying it very much.
Well done.
Continue soon.
Thanks.😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its nice... plz continue...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it
do pm me wen u update

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