OS : Blessings come disguised updt part6 on pg18

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This a bit mature OS.. so only above 18+ enter

Arnav downed the third glass of whisky and slammed the glass on the table as he recalled Shyam's words, "what did you think saale saab, just because you stopped putting money in my account, i would stop loving Khushiji? even if I were to stop loving her, she would never stop loving me. the truth is before your eyes. She would never let another person touch her other than me. That is why she irritates you so much that you dont bed her. She cannot even bear to let anyone be intimate with her like i have been. The nights myself and Khushiji spent together were so..."
He hadnt let Shyam continue. He had hit out at Shyam so hard, that Shyam had become unconscious.

He was disgusted now. He hated himself for loving such an immoral girl, who would have a physical affair with a married man. Recently, he had almost fallen for her innocent games. As he looked at the 3 bottles of whisky he'd finished in one go, he made a resolution " Today I wont leave you Khushi Kumari Gupta "

He staggered to his room to find Khushi watching TV. He bolted the door, closed all the curtains, snatched the remote from her and put the volume of the TV in full.

Khushi, looked at him confused, " Arnavji, what are you doing. Are you drunk? "

Arnav stared at her and heard Shyam 's voice in his head. he advanced on her
Khushi, starting to get scared, " What do you want Arnavji ? "

Arnav shouted at her, above the high volume of the TV, " SHUT UP"

He lunged at her and pinned her onto the bed. He ripped her clothes apart. He was a mad man now. He had been betrayed by the only woman he had ever loved apart from his family.He did everything in extremes. If he hated, he hated like hell, if he loved , he loved like hell too. He would not let her fool him any more with her cries.
Khushi cried out, " Arnavji, nahin, hume chodiyeee " Her cries were drowned in the loud blast of the TV.
Arnav could feel her cries ripping his soul apart. But he ignored them . he kissed her harshly , tasting blood in his mouth. She kept on wriggling and trying to get out from under him. He wouldnt let her go. He ran his hands all over her body and pried her legs apart. He entered her swiftly ripping out a sharp cry from her mouth. That was when he felt her maiden head tearing, He stopped, stunned and looked down at her crying face. he removed himself from her to see the blood on her thighs.

He couldnt believe what he was seeing , " She was a virgin. She was untouched, pure.. and he had..Oh God!! What had he done? He had literally raped his innocent wife, believing the lies of Shyam." He felt the tears form in his eyes.

Feeling him move away, Khushi turned to his side and hugged him hard and cried. " Arnavji, I am feeling so much pain. What is happening. What did you do, Please dont go, Please hold me. "

Arnav couldnt believe what was happening. He had tried to rape her and she had turned to cry in his arms. He didnt deserve this faith and trust she had in him. He felt fresh tears on his face, and said brokenly " I am so sorry Khushi. I believed it when Shyam said that you loved him. That you were in a physical relation with him"

Khushi lifted her head up and stared at him in disbelief, " So all this you did was because you believed that Shyam??? You thought I was in love with him. You thought he and I..." Her voice trailed as her mind processes what Arnav had said.

With blazing eyes Khushi slapped Arnav hard, " i hate you Mr. Raizada. I hate you for having forced yourself upon me, I hate you for having blackmailed me into a marriage, but I hate you most for not having trusted me. You have destroyed the basic foundation for a sacred marriage. " She shouted clutching the blanket close to her with tears in her eyes

" Khushi.. Khushi , please forgive me. I will cancel the 6 month contract and make the marriage forever" Arnav said heartbrokenly

" No you wont. Now I dictate the terms. The 6 month contract stands. We will separate after 6 months. And if you are going to manipulate the contract and cancel it, just keep it in mind that it would be better for me to die rather than live every day of my life with a person like you" Saying so Khushi stormed into the bathroom gathering her clothes

Arnav stared at the closed bathroom door. he couldnt believe what he had done. He was a man of the worst kind. He hated himself. He couldnt stay in this room without suffocating. He walked out of the room

Khushi sat on the bathroom door crying. " Oh Devi Maiyya. what wrong have i done that my life has become such hell? I wish I had never met Arnav Singh Raizada, nevevr fallen in love with him .."

