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PART-44

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i dont know..whether ive done a gud part..i'm posting this ..i typed 2day in full pressure.3200+in word..a lengthy one.hope u all like this part..n waiting for ur comments..

geet ruko..
.dadi noticed geet crying.her swollen lips broken bangles...n she saw maan standing calling her.
.his hands brushed his hair back 
he punched the wall in frustration..
dadi was angry at what she saw..
she couldnt believe her grandson can stoop low..
she moved to him to give a bash for his mis behavior..but was stopped by her relative..
maan  left the place from there..

 

dadi was waiting for the guests to retire to bedsā€¦geet went

 to outhouse..maasi n geet chatted for a while..geet was

 looking at her mehendi..maans name in that..

geet..

ji maa..

ur husband will love u more.. see the dark colour of  ur

 mehendi

geet blushed.thinking of maan..

maasi slept..

geet thought went to  maan..his behavior..

what if someone have seen themā€¦his reputation will be

 spoiled..why he is not thinking about itā€¦what will we say

 before the relativesā€¦ye dev ki shaadi par bhi asar pad

 saktha hai..

but inside she liked his love..his longness to be near her..his

 hungry kiss..she too missed it..

thinking about him..she slept soon..

 

 


here in km



dev went to his room along with his friends n slept..but the

 one who could not sleep was dadiā€¦

dadi's st:where I went wrong?i thought I've brought them

 with all basic culture .but,maan proved me wrong..i ve lacked

 somewhere..he is the one who saved geet from all the sinful

 world..then,how could he commit the same sin..why is he

 taking advantage of a lonely girl..that too who is under our

 shelter..chi..sharam aathi hai muje maan ko apna potha

 kehne ki..poor girl geet..she was crying ā€¦she is handling his

 torture alone..she couldn't voice his misbehaviour..may be

 she is thinking about our reputation..or may be its her

 gratitude towards our familyā€¦or thinking about devs

 marriage..atleast she must have said to me..ab mein kya

 karun..why maan is looking at another girl..when he has an

 own family..how could he forget ,meera is his wife..how

 couldhe be dishonest to his relationā€¦

she paced in her room restlessly...then she decided to talk to

 maanā€¦

dadi came to maans room..she saw maan taking care of

 meera..he was giving her tablets n water..he tugged the

 spread n kissed her forehead..

goodnight meera..

good night maan..

dadi knocked the door to get their attention..

dadi..aap..is waqtā€¦

haan..wo..mein..

she stammered to form words..

she was confused..maans way of care towards meera ..if he

 is happy with her,how can he think about geet..am I

 hallicinating things..was it real?or my misunderstanding..

dadi..what happened..why are u looking so tensed

dadi smiled..

kuch nehi meera..bas neend nehi aarahi thi...came to see

 you..how are you..how is ur health now..i was busy n

 couldn't ask u..from morning..

im fine dadi..maan is taking care of me so well..nothing to

 worry..u have 2 take rest dadi..2morrow is the happiest day

 for u..

maan took his lappy n sat in the bed..he was checking

 mails..dadi saw them both..

it will not be fair if I ask now..what will meera thinkā€¦I'll talk

 to maan when he is alone..

yes beta..tomorrow all my responsibilities will come to an

 end..if I have the luck 2 see my great grand childrens..there

 will be no wish left to me..then I'll depart the earth happily..


dadi..dont talk rubbish..u will live long..till ur great grand

 childrens childrens marriage too..

I'm not so greedy to ask long life maanā€¦i wish a normal

 life.want to leave this world with same honour n pride,that ur

 dadaji createdā€¦n 2 c ur childrens n devs..bus yehi kwaish

 thi.. achabeta gud night..bohut der hogayi..aaplog bhi

 sojayiye..


Ji dadi..just checking mailsā€¦will sleep..you go n take

 rest..gud night..

Gud night..


Meera looked at dadi in confusion..

Maan

Hmm.yes meera

Dadi came her to ask something else..but she went without

 asking it..

Hmmmā€¦I too think the same.

Par kya hosaktha hai..

Idkā€¦ok..its too late..u too need restā€¦sleepā€¦gud night..

Maan closed his lappy n kept aside..

Gud night maan..

Meera slept..



Maan took his mobile n sent

sorry geetšŸ˜Š

 gud night ā¤ļø

msg to geet and slept..


