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Hooria

@hooriaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Haye i read all the parts in one go...
Fantastic yay virat is in love with maanvi
Continue soon and pm me please
One request more VirMan Scenes plsz

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isha.raj_98

@isha.raj_98

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

aw finally virat realised with help of course lool

pm me soon cant wait 2 know maanvi's reaction wen she finds out!!!

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Leena Pattni

@indian10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Part 10:

Virat see Maanvi and Jeevika in a distance and say's to himself "Maanvi you had scared me today, I thought that I had loss to you. Thank god your okay, even when you ill and your skin look so pale, you look so beautiful. Your like an angle that bring love in everyone life's even when your hurting inside. That what I love you so much." Viren come from behind and say's "Virat what ever you feeling you must go and tell Maanvi before it to late." Virat look confused and say's "But Bhai what if Maanvi reject my proposal and say's no to me. This will break our friendship which I can not risk as I can not live without Maanvi" Viren smile's and say's "Virat mera Bhai you never understood Maanvi even until today. You know Virat even if Maanvi does not like you in that way that won't effect your friend trust me. Maanvi will understand your feeling, and I doubt she will reject you because I can see the love in her eyes for you. So go on Mera Bhai be a man and tell her how you feel.?" Virat smile and say's "Bhai your right,?" Then goes in Maanvi room and Viren smile's and say's "Best luck Virat, I truly hope you get your love as you deserve all the love in the world, and who can give more then Maanvi."

Maanvi see Virat and get happy then say's "Partner tum, I am really sorry about today." Then Virat smile's and say's "Partner you don't nee say sorry but you owe to me one day." Maanvi smile and say's "Any time partner once I get better if I get better." Jeevika and Virat are shock when she say's that, Virat about to say something when Jeevika say's "Chup kar, Maanu how many time's have told you not to talk like that. " Then Viren come in and say's the day's "Jeevu you know saali sayba she got a habit of messing around. Any way Jeevu I need to talk to you for a moment can you please come out for a few minutes." Jeevika turn around and say's "But what about Maanvi what if she need me, I have stay here." Then Virat and smile's then say's "Bhabhi don't worry I am here if this monkey need me." Maanvi get annoyed and say's "Shut chup stop calling me a monkey. Any way Di it only for few moments. Please go with Jeeju I am sure he won't call if it not important." Then finally Jeevika agree to go with Viren. While Viren walks out and put his thumps up to and say's to Virat "Good luck."

Then Maanvi notice that and wonder what that about. She try to ask Virat but before she could, Virat come to her and put his finger on her lips and says "Please Maanvi keep quite, I need talk about something it important." Then Maanvi keep looking at Virat eye's and wonder what he wants talk about.

[sorry the update been delay just been busy during weekend.But I promise next update will not be delay enjoy.]

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nishi12345

@nishi12345

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

just read all the parts

it was ausumn

please pm me wen u cont

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Leena Pattni

@indian10

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Chapter 11:

"Kya hai Virat, tell me!" Virat made Maanvi relax and say's "Maanvi you know sometime you take things for granted. Until you realize that you may loss that person, you feel the importance of that person." Maanvi look confuse and trying understand what Virat is trying say, but she can not figure out then she say's "Virat what are you saying I don't understand." Virat smile and say's "Partner don't get me wrong, there someone else in my life who is my best friend but now she more then my best friends she my life. I don't know how tell because I am scared of losing her friendship." Maanvi smile's and say's "Wow Virat you in love, who is it? Take my advise tell her how you feel, if she your true friend then trust me nothing will change between you to."

Then Virat get on his knee, while Maanvi look confused, then Virat say's "Maanvi I love you, you are my best friend. I don't know when and how but I have started to love you." Maanvi start's to laugh and say's "Kya! is this a joke, I know you to well Partner and your pranks. I don't believe you." Virat look at Maanvi seriously and say's "Maanvi for the first time I am not joking, especially about love. Dam met Maanvi I love you, your my life for once please believe me." Then Maanvi realize Virat not joking, she has been dying for Virat to tell her that. But the she think's that she can not let Virat ruin his life after a sick girl. She has a short life but Virat has a long life a head of him. She can not take that away, as tommore she will die then what will happened to Virat she can not be selfish. So Maanvi look away's try hide her tears and then Virat crab's her and say's "Maanvi why you silence please say something." Then Maanvi put a brave face on say's " Virat I am very touch you feel that way about me, and I really appreciate you'r feeling but!" Maanvi find's very difficult to control her feeling toward's Virat that's why she find hard get her word's out, in the mean time Virat get very impatient as usual he say's "But what? come on Maanvi I'm listening?" Maanvi can not face Virat so she turn her face's as she has tear's coming out and say's "Sorry Virat I just see you as very good friend. I do love you but as a friend not in any other way." Then Maanvi say's herself "Please Virat forgive me? But I can not let you ruin your life as I love you to much?"

Virat and Maanvi are unaware but Jeevika and Viren have sneak and listen whole conversation behind the door. As Viren has told Jeevika everything, Jeevika notice's that Maanvi crying and say's "Viren ji Maanu love's Virat but why she lying to him?" Viren smile's and say's "I told you so!" Then Jeevika say's "Okay Viren ji don't get big head. Any way I think I know why Maanu lying to Virat because I know Maanu to well. She doe not won't Virat to ruin his life, so she sacrificing her love. But she doe not realize she ruining her life as well as Virat. Viren ji we need do something!" Then Viren and Jeevika make a plan to bring Maanvi and Virat come closer and make Maanvi confuse her love to Virat...

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isha.raj_98

@isha.raj_98

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

after reading that update i can hardly wait plz write a longer 1 next time!!!!

n pm me soon!!!

