Mayur FF - Falling apart is just not easy Page 89 - Page 44

The first part ws like a dream come true..Dont know how many times i reread that portion...Mayank clicking the most adorable sight ever-a sleeping nupur with her sleeping son on her lap...that scene wud hav been a treat to watch in real...*sigh*...
Anyways i think mayank is over reacting this time...I dont see varun having some great difficulty in boarding...hope nupur can make him open up soon...its high time now...
Beautifully written...
Cont...

so many questions to answers

god you update after ages and still the little positivity in the beginning is crushed with mayank's paranoid thoughts...please show us some light in the next update...and more than that, make the update sooner!

nice updt payal
hope mayank open up soon.
cont soon
thanks for the pm

awesomest update

amazing part

I'm really waiting 4 d showdown nw...nupur needs 2 knw d reason behind mayank's detached behaviour...she has every right 2 knw...d way u described Mayanks reaction on seeing dem was very beautiful...n he clicked a pic of theirs 2... 😳 Hw adorable...:)
Pls continue soon...I cnt wait 4 another 15 days 4 d nxt update 😆
N dnt worry abt ur writing n story...u r doing a very good job at it...I'm loving it 😃 Thanx 4 d pm:)

very nice update.

i am reading the last few parts of ur ff...by checking ur pms..i m very much irregular on i-f n datzz y on bein late my comments r appearing one after another..sorry abt the same but i make sure i check all ur ffs..as i love reading them! :)

When will we get next update dear😕