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The clock breakdown shown in DAY 2 : are based on Arnav's timeline.

It's a long update sectioned down into 3 portions : My treat for you, for the weekend.

………..so enjoy……………. Minute by minute….………and keep the comments coming……

DAY 2

( 2.20 PM)

After another dose of sedatives, he wakes up alone in the room……………..Arnav looks around the room. The room is dark and empty.

Something hits him hard. He feels the punch on his heart, deep inside.

This is the feeling that he does not want at this point of time, when every second is crucial.

Every second keeps him away from his LOVE….

Khushi left me…………….this truth seems to dig into his soul inch by inch…..and SHE IS INNOCENT

….SHE NEVER HAD ANYTHING TO DO WITH SHAYM…WHY WAS I SUCH AN IDIOT TO BELIEVE WHAT I SAW? WHY DIDN'T I ASK HER A SINGLE TIME?

His insensible brutality, all his manhandling, his dictatorship, his hatred, his misunderstanding…………..all pictures starts to come to life…..

He feels shattered…helpless and abandoned.

……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………

A filthy scum bag…low life thug!!!

I will bash his face into a ball and kick that out of my house.

Filthy B******…………..as soon as the kid is born, I will through that son of a b**** away from my house.

He will pay. He will pay with interest….

I will break every bone in his body and rip his heart out….put him under my car and torment him slowly…

You messed my sister up and then you messed my life up….

How dare he touch my girl? ……………..HOW DARE HE TRY TO MARRY HER?

BEEP !!! BEEP !!! beeeP!!!

His pressure surges and machine alarm goes off. The dortor rushes in ( again)

" Mr raizada: please !! you need to calm down and keep your anger in control…..you will go into another phase of seizure if this goes on again….please...

(IN THE MEAN TIME …….)

(after talking with the doctor and Mr Mehta: Akash has appointed a group of body guards for Arnav, as a precaution.

Cause the doctor thinks that AFTER the accident, Arnav did not react or call for help and slowly let himself get wasted away bleeding close to death………feeling repentant for something he did or for his love………)

Knowing of the ARRANGEMENT made by Akash : ARNAV GOES INTO RAGE !!!

"DAMN IT !!! DOCTOR !!! how could you say that to my brother?

How can you assume that I did it on purpose? Or I was conscious while my blood was flowing?

DAMN you doctor…….

WHY CANT I LEAVE THIS SHITTY HOSPITAL AND JUST GO TO INDIA?

I WILL KILL AKASH….the moment I see him…who does he think he is?

F**k !!"

The doctor has have had enough………

He comes to Arnav and says,

" MR Raizada, I know you are a very powerful man. But I know my patient and their bodies. You are fit as a fiddle. You were stressed and lacked sleep. Didn't take you pill either. And accident might have happened when you went through the seizure…….

But you had consciousness when your wrist was cut…you bled slowly…

You did not call the hotel or ask for help…you intentionally took time and let it happen to you……..I heard you blabber in your sleep, and while you were having your nightmares. So I know what's going on…you cannot fool me…….''

"Look, Mr Raizada, you are a young man and have a long life ahead of you. You need to cool it down sometimes.

The girl " KHUSHI" : of whom you talk about in your sleep : she is fortunate to have such a passionate man love her.

YOU WERE WILLING TO GIVE UP YOUR ON YOUR LIFE , RATHER THAN FEEL THE GRIEF OF HER LEAVING YOU.

You need to listen to me and do things my way…just so that you recover quickly. Without my clearance you cannot leave the hospital.

Your body guards will be with you, till you reach India.

Am I clear?"

Arnav looks around the room, walks slowly to the table……

…………….smashes the flower vase in front of him and then plummets on the bed with a pouty face…

and says…"now I feel a bit calmer"…………..…..

then as an obedient child listens to the doctor……

gives his hand to the nurse for another shot…….

.

DAY 2

(5:35 PM)

ARNAV is holding a piece of paper …………………………

ARNAV JI!

" it was supposed to be 6 full months with you, but you left me alone……...

I stayed the first few days without in your house, with your family.

And I only know what I have been through.

Since you have broken your own contract and left before time completion,

I am also breaking my deal and leaving before time.

I am taking the last few days for myself.

I signed the papers and set you FREE as you wished.

I kept my word and did not say anything to anyone.

I beg you to keep your word and not tell my parents about me and our marriage. Please….

I also beg you, not to make my sister's life difficult. Please……

I am taking 1366 rupess total from the check: this is the price of the alteration for my shalwar kameez that you ripped up last time I hung my cloths near your pool side……that was my favorite suit so needed to alter.

I am also leaving documents of my land that belonged to my mother and father. If you sell the property: you will get more than 5 lacs that I took as cash from Aman ji.

I was in desperate need of money right at that point. So I had to borrow it from you.

ARNAV JI!

There is another thing, I wanted to tell you….God knows how many times I wanted to tell you. …but couldn't.

But now as the contract is over , I think I should let you know……

That night, when you took me near your pool side, and gave me the condition of marrying you,

Even if it wasn't for your sister or mine, I would have still said YES.

Even if you have asked me to marry you for a single day, I would have still said YES.

Because it was, YOU.

You be good Arnav ji ! you be good !!!!

Please stay safe …………………………..

KHUSHI.

Mr Mehta is standing near the door way, head tilted and dark with sorrow.

