OS: Bruises, Blood, Breathlessness

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Hello beautiful people of the IPKKND forum! Hope that you are all well 😃
I'm having a shot at writing an OS. This is my first OS so please bare that in mind, it'll be extremely crap! Today's episode kind of inspired this OS, the heated fury between Arnav and Khushi was quite emotional, so I tried to incorporate some of the anger and hurt into this OS! So without further ado, here it is! Enjoy 😊



Bruises that will never heal.

Blood that boils vigorously through my body.

Breathlessness whenever I see his face.

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I couldn't see where I was going. I was running. Down a road, to an unknown place. It hurt. My arms, my legs, my torso, my head...but most of all my heart. It's that gut wrenching pain which feels like you've been set on fire inside, been stabbed a million times over and over again, all concentrated in the small space of my heart. The physical pain that the snake had caused me just a few moments ago doesn't even compared to the pain of my heart.

How could he not have believed me? Where all those precious moments we spent fake? I guess so, seeing how this sham of a marriage had turned out. He just let me go. Let me walk out of his life. Just like that. Did I not mean anything to him? Of course not, Khushi. Look. Look at what has done. What he has let happen. How, Arnav, how? Why?

I wasn't looking where I was going. My thoughts were consuming me. I was shooting bullets inside my own brain. I had no sense of my surroundings. I didn't see the car heading towards me.

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Bruises that I have caused.

Blood which courses heavily through my veins.

Breathlessness whenever I see her face.

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I have a heart of stone. I am useless. I will never deserve to be loved. Ever.

Yet there I was. Searching for the love of my life. I don't deserve her. I never told her how much I loved her. But then again I didn't know the truth like I do now. How can I be SO stupid? This thought made me grip the wheel of my car even tighter. I had to find her. She'd been hurt. I knew I shouldn't have let her go like that. Our contract had ended, and so as promised she packed her bags and left. But then I heard what the evil snake had done. The malicious plan he had so intricately concocted. Why? Why did I even believe that scoundrel in the first place? And then what did he do after I found out? He went to hunt her. Track her down. Make her...

No.

She is mine.

She has always been mine.

She will forever be mine.

I just hope he hasn't done hurt her. My Khushi. Mine.

The thought of him...attacking her consumed my mind. Dammit Khushi, where are you?

Such vivid, disturbing images where floating around my brain that I didn't even realised that there was someone right in front of them road. And I was heading straight towards her...

"AHHH."


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Cheeky cliffhanger 😉😆

Well I hope you all liked it! This being my first OS, I'd LOVE to hear back from you guys!! Please Like and Comment and I'll appreciate it if you guys gave me feedback and constructive criticism! Thank-you so much for reading 😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Res 😃

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Jani This was Absolutely mindblowing 👏 👏
U wrote it Beautifully 👍🏼
Loved it 😛
and yeah Do write more !!!

Wohooo i am the First to comment on ur very First OS ! 🥳 🥳
Edited by .....Rafid..... - 14 years ago
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Aww thank-you Rafid 🤗
Glad you liked it 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow this was really nice. I really liked your writing style. Continue soon please! Evil you for leaving a cliffhanger! 😛 But loved it! Great job! 😃 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awww Sweety u have done a gr8 job👏👏, loved it❤️
Plz keep writing, will wait for ur next OS😛

Wah wait a min, Jani this was ur First OS Babes🥳

Awesome👍🏼

Edited by CutePari9 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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What will happen next
Can't wait
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Originally posted by: siddy9171

Wow this was really nice. I really liked your writing style. Continue soon please! Evil you for leaving a cliffhanger! 😛 But loved it! Great job! 😃 👏

Aww thank-you so much😊 Glad you enjoyed it!😃 Hahaha I know I'm evil for leaving a cliffy, but hey, makes things interesting, nah?😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: CutePari9

Awww Sweety u have done a gr8 job👏👏, loved it❤️

Plz keep writing, will wait for ur next OS😛

Wah wait a min, Jani this was ur First OS Babes🥳

Awesome👍🏼

Aww thank-you Zunni 😃
Hahaha yes, this was my first!😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow..continue soon. This was amaZing
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Usma55

What will happen next

Can't wait

Thank-you 😃

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