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Leena Pattni

@indian10

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Chapter 12:

Next morning Maanvi could not sleep as she kept thinking of Virat. She kept turning the light on and of which was annoying Jeevika. "Maanu Kya kare rahe, what you doing Maanvi just because you can't sleep there someone else in the room who trying to sleep." Then Maanvi realize what she doing "Sorry di." Then Jeevika put her hand on Maanvi hand by accident and notice she has fever. Jeevika get up immediately and say's "Maanu you have fever why that. Don't tell me you have not slept. Maanu what you doing? I have told you so many time's to rest." Maanvi does not respond and Jeevika notice tear's in Maanvi eye's "Maanu I'm sorry for shouting." But Maanvi doe's not respond, Jeevika realize her Maanvi upset about something."

Then Jeevika put her hand's on Maanvi hair gently strokes it and say's to Maanvi "Maanu why you so quite. What happen tell me?" Then Maanvi can not control herself and she just hug's Jeevika and say's "Why now do I have full in love now. When I don't what gone happen to me. Why do I have bump into love?" Jeevika feels Maanvi pain and say's "Maanu nothing will happened to you, I promise you. And if you love someone then you must tell them before it to late." Then Maanvi reply and say's "But Di if any thing does happened to me, I know Virat will be broken and he won't able get over it." Then Jeevika smile's and say's "So my Maanu love's my pyarar Devar. Who she always use fight with!" Maanvi get shy and say's "Yeh di I love him but Virat does not have any future with a sick woman." Jeevika real try to pursed Maanvi to tell Virat but she doe's not listen and say's "I'm sorry di I can not let Virat spoil his life like that and always looking after a sick woman."

Jeevika then say's "Okay Maanu relax's please don't stress, you need rest. I understand what your saying but I think it wrong. However I am with you either way. I just won't your health get worse. So please Maanu go to sleep for bit before treatment okay." Then Maanu smile's "Okay di, on one condition please can you sing me that lullaby that mum use to sing to us. Do remember." Jeevika smile's of course I remember." Then start's to sing :

Gudiya Raani Bitiya Raani Pariyon Ki Nagari Se Ek Din
raajakunvar Ji Aaenge Mahalon Mein Le Jaaenge
gudiya Raani Bitiya Raani ...

aage Piichhe Ghode Haathi Biich Mein Honge Sau Baaraati
itani Aaj Akeli Ho Tum Tere Kitane Honge Saathi
kitani Khush Huun Main Meri Aankh Mein Paani
gudiya Raani Bitiya Raani ...

tu Meri Chhoti Si Gudiya Ban Jaaegi Jaadu Ki Pudiya
tujhape A Jaaegi Javaani Main To Ho Jaauungi Budhiya
bhuul Na Jaana Priit Puraani
gudiya Raani Bitiya Raani ..

Jeevika watch Maanvi full sleep while she stroke Maanvi her and thinks to herself with tear's in her eye's and say's "Maanu I wish that I can take your pain away, I wish you can trust me and I promise that bring your love to you." Then Jeevika thinks there no time to be emotional I need meet with Viren ji and come with another plan for Maanvi to tell Virat how she feels as he is her life.

Edited by leena2311 - 13 years ago

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isha.raj_98

@isha.raj_98

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

i loved it i wonder how virka are gonna do that?!

pm me soon cant wait!!!! as always lool

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Leena Pattni

@indian10

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Chapter 13:

There was a knock at the while Maanvi was a sleep on Jeevika's lap, the door open and no other then "Can I come in.!" Jeevika say "Of course you come in Viren ji but you need be quite Maanvi just fallen a sleep as she was awake all night." Viren smile's and whisper the say's "Virat in the same situation at home." Then Jeevika gently put Maanvi head on the pillow and whisper "Viren ji I need talk to you." Then Viren smile's and say's "Okay, let go out and talk properly that way we do not disturb." Then quietly wake out the room.

"Viren ji but I can not see Manu like this, she love's Virat a lot. But Maanu know if she losses against cancer and dies then Virat will not able to live with out her. But Maanu does not know that she could get cured. I don't know what to do, I can not see Maanu pain. Viren Ji we need do some thing." Viren console Jeevika and say's " I know Jeevu what your saying and I understand where your coming from. On the other side Virat unaware of Maanvi feeling, poor guys under the impression that Maanvi just love's him as a friend." Viren then think's what he can do, and come up with a plan, " I got it Jeevika, I have a plan." Jeevika get impatient and say's "Kya, what the plan." Then Viren smile's and say's " The plan is to bring Maya back in Virat life." Then Jeevika is confuse and say's "Who is Maya?" Then Viren reply "Maya is Virat ex-girl friend they had broke up 5 year's ago because she cheated on him. But 2 years ago they had made up, and the are friends now. Maya is getting married next year but no one know yet." Jeevika still confuse and say's "What will that achieve Viren Ji?"

Then Viren smile's and say's "Jeevu I love you, your so innocent. What that will achieve that will eventually make Maanvi jealous, and eventually she will be so helpless by her feeling. That she will have no choice but accept her love for Virat." Then Jeevika smile's and say's "Of course the old fashion way it a great I dear but Viren ji don't you think it a bit filmy, and will get work?" Then Viren smile confidently and say's "I am 100% sure this will work trust me on this." Then Jeevika smile's and say "I have full trust on you." Then Viren smile's and say's "Thank's Jeevu let get to work we don't have much time." Then they shake hands and make a plan to bring Virat & Maanvi to come close, and how Maanvi can confuse her love within a month.

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Hooria

@hooriaa

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Fanatastic i luv viren and his cupid plans they are truly wonderful so nw they are guna try make maanvi jealous fabulous continue soon and please pm me when u do

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