 

the next day morning..

marriage day..

all were busy..

rajji n brij arrived..brij was happy..he got a character roll in a

 filmā€¦he was paid advance too..

raji n geet were in cloud nineā€¦he thanked meera so much..

meera was also happyā€¦then,she introduced them to her

 maasi..maasi was surprised n shocked to see both brij n

 rajjiā€¦they looked like their father..they both took her

 blessingsā€¦they both went to outhouse freshed up n came

 to join hands in marriage work...dadi tried to get maan

 alone..but he was too busy n was always surrounded by

  peoples,servants n staffs of KCā€¦


adi,pinky,sasha all were there helping n enjoying the

 marriageā€¦sasha burnt in jealousy seeing the importance

 given to geet even in KM..the servants of KM too asked geets

 opinion for all..meera was sitting in the sofa n ordering the

 workers to follow her instructionā€¦for important things she

 called rajji or geetā€¦

maan got a call from the transport.

Sirji..u told us to take the delivery from government

 office..here they are not delivering the goods..wat 2 do sirji..

Give to the manager..

Mr.sambath..maan here..wats the problem..

mr.khurana..the cheque u transferred has not yet

 cleared..without getting the amount I cant deliver the

 material..

do u know whom u r talking to?

sry sir..i'm a govr.employee..i've to follow the rules..if its my

 own material I would give to u without any hesitationā€¦im

 extremely sryā€¦

maans st:It was an urgent material,we need it..if it

 delays,the material may be supplied to other firm..

Ok..u held the material..i'll look after the chq..why it has not

 transferred yet?u can do it na..only for few hrs..

Sure sir..i can..

Maan called adi ..n asked him to get the details from KC n go

 to bank n clear the chq immediately..

Adi thought of taking pinky with him..

But pinky was busy with rajji n meera..

Meera saw sasha who was just simply chatting n looking the

 decors..so,she told sasha to accompany adi to kC..

Adi was opening KC with the keysā€¦the security came to

 sasha n gave a fileā€¦

Whats this?

Mam this is medical reports of our staffsā€¦a staff came n gave

 it yesterday evening..but all have left at that time..

Ok..


She went inside when adi entered KC..he was searching

 details of cheque paid..sasha was looking at reportsā€¦

she found one report missing ..

She called the hospital..

Mam,I'm calling from Khurana constructions..i think u have

 missed 1 report..

No mam..u r saying about ur staff geet na..dr.naina has

 informed us to give the report to her only..may be she have

 got it now..our staff has taken the report with her to give to

 her..

Why u r giving reports of geet alone

Idk..mam..u have to ask naina mamā€¦

Sasha kept the phoneā€¦

In all places geet is treated specially...shit..i hate her..


Adi came out with details of chqā€¦


Whats the prob adi?

Koi bewakuf hai..typed public co as pvt co..so the bank has

 not passed the chqā€¦

I've informed maan sir..he has sent the chq thru another staff

 to bankā€¦the problem is solved..so lets go to KM..


Sasha found boring in km..so she said..

Sir I'll come at evening..i've an important work..i forgot..

Ok..as u wish..

They both went to their destination places..

 

In Km

evening

Again all were busy..at the last moment of preparations to

 leave to naina's house.

Dev was sitting in horse..in a sandal coloured heavy work

 sherwaniā€¦maan was in cream coloured sherwani..both were

 competing each otherā€¦brij was given a new sherwani by

 meera..he was wearing itā€¦

The relations askedā€¦

Its time lets moveā€¦

Waiting for the girlsā€¦

There was a sudden silenceā€¦.n all looked at the stairs..only

 to see three gorgeous girls descending the stairs in same

 colour lehenga..a combination of red n green with heavy

 jardosi worksā€¦thre of them competing each otherā€¦dev

 lifted his flowers which are hiding his view to look wat all are

 seeingā€¦he looked maan,who was lost in the beautiful looks

 of them..specially geet.

Savithri..1 is ur DIL..who are the other 2 girls..why u r giving

 importance to them by giving same dress like ur bahu..

Savithri cant differenciate geet or rajji..geet has looked after

 her like her own family when she was ill..

Wo bhi humare gharki betiyaan hai..like meera..

Brij was overwhelmed with the importance given to his

 sisters in their house..



Meer specially made their dress designed by a famous

 designerā€¦she herself choosed the matching jewelleries for

 all the threeā€¦n today meera herself dressed up geet n rajjiā€¦

geet looked like a brideā€¦

Meera came to dadi..

Dadi.how are we looking?asked rajji..

Dadi placed kala tika behind the ears of three girls..

Kisika nazar na lagein..u 3 r looking stunningā€¦see the

 baaratā€¦all looking at u 3 onlyā€¦


Geets eyes searched maanā€¦when their eyes met, she

 lowered her gaze in shyā€¦he was drinking her beauty

 through his eyes..

