virman ss too close yet too far part 2 updated

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey surprise surprise i am back with another ss on virman. so guys sit back and enjoy. as i said in my before ss your views/opinions/comments are welcomed.

here is the prologue

too close yet too far.

⭐️prologue:⭐️

manvi: i trusted you virat. i trusted you with my life. but all you gave me was betrayal. i still cant beleive how i fell for you. a guy with no heart. i thought our love was real. the care you had for me was real. but i was wrong.you got what you wanted. hope you are satisfied. goodbye. i am out of your sight and out of your life. and finally you WON

character sketch :

virat singh vadera: a fun loving guy. total prankster. hearthrob of the st louis college.a lover boy. girls are always fida over him. but he is a hard fish to catch.

manvi choudry: sweet girl next door. believes in living her life to the fullest. trusts people blindly whom she loves.

more characters will be introduced later.

part 1 page 4
part 2 page 8
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Zehnaseeb. thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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res

unres...

Loved it Khush...OMG Virat's a prankstar... it's gonna be fun...

n 1st one to comment...

thnx a lot for the pm... n always want pm..

BTW... can u gimme the link of ur other SS/ FF?😳

Edited by Asha_ArSha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey khush
Loved the concept . Add me in your pmlist
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asha_ArSha

res

unres...

Loved it Khush...OMG Virat's a prankstar... it's gonna be fun...

n 1st one to comment...

thnx a lot for the pm... n always want pm..

BTW... can u gimme the link of ur other SS/ FF?😳


thanks for liking it. here is the link
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG...if d prolouge is dis much osum den what will be d chapters...
Khush i m eagerly waiting 4 yr nxt update so plz cntinue soon.and
thanx 4 d pm
keetha... thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that sonds interesting will be waiting 4 ur next part and dont 4get to pm me😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loving the concept!
please continue it asap
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for the pm dear
Omggg awesome
Cant wait till the chapter updates
Eagerly waiting sweety! Muah
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Posted: 13 years ago
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good concept but i hope it doesnt take long for misunderstandings to clear! lmao i think so far ahead but pm me the treasure hunt been waitin for that eagerly n this 1 to!!!!1
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww the concept seems fabulous and i luv the title...
After reading the prologue it seems as if something dhamakedaar is guna happen but whatever happens please make it happy ending
Virat a prankster ufff loooling forward to that
Continue soon and pm me also quickly update ur other SS treasure hunt one and pm me when u do

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