nice and emotional update and you are so sweet and cute like
Originally posted by: mayapari
awesome...
again strong emotions dr...๐คloved it...ur gonna die ...๐กwe gonna murder yu...๐...not oly juthis but also rotten eggs tomatos๐๐nothing shd happen to geet n baby...plzzz plzzz plzzz
Life plays! It's a game! Trick! Anything you want to name it..!! It's not simple, or cup of tea..!! he hugged himeslf tighter & tighter'hurting his bleeding heart
My mistake was endless but I count myself lucky that I even have a wife who once loved me madly, unconditionally, but I am the most unluckiest person who failed to recognize it
The room was dark like me... Filled with the shade of black..!! Only light he wanted was his geet. She was my light even in the darkness..!!
Will I be able to keep it..!! he thought
He remembered the time when he remembered the time she asked him the same question
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Maan'she whispered cuddled up in his embrace playing with his entangled fingers with hers
Hmm'..he nuzzled close to her neck giving a sensuous soundable kiss
Maan...I was just wondering...agar aisa kuch ho you have to choose between you and me'he grip tightened and his eyes shot up with blood
Stop...he gripped her wrists and pinned her harshly to bed
Maan it's hurting...she whimpered and a tear left her eyes
You will never say something like this mind it'he warned
I was just asking'she was in pain but was happy that at least now he was showing some concern for them...some emotions
I said stop it'he greeted her teeth making her shiver
Maan'she again wimped but he was nowhere near listening
Iss baby ko kuch nahi hoga'I will never let this happen
I won't give anyone a chance for this question to come up
Never'yeh khurana hai..
Maan Singh Khurana ka baby I won't'
her all dreams all misconceptions everything once again shattered down completely...he is worried for the baby...not for me...all he wants his child...she closes her eyes again in surrender not able to comprehend with him she just gave in again...not able to deny him...a wife, a woman, a lover, a human was losing everything slowly and steadily
as if some slow poison was injected in her blood poisoning her ever so slowly giving her a slow death day b day...
all she wanted was love but again he took away everything with his cold harshness towards her
still a motherly part of heart was happy at least he cares for our baby let alone his mother he cares for baby atleast...feeling contented with that she just gave in his passionate aggression
Kissing harshly, biting piercing her skin
He was harsh'really harsh
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His eyes closed and tears flooding out of his eyes
Nothing seemed correct
I was soo wrong Geet always'I was always doing mistakes
I never took anything for serious about you
It will be always you geet...i love the baby
But not more then you
Nothing can take your place not even are love'
It will be always you jaan always you
I told you I won't let this question come but here I am the reason for this question
I an th only person who is responsible for your condition
N now'Maan Singh Khurana dying every passing moment jaan it's just your maan
Just yours who can't loose his Geet at any cost
Please jaan don't hate me for this I really love my baby but I love you more
I always did but this stupid MSK dint let Maan know it
M sorry'I really am for everything
For ach moment, each pain
Now even this sorry seems a joke with all these realizations and remorse I know I don't deserve it but don't leave me...he bitterly smiles a bit at his own built fate at himself with tears still making there way down
I am yous jaan
this Maan is only and only yours
now even your Maan sounds shallow jaan
please come back...once...just once i will never let you go away
no power will be able to take you away from me...no power...just once
Please your Maan will die...
N this time MSK won't be good for anyone jaan don't do this to me
please
Thousand question...million clarification...his mind was filled of thoughts but nothing seems to come to a point...He was lost...lost in his own world...in the terance to fight the inner turmoil to fight the beat residing in this ruthless man
a hand rests on his shoulder n he blankly looks at the owner'
he looks up...to find doctor...he stood up holding doctors arm as if it was the only support of life for him'doctor...doctor hows she...wo kaisi hai...usko kuch hua to nahi...n baby...mera bacha doc...humara bacha...Aap kuch bolte kyu nahi...kuch to boliye...he said it all without breathing in on go
Mr. Khurana calm down...baby is fine...you became father of a baby girl she will be shifted to ICU in a while as its premature delivery...But...doc putts her hand on Maan's shoulder
But...he held doc from arms tightly...
Doctor looks down thinking what to say fearing the warth she may have to take after this
why the hell you're not saying anything'
what...???
what is it...he felt helpless for the first time MSK was helpless for his life, his Geet
We did warned your wife is really weak...n on top of it pregnancy...work load, tension, stress, exertion...this pregnancy is not good for her health
but you people didn't listen me n now this premature delivery took its toll on her health
maan fell on his knees not able to take all this fearing the worst to come up
we made it clear don't give her any mental stress...but seems she went through a lott
she had a minor brain hemorrhage but that's in control'the problem is she...doctor looks here and there gathering wits to continue
Maan looked up not knowing how to hear it anymore he was already going through a lot was not able to take anything else now
she is not responding we are trying are level best but rest lies on her own will now...we will observe her for 48 hours...if she don't wake up then...she can drift in coma or may be'we lose her
it seems like she doesn't wanna live anymore her wills to survive have finished...'doctor finished with a heavy breath
maan he couldn't get to a conclusion he just can't take it
he can't think on this line'his life broke down he couldn't take it anymore
he couldn't think of his life without his Geet...he will die before anything happens her'he can't take it even if cost his own life'he can't
he thumped like a lifeless corpse on the floor...Feeling his soul being brutally snatched away from him
Doc patted his back trying to console him'u need to be strong for her...for your child...they need you right now'Please Mr Khurana you can break down like this
' He felt numb, soulless, senseless'he wanted this heart to stop beating
He never felt this vulnerable before as if he cannot breath anymore without her smell filling the air around him
he seems to be a ghost waken up from his death grave
gather yourself not for yourself but for them..doc patted his back to sooth him
but his inner war was nowhere to be stop before he gets to feel his life'his geet
but for the sake of her'there love'he wiped her tears and got up
Where's are baby...he asked looking down the floor tiles
can I see her'he looked towards doc with pleading eyes
yess but with certain precautions'she smiles a little and calls the nurse and told her to help him
he enters the children ICU...
Precap: Maan meeting there baby
and a little more about past
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โค๏ธLuv Divzi
feeling really bad for him
but wat he did is not forgetable
he deserve this
juz bcoz of him
geet is nw in this conditoin
somewhere i have sympathy for him dat he realising wat he has done
nd somewhere i hate him to d core for d misreable condition of geet
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