Khushi jerked " Where did that thought come from? me in love with him?? Oh no no no no.. this is so not true" But her heart knew it was. She loved Arnav Singh Raizada, had perhaps loved him from the first moment she d seen him, she'd fallen into his arms. Her heart knew, but her brain would not accept

Khushi sobbed even more, " Oh devi maiyya, I cant believe my heart. Even though that rakhshas has wronged me in the most demeaning way possible, my stupid heart still continues to love him, yearns for him " She put her head on her knees and cried for herself, for the way her life had played out, for the way she had been manhandled tonight, and mostly for the fact that she now knew for sure that she,Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada, was unconditonally and irrevocably in love with Arnav Singh Raizada


Hey guys.. howz it.. should i go for a part 2?? plz say


PART 2 ON pg 2
PART 3 ON pg 7
PART 4 ON pg 12
PART 5 ON pg 14
PART 6 ON pg 18
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yu've done a fantastic job!!!! It was really brutal the way Arnav behaved.. I liked yur concept , but forcing himself on a woman is the most disgusting thing a man can do... Marital rape is such a tricky issue, but yu wrote it nicely 👏 ... But , i seriously think tht if a woman can really love a man who robbed her innocence ???. Do continue...
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Please continue... Would love to know how Arnav gets back her trust and kicks shyam's ass...
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Yes yes continue. Interested to know how or what Arnav's reaction is going to be.
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AWESOME!!
Please continue with a part 2
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dat was horrible !!! no, not ur writing... i meant d incident...do continue n tell us how asr is going to correct his mistake...
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Please do continue. Its too good to be that short

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Incredible storyline ,well written pls continue most eager to read part 2
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Part 2

It had been a week since that horrible night. Khushi had not told anyone about it. She had gone back to her usual jolly countenance so that no one would suspect anything. This was not something she could share with anyone. She hardly saw Arnav anymore. He would come in late after she slept and get up and leave early before she even woke up. She knew he slept on the couch now, She was busy nowadays. Her catering business was doing good. Everyone at AR office loved the foodd. She was so busy, she didnt have time to think about anything anymore.

Arnav too kept himself busy to escape the raging guilt in his heart. He didnt know how he could make up to her. He knew she was in the office supplying everyone food. He could see her, through his glass windows, running about, asking people to eat more, making sure everyone liked the food. Everyone likedd her food, most of all her famous jalebi's. But she never came up to his room. She sent his food through the peon. He wished she would come, atleast to fight with him. He missed his conversations with her, her pranks, everything.
The peon came up with his food. Today there was an extra box with the usual lunch set. Wondering what it contained, he opened it to find jalebis inside. He was about to call the peon back and send back the jalebis, when he saw a note sticking out. A single word was written on it "SUGARLESS". His heart skipped a beat and his face broke out into a smile. She had made those especially for him. Hope rose in his heart like a tidal wave. He was so happy that he reached Raizada house much much earlier than before.

Khushi was thrilled today. She had earned her income today from the catering business. She had bought gifts for everyone.
"This is for you naniji, for you mamiji and you jiji" Khushi gave her gifts to them smiling
" and this one's for you di " she handed over anjali's gift.
Seeing all this Shyam asked Khushi sweetly, " What about me, Khushiji. No gift for me."
Khushi looked at Shyam and said simply, " A gift to di equals giving you a gift jeejaji, as before devi maiyya, you both are one."

Arnav stood at the entrance hearing this.
"Chote, you re early today" Anjali said looking at Arnav
Khushi jerked her head to see Arnav standing at the doorway. She had not seen him the whole week. She had not even caught sight of him, eventhough she had looked at his office windows time and again.
Arnav looked at Khushi longingly. His heart beat sped up the moment she looked at him. He wondered what she was thinking.

" Chote khushiji, why re you both staring at each other as though you ve not seen each other for a long time" Anjali asked smilingly snapping both Arnav and Khushi from their trance.
"Khushiji what gift have you bought for our saale saab" Shyam asked mockingly
Before Khushi could say anything, Arnav replied, " dont worry jeejaji. She gave me my gift in the office itself." His heart warmed at the thought of the sugarless jalebis she had made for him.
Shyam scowled and muttered, "Hope you ve thanked her for it"
Arnav smirked and replied," No, I have yet to thank her for it. But it would be better for me to do that in our room when we are alone, so as not to embarass anyone"
Khushi's eyes widened as she started to understand what he was impying.
Anjali and nani looked at Arnav in shock. They had never seen this side of him.
Mamiji, started fanning herself, saying, "Anjali bitiya, its getting hotter in here. I am going to my a/c bedroom." Anjali smiled and went to her bedroom followed by a scowling Shyam. Payal and nani left giving some lame excuse leaving Arnav and Khushi alone. Khushi's heart beat sped up as he made his way towards her.
Arnav walked upto Khushi, and said, " I wanted one sign from you that you would atleast try to forgive me for the beast I was. I got it today in the form of those sugarless jalebis. Now I know I stand a chance and I wont give up on us yet, Mrs. Arnav Singh Raizada..."

Pls tell me how is it..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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😆 I'm stalking yu... So again me first!!!!
Okay... After the heavy duty first part, it was quite toned down ... I luved tht 'sugarless ' jalebi gesture 😳 ...Lets see how Arnie will redeem himself and thank her for the jalebis 😉
Very nice update 👏 update soon...
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