Ok..lets moveā€¦

Sasha ko tho kehneki zaroorat nehiā€¦

her body was fully in fire of jealousy..

The band with baarat moved to naina's house..



They were greeted by her family n relatives..n the marriage

 rituals startedā€¦

Sasha went to nainas room..but she was ready to mandap..

n her friends were there teasing her.


One staff came to naina ..

Sasha guessed her as a nurse..she has seen her before..

What jenifer..

Dr..geets report is with me..ur guess was correct.will u like to

 see now.where should I give u..here or after marriageā€¦

Sasha saw the change of expressions in nainas face..shockā€¦šŸ˜²jenifer took the report from her bag n gave it to nainaā€¦

Pandit is calling the bride down..

Not now..later..

But be careful..u must give it to me only..i don't want others

 to know about this..

Ok..drā€¦jenifer kept the report again inside her bag..

sasha's st:Zaroor isme kuch heiā€¦sasha..u can do it girlā€¦

get the report from herā€¦

Sasha followed jenifer n took the back seat of herā€¦

All were busy seeing the marriage ritualsā€¦sasha took a week

 moment when jenifer was busy chatting with another

 staff,keeping the bag asideā€¦she opened the bag n took the

 report n read it..

Sasha was too shocked first..

Then her jealousy mind n plan of making her fall before allā€¦

she thought this is the perfect moment to humiliate her..

n spoil that dev or maans image along with her..

they treat her specially na..now lets see..

the consequences for giving importance to geetā€¦

Be ready khurana n family..u too dr..she smirked..

Sasha went n stood among with the kc staffs..

she passed the paper to one of her chipkuā€¦

n she passed to another.. 

the paper was moving from one hand to other..

now lets see geet how can u escape from this ..

Dev n naina were exchanging warmala..

the rituals continued with dev filling naina's mang ,saath

 phere n finally he tied the black beads around her neck..


Dev n naina looked at meera,who was in tears of joy

 ..thanking god to be a part of their marriageā€¦

next to meera maan stood with geet n rajji n brij...

all were showering flowers on them..

the other side was nainas family with meeras maasi n dadi..



There was a sudden hustle bustle between the guestsā€¦

the people near the mandap looked at the peoples talking to

 themselves..they hardly heared only the name of geet..

finally the paper was in hands of pinky..she stood rooted n

 the paper fell down.

adi took the paper n he too stood rootedā€¦

Dadi called adi..

Adi..

Whats that?

Dadi..kuch nehi..he tried to hide the paper..

Sasha changed her voice n said..

Why adi sir..do u doubt dev or maan sir behind this..bcoz

 only they 2 were close males to geet..


All came from stage to floor..what are they mentioning?

Dadi took the paper from himā€¦

she read the contents n was shocked..

She went to maan..n slapped him harder..ā€¦

Dadiā€¦

maan looked at dadiā€¦not knowing the reason for her slap..

so were othersā€¦


all were numb

What will u say to this maan..im ashamed of myselfā€¦

is this what I taught uā€¦

She threw the report on himā€¦.

Maan took the paper n read it..

Geet s report of pregnancy..positive..3 weeks...

Maans mind went blank..

Geet is pregnant..it means..im going to be a father..

he turned to geet..his face was in much excitementā€¦

he immediately touched her bellyā€¦

Our baby..he said..he did not care for the world..

it was his happiest moment..

Meer took the paper ..n read it..

she had a mixed emotions..happy shock.excitement

naina has guessed.with the hospital paper..its geets report..

n said to dev..geet is pregnant

Dadi pulled maans shirtā€¦

geet is pregnantā€¦How can u maan..how can u do this? I saw

 her crying yesterday.u misbehaved with her...tum ithne gir

 sakthi ho meine socha nehiā€¦

no dadi..i didn't..he whispered..


At the same time,Brij looked geet,who was looking at ground

 which confirmed dadis words..

ā€¦geet was happy..she is pregnantā€¦but,the way it came out

 before the world n the questioning n accusing eyes of all on

 maan n herā€¦she don't know how 2 reactā€¦or what to say..

so she kept mum.


Brij n Rajji was shocked..brijs anger grew no boundaryā€¦

Geet..ek ladki keliye izzat se zyaadha kuch nehi haiā€¦

n u r standing alive infront of me..i'll kill uā€¦..

geet looked at him with scary n guilty eyes.. 

brij was about to hit her n dadi was to slap maan againā€¦

maasi stopped dadi n meera came between brij n geet..

