Rasia/ SIRA OS - After the date ( 6th day)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Guys this is my first OS... Its happens on 6th day... I hope u all enjoy rading it.. do let me know your views
Scene 1

This scene happens when sia goes on date with juno and there she finds out how raghav helped juno to fall in love and create such sitution that makes sia confuse and aggres to go on date with juno...

Sia gets really depressed and angry . She left the date half and comes running to ellite . She found one auto and reaches eliite.. juno comes running behind sia from the date .. but before he reaches she gets the auto and leaves... Juno feels sad .. tht he has hurted sia and calls raghav to tell what happens.. but raghav is not picking up his call... he feels irritated and tensed ... what will happen if sia goes to raghav and they again fight...
Next scene :
Sia is scene in the auto and she is crying and rembering all these 6 days which raghav has created to make juno fall for her... she also rembering how sia and raghav has spend some precious moments from jungle to boxing tournment.. all those eyelocking to touching and emotional moments she has spent with raghav to the betray moment which raghav has done...
Sia auto reaches to ellite and she comes to ellite crying...
Scene 2 :
Raghav was seen doing boxing with anger and frustation... as if he is putting all his frustation which he cant share with anybody in this last 6 days on punching bag.
The more he is punching the bag.. the more he is remebering the moments he has spent with sia.. from the first day he saw sia in the AC to the last 6 days to make sia feels for juno... how he feels good when sia coms close to him and how hard its for him to hide his feeling... its not in his hand anymore... as he has lost his first true love...he has nobody in his life who can understand him beside sia... ( who knows raghav even without saying)...
suddenly he stopped punching and looks at the door and sia opens the door with a depressed face...
Scene 3
The BG music start playing and he looks a at sia ... and looks surprised...
Sia has tears in his eyes... he kept looking at sia beautiful eyes.. from where he can see.. tears start falling... ( he cant see tears in sia's eyes).
Raghav : Puspa tum yeha...
Sia : Kept looking at him
Raghav( hold puspa from the solider) : Tum roo kyu raho hoo ... Kya hua puspa... Juno ne kuch kiya kya... Puspa kya hua
Sia( forcefully remove raghav hand from her soldier) : Tumhe yeh hakk kisne diya .. jo tum mere life ke decession lene lagee
Raghav : Kept looking at sia
Sia : Bolo raghav bolo... tumhe yeh haak kisne diya joo tum kuch bhi karo woh mujhe manna hogaa
Raghav : Kya kiya maine
Sia : Sab kuch karke yeh tum abb kahh raho ho ki kya kiyaaa... tumhe the naa joo... pehele mujhe help kiya.. mera saat diya ... mere sabse aacha dost bana... tumhe the naa jo apne aap ko mera dost bolte the.. ohh soorry... mera sabsee accha dost... kyu ... kyu kiya tumne... mera dil ke saat kyu khela...
Raghav : Puspaa... meri baat... to suno
Sia : Chup ... ek dum chup... aapne aap ko kya smajhto ho tum... jo mera first impresson tha tumhere liye .. woh ekdum thek tha... tumhee kisi ki emotion kii nahi padee... tum ekk rich spoil bigree hua ladkee hoo... maine kitne galat sochte thi... ki hum bahout acche friend hai and kii tum mujhe samjhtee hoo... tum kabhi bhi mera bura nahi kar sakte... maine tum par ankh band karke biswassh karte thi... and tumneee.. kya kiya...
Raghav kept looking at sia
sia : waw raghav waw... 6days ladki innn... waw... yeh tha tumheri dosti... maine kya koi khilona hua.. jo jab chaha dost bana liya and jab chaha dushere ko dee diya... .
Raghav : Puspaaa
Sia : Yeh mere zindigi ka sawal hai... tumhehe yeh kaise lag agya ki maine juno ke saat khush rahugi... yeh mera personal life and real life maine har baat mazak nahi hota raghav
Raghav in angry mood : To kya kare... baatekar jhagraa kareee...
Sia : Miane kyu tumhse yeh bol rahi hui.. jiske pass yeh baatein samjhene ke liye dil he nahi hai
Raghav : mujhe laga tum and juno ek saat
Sia : ekk saat kya raghav... ekk saat kya
Kya tumhne mujhe ekk baar bhi puch kar dekha tha.. ki mujhe kya chahiyee...
Raghav in angry: maine bass tumhe khush dekhna chahta hui
Sia : and tumhe lagata hai ki maine juno ke saat khush rah payogii
Raghav becomes angry ... and he hold puspa and said... kya tum mujh jaise ladke ke saat khush rah paaogi bolo puspa bolo...
Sia : ekk baar puch to liya hota yeh baat...
Sia runs away crying and raghav hits his hand on wall hardly
If you guys like this.. then only i will write next half
Edited by esha_friends20 - 13 years ago

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esha_friends20 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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11 views and no comment😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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esha super like do continue pls and come to Sira AT there is a party going on catch that party live
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Posted: 13 years ago
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esha its not like that most of sira fan are offline now and some are on live party you too join the party and tell them about your FF they surely gonna like it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Siramad

esha its not like that most of sira fan are offline now and some are on live party you too join the party and tell them about your FF they surely gonna like it

ok utpol let me write to them
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Posted: 13 years ago
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maine link de diya .. par kisi ne comment he nahi kiya...😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its awesome esha loved it...pls pls continue the nextt part soon waitin for it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: nimmi-hhl

its awesome esha loved it...pls pls continue the nextt part soon waitin for it

nobody commented soo i was thinking tht it was a badd FF...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Omggg esha kaha thi ab tak...
Itna accha likhti ho...
Just lovd it...sia's dialogue were perfect...plz plz cnt...
Do pm me the nxt part...waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful...masterpiece...please eshi mere liye continue kar pleaajjj 😃

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