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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#741

Thank God Mayank came on time to safe her thsi part was really thread to read made our day it was pleasure t read all the way this FF though i came half way, but still loved to core all the parts,
this side of Mayur was adorable
thank u so much for giving us this amazing story to read enjoyed all the parts from start to end please come back soon with another FF that with our adorable Mayur thnks for all the pms Shiv 🤗

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Tasnim

@C_O_O_L

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#742

awesome ending ...

loved it...

do write something new soon

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#743

Ahh,,

a wonderful end toa beautiful journey.

the 35 part was awesum..loved there dialogues...mayank is super hero..lolz

lovly story and charcterization...

hope to read from u soon

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#744

Ahh...Its ended.Gonna miss this ff

Superb update n loved the epilogue.The way u described the hurricane and nupur situation was just mind blowing.Mayank entry was terrific.Proposing session in the fire-brigade tanker n in all that situation was too good.

Aweee...They had twins.Epilogue was romantic, hot and cute.Lovely

Amazingly written..Great job👏

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shria19

@shria19

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#745

its sad that such a lovely ff came to an end😭

But then Happy endings😃 is what i like the most!!...they had to meet at the end n so did they!!!

love this ff😊

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AWonderfulChaos

@AWonderfulChaos

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#746

beautiful :) loved it.keep writing..ur a gem of a writer...take care..:)

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#747

nice update

nice ending.

finally they happily lived ever after.

waiting for ur new FF :)

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Payal-15

@Payal-15

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#748

Shivi finally I come to comment...better late than never😆

anyways coming to the update...as usual it was PERFECT...loved the whole description of Nupur getting trapped in the storm n Mayank helping her out...it seemed almost real but filmy too😉😆Mayurish😳

n OMG Mayank had gone all the way to India to surprise Nupur...that was REAL sweet of him...😳

but I also loved how Nupz said...he better not give her surprises than like this😆

n the later part...do I need to say how romantic it was n ahem too😆 beautiful 😍

as a whole this FF was a wonderful journey, I didn't knew this aspect of urs that u such a beautiful writer Shivi...m glad that U wrote this one 🤗

n ur emotions n practicality n expressions n crisp dialogues were all IN PLACE😳

totally enjoyed it from part 1 to part 35...didn't seem long enough to me...it could have been more U know n I would have liked it that way😳😆

1 complain, can I ?

I needed more MN happy scenes together coz U make their interaction so interesting always ki U can only keep wanting more...next FF mein I want haan😳

P.S: I really appreciate the fact that U managed almost regular updates even in ur busy schedule Shivi...⭐️ 🤗