Brij,do u think ur sister will stoop low..is this the trust u have

 on her..is this the trust u have on ur bringing upā€¦will geet

 give her to a man other than her husband?dadi u 2 think

 maan low..he can touch a girl other than his wife?

Dadi turned her face from maan in disguistā€¦

What are u trying to say meeraji..she has spoiled ur

 family..chiā€¦.i cant even say..with ur husband..

n u r supporting her..


Sasha was busy watching the scene..having funā€¦

one thing was confirmedā€¦it is maans child..

Yes im supporting her,bcoz she is maans wife..not meā€¦

n this baby is symbol of their married life..not like u all

 thinkā€¦

This was an unexpected truth..all looked at meera in shock.ā€¦

Meera..are u in senseā€¦how can it beā€¦u r maans wife..

No dadi..i was maans wife..

But..i cannot understand what u r saying..kya matlab hai

 tumhara..

Sry dadiā€¦meine aap se ye baath chupayi..I only made them

 married..

Why meera..

Bcoz,bcoz..

she cant give the heir to ur family..said naina...

so only she took this decision..

sry dadi.we kept this truth hidden from you.. said dev.

dadi looked at all blank..

you all didn't think to say things to me..

except me all know the truth..


brij came infront..

u can say anything.u all may say many reasons...but,I cant

 accept it..how dare u geet..

u hide ur marriage from me..

he slapped her..she was about to fall,maan held her before

 she touch the ground..

maan hided geet behind him..

don't come inbetween us..mr.khurana..

if u want to hit her..hit meā€¦I cant see anyone harming her

 ..that too now..when she is carrying my childā€¦i'm equally

 responsible for this situation..

geet came infront of maan..

bhai,u have full rights on me..if ur anger will reduce by hitting

 me,hit me..



meera came  to brij..

will u all pls stop it..when maneet themselves doesn't know

 about their marriage..how can she say you..or inform u..

what?

Yes..i took sign in the marriage papers without their

 knowledge..n when I said it was too late for them to

 recognizeā€¦n I only made them accept this relation..

Meera was breathing heavy..naina came n hold her..

Meerā€¦no..u r getting too emotional..

1 minute naina..pls..ek aahri kaam bakhi hai..


Dadi ,brij n raji looked at them ..they were too shocked to

 here about allā€¦n the things happened without their

 knowledge..


 one side dadi was happy to hear that maan is

 truthful n the baby is only by their honest relation..baby..its

 her great grand childā€¦it gave an unknown happiness to her

 now..but,she was feeling sad for meera..how she made the

 relation beyond imaginationā€¦its not a easy one to marry

 herhusband to another girl ..


Brij..on rakshabandan u said u will give me the gift whatever I

 ask..will u give me now,whatever I ask u..i know u keep ur

 words..today im asking that will u give meā€¦for this sister..


I never forget my given words..


Will u give ur sister geets hands happily to maan..

whole heartedly..u must accept him as ur jiju..


Brij stood there lost in his thoughts..

he was anger at geet for hiding the truth..

her marriage..her pregnancy.


..as meera said if geet accepted the relation bcoz of meera..

n now he must keep his promise of giving meera what she

 asksā€¦

Dadiā€¦

Hmm..

Can u give me one permission now..plsā€¦

U have done all things of ur own meera..why u r asking me now..

Dadi said in hurt..

I'm sry dadi..meine aapka dil dukhaya..but,its only ur wishā€¦

which made me to take this step..ur wish to see the child of

 maan..i looked for so many girls dadi..but there was no

 diamond like geet.gold at heart..caring like a mother.sister

 friend...so only I choose her as ur bahu to replace my place..

ā€¦to be mother of maans childā€¦pls dadi..ek aakri kwaish hai

 meri..i request u..

What?meera

I want maan to marry geet before this society now with all rituals


Maaneet looked meera in shock..

I want this society to look maans child with respect..

Dadi acceptedā€¦

Maasi hugged meeraā€¦

Meera took geet to mandap..

didi..why are u doing this..u r his wife n will remain..

dont do this to urself..muje shadi nehi karni hai..

then why u accepted this relation geet..

i accepted this relation,bcoz i want u to be happy..

u have done many help to me..i couldnot repay you...

but when u asked the favour of baby ..i accepted..

i will give u this child n leave u all forever..

i dont want to take ur place ..

Geet..u r not taking my place..its never mine..n u know it very

 well...meri kasam..agar tum kuch karna chathi tho chup chap

 beto..

Par di.

Meer..ye sab zaroori hai kya?

