OS With these two eyes UPDATE - PART TWO PAGE 6 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
i luved it...

it wuld really nice of u if u pm me wen u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
wish arnav saw the scene
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
Loved it...defo needs to continue...im glad Bubli saw!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
awesome os loved it
pls pm me when u update next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
The pair of young eyes is definitely Bubli's.
Finally, Bubly and Pyal and all thanks to Khushi.
I loved it when she said that Arnav is her someone.
Yes, you should continue.😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
Sorry for taking so long with update, i was unwell...anyway here it is;

OS - With these two eyes...

Bubli gasped and clasped her hand to her mouth. She had just witnessed khushi slap shyam. She was in shock at how disgusting shyam had spoke to khushi.
Bubli hid as shyam left the kitchen, she stared after him trying to work out what had happened. She was brought back to her senses, when she heard khushi's stifled sobs.
"Khushi are you ok" bubli asked timidly walking in to the kitchen
Khushi tensed hearing bublis voice...how much had she heard?
"I am fine bubli, i just finished chopping some onions, so they made me weepy" khushi replied forcing a smile on her face.
Bubli stood looking at khushi before hugging her. " whatever has happened to khushi is not her fault, i will find out whats happened" thought bubli.
"Anyway bubli i thought you were playing with sister" khushi asked.
"Yes i was, but she has asked me to get some black shoe polish so we can polish Mr. A's shoes" bubli answered
Khushi giggled as she handed the polish to bubli, rembering that trick all too well.

*later that evening*

"Manorama why must you always insist on wearing those sunglasses in doors." Naani asked looking crossly at manorama.
Bubli and payal glanced at each other and giggled.
" yes aunt, you look like a giant bumble bee" bubli laughed.
"I'll have you know these are the height of fashion" manorama answered.
"Were they really expensive aunt" asked bubli trying to hold the laughter in.
"Yes you cant spare money where quality is concerned bubli dear" manorama replied as she took her glasses off.
The rm living room suddenly errupted in to laughter. Manorama sat there confused. "Hello hi bye bye, why is everyone laughing" she said upset.
"Mama did you buy those glasses from the market? "Akash asked laughing.
"No son they came from america" manorama said
" aunty you need a refund, there is something wrong with them" laughed bubli.
Manorama got up and looked in the mirror, she screamed as she saw black ring around her eyes, sending everyone in to more fits of laughter. She ran upstairs distraught at everyone mocking her. She did not see payal and bubli high five each other.
"Bubli that was a good trick you played" laughed shyam "i hope you wont play any tricks on me" he added.
"Not of that kind shyam" grinned bubli, her head already a swarm with how to get him back for being nasty to khushi.

*The next day*

Bubli had crept into shyam and anjali's room. She then had proceeded in spraying some cheap perfume on shyams clothes.

*later that day*

Anjali was in her room resting as bubli walks in.

"Anjali can you teach me how to sew, if your not busy?"bubli asked
"I am never to busy for you bubli, come and sit down and i will get everything ready" anjali smiled. These moments with bubli were what she was going to look forward to with her own child.

Bubli smiled and suddenly put her second plan in to process.
Bubli sneezed as loud as she could, and again and again and again and again...
"Bubli do you have a cold" anjali asked worryingly feeling bublis head.
"No anjali i only sneezed as i came in you room, my nose feels tickly...whats that smell?"bubli asked looking at shyams wardrobe.
Anjali opened the doors to be greeted with a stench of cheap perfume.
"Bubli i will teach you sewing later, please fetch shyam for me" anjali asked chocking back tears.
"Yes anjali" bubli replied as she skipped out the room
Anjal stood and took in the scent, how an earth did this perfume get on shyams clothes. She was torn between thinking the worst and reasoning with herself.
"Yes my queen you wanted me" asked shyam as he strutted in the room.
"Would you care to explain to me dear husband why your clothes smell of perfume that is not mine" quizzed anajli
Shyam stood shocked...someone had played him at his own game.

*coming up next: bubli sees more than she bargained for...

Please leave a comment if you would like me to continue. If you want a pm of next update, then please add me as a buddy, as i only send pm's to buddies.
For more of my works please pm me for links.
Thanks guys.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Superb Update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Loved it. Can't believe I am saying this but go Bubli!
Continue soon.
Thanks.😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Wow good begining!!plz continue soon!!!

Thanx for the PM!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
hey that was cute...bubli was adorable...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
VERY WELL WRITTEN.👏...LOOKING FORWARD
THANKS FOR THE PM

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