He just handed ARNAV the letter that Mrs Raizada left.

She left it with an employee in the office and asked him to fax it to ARNAV today.

DAY 2

(7.30 PM: EVENING)

Rustling sound.

People talking out loud…

noise….someone running…someone running sideways…

then backwards….loud noise ……..a stretcher bump the wall…….

ARNAV wakes up from his sleep…..

His body is feeling much better. The medicine and sedative did its work.

ARNAV feels a bit light headed. ANGRY…UPSET… but THANKFUL TOO.

He is feeling thankful to his DOCTOR… HE needs to get better ASAP. THE Sooner the better. So he can fly HOME

…home to his WORLD. " His KHUSHI…….."

Bang !!

Bang…..

Loud screeching noise……..

Someone is pulling someone away….

"WHAT THE !!!"

ARNAV pulls himself up from the bed and looks out of his door.

His body guards are not there………………."WHAT THE !!!??"

A voice shouts:………………"ARNAV"……………………"NANAAV"……………..

ARNAV: "WHAT THE HELL?????

Arnav sprung up….

who is calling him like this?

One of his many body guards come back panting.

"Sir!! Sorry………. Extremely sorry ………that we woke up you. It was a guy. An Indian Guy,

He said he was family and wanted to talk to you.

He said it was extremely urgent ….and its imperative that he gives you an address.

We thought that he was bluffing. He was calling you NANAAV."

( ARNAV's face turned grey…..a deep shade of grey……..blood ran down his spine and froze in his veins..)

With a lot of effort he utters:

"WAS IT A TALL guy around my height?

Fair, with boyish look?"

The bodyguard confirms:

"YES , SIR.

He threatened that he will get to you any way possible. He has been standing here for the last 2 hours……

He was forced and chased away….we thought he was one of the media people, posing as your family.

He left saying that: he is going to Miss Lavanya to make her talk to you NOW.

Miss Lavanya is now at a club named PURPLE CLOUD at the Rocks.

And we have send her a message to warn that this guy might show up. "

ARNAV :

"DID he tell him name?"

The body guard replies:YES.. IT ..IS……………………. " NK ".

...

Really thought that I could live without you
Really thought that I could make it on my own
Sent you away yeah I said I didn't need you
I let you go I let you go I let you go
Now I'm so lost without you
Now you're not here and now I know

Lonely is the night when I'm not with you
Lonely is the night ain't no light shining through
Till you're in my arms till you're here by my side
Lonely am I

Never thought that I that I would need you
Never thought that I that I'd be missing you
Gotta get you back
I just got to find a way now
To let you know to let you know to let you know
That I'm so lost without you
And now this world it just ain't right

Lonely is the night ...(airsupply)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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My story comprises of THE LAST 10 DAYS of the 6 month wedding period that ARNAV fixed for KHUSHI.

Here are the previous links:

DAY 10

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/2891940/the-last-10-days

DAY 9

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/2893099/last-9-day-of-6-month

DAY 8

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/2894533/last-8-day-of-6-month

DAY 7

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/2896366/last-7-day-of-6-month

DAY 6

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/2898390/last-6-day-of-6-month

DAY 5

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/2899641/last-5-day-of-6-month

DAY 5 ( CONT…)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/2903446/last-5-day-cont-of-6-month

DAY 4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/2905045/last-4-day-of-6-month

DAY 4 ( CONT…)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/2906604/last-4-day-cont-of-6-month

DAY 4 ( ENDING)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/2906761/last-4-day-ending-of-6-month

DAY 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/2908260/last-3-day-of-6-month

DAY 2 (P1)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/2909714/last-day-2-p1-of-6-month

DAY 2 ( P2)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/2909718/last-day-2-p2-of-6-month

DAY 2 ( P3)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/2909720/last-day-2-p3-of-6-month

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Posted: 14 years ago
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ausome
last day coming up
i'm so excited
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg omg omg i m going to die of excitement...absolutely enthralling👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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read awl parts in a go...jxt day one left...hope he finally finds khushi...
these wr amazinh updates..👏
plx update soon da day 1..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great update. loved it.
you write with such detail and capture your audience.
can't wait to read the ending
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG... ANOTHR HEART WRENCHING CHAPTER... LIKED HOW ARNAV DESCRIBES KHUSHI TO MR.IQBAL, TOKS OF EACH N EVRY DETAIL... N NOW I HOPE NK KNOWS SUMTHNG THT HE'S DESPERATE TO C HIM... DAY 1 KE LIYE WAITING... WAITING FOR THEM TO REUNITE... THYVE GONE THRU IMMENSE MU, PAIN N GRIEF... THNX FOR THE PM... :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow... I read all three parts of Last Da2 2 together.. what to say.. Its just awesome... I forget to breath while reading.. you are amazing writer.. Only one day left.. how he will meet Khushi.. where is she.. happy ending please... and thank you for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I've gobbled it up all .. hehehehe. I know you wrote this long 3 page update so that we could enjoy over the weekend but I've been greedy and read it all today. Now what do I do? 😕 Hope you update on Monday?

🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG I swear if u were the CVs i would have killed u for making me so restless !! Arre ur so good wid suspense ! PLEASE finish this OS ! i want to knw How Arnav reaches to HIS KHUSHI :( !! god no OS made me so restless ><

where is khushi :(

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