Haanā€¦for ur child..

maan moved to dadi..

n geet too came near her..

i'm sorry dadi...for breaking ur trust..

dadi..what happened was never in my thought..

i went on with my situation..i love geet..its true..

meera was never my wife dadi..

she was always my best friend..n will be..

noone can take her place..

mein kya karun dadi..friendshipko patni ka naam dediya..

par man se apna nehi paya..

par meine poori koshish ki ye rishta nibane ki..i swear dadi..

it was only meera who made me realize..geet is my love..

when she said im married to geet without my knowledge 

n the reason behind it..i accepted geet..

tell me dadi what i did was right or wrong..

now there is no time to talk about right or wrong maan..

its time to save geets dignity..

the name for ur child..

so,do what meera said..

bhai,waise geet bhabhi is already ur wife by all means..

its just a formality before world..come bhai..


Dev made maan sit in mandap..

geet looked at brij n rajji..

both were silently looking at them both..

 maneet got married with all rituals n before the worldā€¦

maan filled her maang with sindoor.

Mangalsutrā€¦pandit asked..

Meera removed hers n gave it..

All were shocked seeing it..

I'm now only ur friend maan..not ur wife..

this right is now only geets..

n I have this instead of that..

she showed the M pendant hanging in her neckā€¦

Maneet were guilt..but the circumstances were not in their hand..

Maan tied the mangalsutr in geets neckā€¦

geets wish n dream to be a bride was fulfilledā€¦

she is now mrs.maan infront of all..

Brij finally gave up n did the kanyadhaanā€¦

meer thanked himā€¦

rajji did not talk to anyone..she kept quiet ..



Sasha was about to faint in the turn of things happened ā€¦all ultaā€¦what she thought n what is going on..ā€¦maneet got married with all the blessings of elders n relatives.. she stamped her foot n went out...now that behenji is mrs..maan khurana..no..i'll do something before she comes to KC..I must think some thing else..first let me know her background n do research about her n her bro n sis..so I can come with full plan..she decided to go to kc in midnight n search geets cabin..

Meera sighed in relief..she felt like all her wishes came true..she hugged maasi..maasi looked meera with hurt..thinking about meera n her health..meera saw rajji standing alone.. she called rajji..

Why are you standing alone rajji..are u not happy with ur geet didis marriage..

Aap itni achi kyun hai didiā€¦I'm not a god like you..

i cant accept geet di nor jiju for what they did to u..ok..

even if u did their marriage without their knowledge..

how can she accept jiju..he is ur husband..

Rajji..pls understand..its my health..

U would have adopted a child di..

Do u think I would not have thought about all possibilities before getting into this decision..

Didi..

You think me as ur sister na..then accept themā€¦

But di..

For me..pls..

Ok..will tryā€¦

Brij  n dadi was also thereā€¦

i want to talk to u three alone..

What else meera..is there anything you left to say us..

Yes..but after reaching KM..1 more which i hide from all...

even maan n geet doesnt know..

Why cant u say it now..

I don't want to spoil this happy mood ..

maasi u take them to outhouse.after brides entry in km..

.we will talk there..

Tum itni build up kyun karthi ho meera..say now..

now I'm ready to hear all shock..

Thodi aur intazaar karna padega dadi..if I didn't say also,maasi will say u..haina maasi..ab muje kaam hai..bidaai ka waqt hai..she left the 3 alone..

Whats she talking about..maa..

Maasi wiped her tears..

This is not the place to talk about what meera said...

lets go..we will talk about it after reaching KM...

today meera ka har raaz khuljayega..

i pray to god..to give u all the strength to hear it..

maasi moved to meera where bidaai held..

 

 

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rubykatariya thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
too emotional me šŸ˜­šŸ˜­
maaneet's baby šŸ˜³
meera is so sweet..
saasha šŸ˜”
love it di...
Edited by ruby3 - 12 years ago
keenu_kk thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part dear
so finally maneet married dear
great 
and waiting to reveal the truth of handas dear
update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
the update is so long ...

ennaku romba tookam varudu so i ll read and comment tmr ...

happydays30 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part
maaneet marriage,geet pregnant
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
emotional one yaar..
 
but loved it as finally they are one in front of all.
 
nw waiting for meera's truth.. wat relation she has with geet
ammu5 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
painful update. had tears vn meera removed n gave her mangalsutra hw can a wife remove that too for her husbands second wife
crazy_125 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
hey nice update...
ek aur baat aise cliffhangers pe mat chodo plzzz...jaldi update dedona...zyaada intezaar mat karwa dena
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally Maan & Geet is official married..Geet is preg..One more truth about Meera coming..How Maan going to handle..
waiting for next part..