A rare post! *Emotions Expressed*

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey guys!!

I miss y'all like crazy and tonight I just couldn't help it!

Thanks to MANAL!!🤗

Anyway.. I'm sorta out of practice..but here goes..
oh..I LOVED THE EPI SOOO MUCH!!😳

For a second that stretched into eternity,

I saw my angel dance with ecstasy

Her shining eyes filled with love and joy

That only increased when she looked at me

Oh! Lucky man that I was,

She was mine!

My wife, my love, she was everything good

Nothing more I wanted if I were now to die!

As I lost her in the blink of an eye

My heart beat subsided and my breath stopped

Where did she go? I looked around like a madman

And seeing her again, out of my chest it almost hopped

There she was, like a child, rubbing her eye

And I felt her tug at my heart strings

Calling me to her, I walked..dazed..

Called her name, to see if it was a beautiful dream

She held my hand, a firm touch of forever

It grew stronger as I held on to her

She held my face like I was loved

The simplest move, made my heart stir

She looked into my eyes and simply told me this

Her heart beat so loud, she put my hand over it

That resounding sound, uniting the two of us

Deeper than any other bond, united us in the bond of love

I carried her to the pool side, in my lucky arms

The most beautiful woman, in a lucky man's heart

Was she my wife? Did she tell me she cared?

I was in a daze as I saw divinity in her innocent face

Those red-rimmed brown eyes opened,

Saw me with innocence and trust in them

I hadn't answered her question she said,

And quietly, broke through my last defense

I was bound to her, in love purest of all

I touched her face, as I moved closer to her

Consumed with the need to unite our lives and hearts

As our heart beats had united despite efforts to draw them apart


I love u guys!

Tight hugs and love!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Geetli...
Wat-e-loverly poem! 🤗 Blew me away! Just like the episode😉


*Pallo spraying disinfectant on the blanket*
Hullo loverlies!
Long Tym! 😆
*Sitting on a tootsie roll n waving wildly*

*RANDOMness ALERT*

So episode began with Li'l Bo Peep searching for the sheep...🤣
*Dodges the bludgers*
Okay. Okay. It began with Hawt-wa searching for his Blush-va...
*Tossing Sherlock Holmes magnifying glass to ASR*
Note: Who ever hasn't watched Sherlock Holmes: Game of Shadows...GO WATCH NOW!😎
Back to HAWT-wa's search katha...


Cut to...
Blush-va trapped by CREEP-zilla!
*ASR...Cudn't u gift her a pepper spray for the marriage?*
*Pallo choking on a pile of batshit*
I'll just skip past this part!
(BTW...Abhaas is one helluva actor. *take a bow*)


*WT...WT...WT...WT...Bloody...F moment rolling in*
Creep-zilla slithering into Hawt-wa's bedroom and discovering dat li'l piece of blanket stuck to the poolside plants compound...
*Breathe in breathe out*
Glad the CVs dint torture us by showing he smelled REAL DEEP into the blanket!
*Ewww shudders*
IMAGERY HALT!


And now for the most ETHEREAL MOMENTs of the episode...
*Pallo kicking grammar and rhyme scheme into the thickets of the Great Amazon Rain Forests*
🤣

Every drop kisses her cheek
Seizing every breath in me
How I wish I could reveal
Truly what she does to me


I can sense him from afar
My pulse quickening in response
Memories flood
Heart thuds
Just loan me one moment of magic

I see the tear clinging there
And feel an odd suffocation
I let my breath ease it away
And feel her hesitation


His eyes drop and he walks away
No. My love, you gotta stay
I hold his hand firm in mine
And snatch the moment that's rightfully mine

Questions abound in those clear eyes
Her voice like music enthralls me
"Why does my heart beat faster around you?"
And my heart stops dead at the words

I've said it aloud I know
Arrested in my heart, that nagging query
His eyes twinkle and I swear I see a small smile
But then blackness overwhelms

*Phew*
That took some effort!

N da POOLSIDE scene...
*Pallo setting up submarine camp in pool*
Can't miss the show!
Bhang-ified ASR and More-Bhangified Khushi...
WARMING up to THE ACT!
*Kodak MOMENT*
Cheese waterfall from ASR's mouth-va! HAYEEE
🤣



*Pallo re-hugging her laziness*
Can't AFFORD to type more!

So yeah...*Dhan Ta Na* Episode from PALLOgical viewpoint! 😆
Rating... ****
(*Kleptomaniac Pallo grabbing a star... *)😛

Edited by livelygal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Res Res *DANCE *

Edited **
I miss y'all like crazy and tonight I just couldn't help it!

