New ff-: The fateful night note on pg147

Hello friends, I have read many ff's in this forum on abhiya. I am not a good writer. It's my first attempt to write something. I have a concept in my mind. So, just thought of writing it. PROLOUGE
A speedy black colour mercedes was coming through the dense forest of dehradhun. It seems like the person driving the car was drunk. Suddenly, a scream came from somewhere. The car came to a halt. A handsome young lad with blue eyes came down. Fear can be clearly seen written over his face. He came forward and saw a young girl with curly hair wearing a red lehenga lying on the ground in a pool of blood. Her face cannot be seen...Ps-: Do hit like button if u like it and pls comment. Sorry, for any mistake. Character sketch and chapter one will be coming later.

Character sketch on pg3
Chapter1 pg7
Chapter2 pg11
Chapter3 pg15
Chapter4 pg20
Chapter5 pg24
Chapter6 pg 29
Chapter7 pg 34
Chapter8 pg40
Chapter9 pg 46
Chapter10 part a pg51
Chapter 10 part b pg 52
Chapter11 pg 58
Chapter12 pg66
Chapter13 pg 76
Chapter14 pg84
Chapter15 pg93
Chapter 16 pg100
Chapter 17 pg108
Chapter 18 pg 117
Chapter19 on pg 126
Chapter 20 on pg 136
Here is the link for next bk
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2965283

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