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Posted: 20 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: **lil_playa**

i also wanna thankx u guyz for liking the topic i choose😊

Thanks for giving us the idea lil playa!! This thread will be rocking!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: **lil_playa**

i also wanna thankx u guyz for liking the topic i choose😊

Thanks from me too hunny! 😃

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Posted: 20 years ago
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LOL i just read thru it again 😆 😆

Hey u two..are u two gonna hog writing the episodes..or are we allowed to post any episodes too ? 😛 😆

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Posted: 20 years ago
#34

PLZ CONTINUE!!!!!! its sooooo cute!!!

and can someone tell me if this is before shes normal or wehn shes normal?? thanks

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Summaya....you can write the next episode . if you like, its for everyone! me and khushi just gave it a start, anyone can join in!! So why dnt u do the next one and whoever wants to carry on can!!

American Desi- this is all made up, i haven't really taken into account Vedika's madness!!😆...Maybe later on it might come back....depends on which writer wants to bring it back!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
#36

Ok as summya doesn't seem to be online, i'll carry on!!

Episode 5

Dhruv comes back from the office quite late, he goes to the bedroom and stands over Vedika and looks at her while she is asleep. As he is about to leave....Vedika takes his hand😳 and....

Vedika: Sorry

Dhruv: [Smiles] Its ok...go to sleep

Vedika gets up and turns the light on

Dhruv: [Sits down next to her]Just be careful next time,ok?

Vedika: Next time?? Believe me there won't be a next time [Laughs lightly]

Dhruv: I'm not that bad you know, sometimes i just get angry. Anyway your temper is just as bad, remember you lost it when i joked with you.

Vedika: Yeh, I guess...So we're good?

Dhruv: Yep. Ok so can you just heat up the food while i freshen up. I'm really hungry...

Vedika: food??? 😕

Dhruv: Why, whats wrong?

Vedika: Everyone thought you would have eaten,so.....its all gone😕

Dhruv:Fine.... you don't bother phoning me to ask where I am, if i have eaten or not? And you assume I would have eaten😡

He heads for the bathroom...Vedika feels bad. 😳

When Dhruv returns in his pyjamas, he see's food on the table....Noodles😆😆

Dhruv: [Smiles]....Noodles?

Vedika: Thats all I could make for you in 5 minutes. If you don't want it then [....just about to take it away]

Dhruv: No No....what are you doing. Bahut bhook lagi hai....i'll have anything😆

Dhruv starts stuffing his face with the noodles 😆...and doesn't realise that he has some sauce on his face...

Vedika: Atleast eat properly, you have sauce on your face.

Dhruv: Oh,sorry. [He wipes it off] Vedika You are sounding like my wife😆

Vedika: Thats because I ....😳

Vedika doesn't complete the sentence, when she realises what she was about to say.[Remember, they don't take eachother as hubby-wife]

So is it the first step towards companionship???.....maybe or maybe not!! Watch out for the next episode which will be written by...(not me😆) Khushi or Summaya.....or anyone who wants to continue!!

Edited by DkDish - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#37
thats really good..plz continue soon
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Posted: 20 years ago
#38

Episode 6 😳

Next day- The Raizada khandan have to go to a wedding. Everyone is getting ready in their rooms. Vedika is half undressed 😉 (she's just got her sari's skirt on ..and the blouse buttons are open) The door opens slowly and Dhruv walks in softly...He sees Vedika in such a vulnerable state..and is mesmorised by her innocent beauty 😉

Vedika (trying to hook up her blouse) : Ouch..(she can't reach the top hooks)

Dhruv: (smiles and says to himself) When she's not showing her attitude, she's pretty cute.

Vedika looks up at that moment and in the mirror she sees Dhruv staring at her) Tum 😡 (She grabs the dupatta and covers herself totally) Can't u see Im getting ready 😡

Dhruv: Im not that old that I can't see 😆

Vedika: Moo fero 😡 Turn around!

Dhruv: Kyu 😆

Vedika: What do u mean 'kyu' 😡

Dhruv: This is my room! I have all the right to look at whatever I want 😆

Vedika: Acha ..to tum apna haq jata rahe ho 😡

Dhruv: (walks up to the bed, kicks his shoes off and sits down) Don't make a fuss ..Jaldi karo..we'll be late!

Vedika: (shocked and annoyed): Tum jao bahar..I can't get ready with you in here..(she holds the dupatta round herself more tightly) 😆

Dhruv: (stands up and goes behind her with a sweet smile) If I go..then who will hook your blouse? 😆

Vedika: (trying to be ziddi) Im not a kid! 😡 I will do it!

Dhruv: Haan haan..tum karlogi ..lekin (gently removes the dupatta from Vedika's body) 😉

Vedika: (weakening) Tum..tum..Don't ..touch...

Dhruv : (completely removes dupatta and starts buttoning her blouse..slowly)..Shhh 😉

Dhruv finally finishes buttoning..and he slowly turns her round so that she is facing him..his hands on her shoulders 😉 She looks up..her eyes are filled with suprise shock..and his eyes are gazing into hers...

Suddenly...theres a knock on the door....

What next? U guys decide 😉

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Posted: 20 years ago
#39

Hey Reemz nd Summaya gr8 stuff..summaya very HOT! 😳 😆 And Reenz urs is sooooo cute, i just wanna keep picturing that scene again nd again..."Thats because i..." lol hehehehe

Ill write the next one soon... 😉

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Episode 7

Dhruv goes to open the door and there he sees his childhood friend Aarti standing before him.

Aarthi:Hey dhruv!! U got married and didnt even tell me..wat a surprise u gave me and today ive given u a surprise havent i? 😆

Dhruv: And what a great surprise it is...he steps forward and hugs Aarti..(At this point Vedika is just staring at both of them with a little jealousy in her eyes 😆)

Aarthi: Enters Dhruvs room.."And this must be ur lovely wife, god i must say she is pretty..lucky u!" Aarti faces vedika "Vedika, Vedika...I must say u r indeed very lucky, in college every girl died for Dhruv"

Vedika: Me and lucky?..(laughs softly) Ved turns her back on Aarthi..."I must be getting ready now"

Aarthi: Oh yes of course..the wedding, i have also been invited, so ill be accompanying you guyz!

Vedika: Thinks to herself..."Great" In a sarcastic tone 😉

Dhruv: Okay Aarthi lets go and let Vedika get ready.

..Dhruv & Aarti walk out of the room together hand in hand

Vedika is left alone Thinks to herself..."stupid Aarthi, spoilt all the fun!" 😡

So basically this new character Aarthi is loud and happening...but in Dhruv's eyes shes only a friend...but in Vedikas eyes to Dhruv shes more than a friend 😆

Oh god im gonna luv the "making me jealous" part 😆

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