Thanks to MANAL!!🤗

Anyway.. I'm sorta out of practice..but here goes..
oh..I LOVED THE EPI SOOO MUCH!!😳

My Geetu is bk 🤗 !! gosh do u knw ! how much i missed ur Writting ! gosh <3 !! YES people Thnks me tht i bought this lazy bum here 😡 ! 🤣 !! love yeww for doin this for me <3 ! hahaha im sure aaj sab mere ko thnks karenge 🤣


For a second that stretched into eternity,

I saw my angel dance with ecstasy

Her shining eyes filled with love and joy

That only increased when she looked at me

u wrote this so beautifully <3 i just love this bit <3 !! it shows ASR's emotion when he sees her <3 !! dancing like a free bird <3 lost from the world <3 !!


Oh! Lucky man that I was,

She was mine!

My wife, my love, she was everything good

Nothing more I wanted if I were now to die!

Geeetu <3 !! oh im so using this as quote for my next set of siggies <3 !!


As I lost her in the blink of an eye

My heart beat subsided and my breath stopped

Where did she go? I looked around like a madman

And seeing her again, out of my chest it almost hopped

he truly thought he lost her again ! which he cant bare to lose her again ! he lost her alot ! now he just wants to hug her tight n hold her close to his heart n never let go her <3 !! u wrote it beautifullly <3 !! xpressing his feelings ! his emotion of losing her <3


There she was, like a child, rubbing her eye

And I felt her tug at my heart strings

Calling me to her, I walked..dazed..

Called her name, to see if it was a beautiful dream

OMG ! this is my BEST Part <3 !! gosh *dreamy* <3 !! Love yeww <3 !!


She held my hand, a firm touch of forever

It grew stronger as I held on to her

She held my face like I was loved

The simplest move, made my heart stir

FOR the 1st time <3 !! she actually went forward <3 ! i mean just LOVED how she stopped him ! how she wanted to shout for never lettin her go again <3 !!


She looked into my eyes and simply told me this

Her heart beat so loud, she put my hand over it

That resounding sound, uniting the two of us

Deeper than any other bond, united us in the bond of love

OMG GOSH I love yeww ! do u knw how many quotes u gave me for my siggies <3 !!


I carried her to the pool side, in my lucky arms

The most beautiful woman, in a lucky man's heart

Was she my wife? Did she tell me she cared?

I was in a daze as I saw divinity in her innocent face

the way he carried her ! wid so much intense <3 !! how he wants to tell her ! he is always there for her <3 !! n she is the safest ! no Shyam Manohar Jha would do anything to her if he is wid her <3

I was bound to her, in love purest of all

I touched her face, as I moved closer to her

Consumed with the need to unite our lives and hearts

As our heart beats had united despite efforts to draw them apart

and THIS OMG 🤗 ! perfectly describes their emotion <3 !


Edited by -AdiYalicious- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#4
welcome back. you have been missed.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Its beautiful 😊
I loved it..and i missed ur posts 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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*rubs eyes in disbelief* Geet ???? really ????????? 😲😲😲ohhh my !!! i missed u and ur poetries sooo sooo very much yaa...🤗🤗🤗...how r u doing sweets???? hope everythings well and fine at ur end..😃😃..after u decided to leave...never thought i'll get a chance to interact wid u...😭...n wat a day to make a comeback yaar...on such an emotionally draining epi..!!!!

The epi was sheer magical yaa...so poetic...that m still lost in trance !! ❤️❤️ Time really stood still...and it was only and only THEM...everything/ everybody around just faded away...!!! The gazebo scene was so beautifully done...reminded me of their previous gazebo encounter...dat was a very heart touching apology and this was PURE LOVE..!!! The way he blew lightly into her eyes...dat tenderness was soo adorable. Never expected Khushi to make the first move...but glad she did, thereby confirming him of da mutual feelings that they shared. How lovingly she cupped his stubbly cheeks...and asked such an innocent question...he could see her mirror his feelings/ unanswered questions...n his heart filled with love, that even the eyes couldnt stop...but shed a tear in happiness. The poolside scenes was soo serene and heart soothing...how tenderly he wiped those tears...those priceless tears which always gave him a heart prick... Unable to control his vulnerable side any longer...he finally answered...or rather CONFESSED in the most pure way !!!!


ohhh yaaar...m still so lost in the epi...dont know what i ranted...😆😆...hope to see u around geet...ur post was like a cherry on cake today yaar...n so overwhelmed...that i cant describe it in words...take care, wish u all the luck !!! 😃

*toodles* *squishy hug*🤗

Edited by garima_IPKKND - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: memories_im

Its beautiful 😊

I loved it..and i missed ur posts 😊


Thank u so much!!
🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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What does Res mean? 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG!!!
BEAUTIFULLLY WRITTEN...👏

actually"i search of words to appreciate this stupendous piece of work"...

jus loved it😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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You have to trust me when I say this..honest to God.. I was thinking about you yesterday!! Good to hear from you. Thanks for the Post..

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