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isha.raj_98

@isha.raj_98

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

amazing thoughout how i wish our lovely mannu didnt die but oh well!!! pm me any other stories u write on virmaan!!

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Hooria

@hooriaa

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

To begin with an amazing FF truly heart touching, suprisingly all the songs u chose:
1)tere mast mast do nain,
2)piya ore piya,
3)jhaak maar ke
Are one of my favourite songs they enhanced ur writing...
The past few parts were jus beautiful and this last part made me cry...
So unique and sad i loved the ek hazaaron mein meri behna hai song and then manvi dies in jeevika's lap
So so emotional

I loved ur entire piece of work this was a fantastic FF im hoping to read more of your work so do write more and pm me when u do

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Shivani Rajput

@ShivRajput

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Dis was awesome... Really the sad ending!!! I dnt want manvi 2 die and left virat alone...!!!

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Leena Pattni

@indian10

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: isha.raj_98
amazing thoughout how i wish our lovely mannu didnt die but oh well!!! pm me any other stories u write on virmaan!!

Thank you for your lovely comment, will come with another FF or SO very soon. And thank you for loving my story will PM when I start just thinking at moment another story.

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Leena Pattni

@indian10

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: hs7071
To begin with an amazing FF truly heart touching, suprisingly all the songs u chose:
1)tere mast mast do nain,
2)piya ore piya,
3)jhaak maar ke
Are one of my favourite songs they enhanced ur writing...
The past few parts were jus beautiful and this last part made me cry...
So unique and sad i loved the ek hazaaron mein meri behna hai song and then manvi dies in jeevika's lap
So so emotional

I loved ur entire piece of work this was a fantastic FF im hoping to read more of your work so do write more and pm me when u do

The reason choice those song they are my favouite to and the go with the Screen. Thank you for your lovely comment, will come with another FF or SO very soon. And thank you for loving my story will PM when I start just thinking at moment another story.

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Leena Pattni

@indian10

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: Shivrajput52
Dis was awesome... Really the sad ending!!! I dnt want manvi 2 die and left virat alone...!!!

That was part of story, my next FF or SO will be a continue on the story maybe on Maanvi diary but I am thinking a concept at the moment. Thank you for your lovely comment, will come with another FF or SO very soon. And thank you for loving my story will PM when I start just thinking at moment another story.

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girl_rocks

@girl_rocks

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

this was tremendous

i must say u r absolutely a excellent writer

each n evry part of your ff was superb amazing full of emotional...

last part was just hilarious...it was so so emotional...

nd the songs you choose were excellent they were perfect...

i ust only have to say hats off to you

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Leena Pattni

@indian10

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: girl_rocks
this was tremendous
i must say u r absolutely a excellent writer
each n evry part of your ff was superb amazing full of emotional...
last part was just hilarious...it was so so emotional...
nd the songs you choose were excellent they were perfect...
i ust only have to say hats off to you

Thank you for your comment and loving my story.