virman FF Tum se hi..prt 9 updtd pg 14

hiii 😊 guys i m sammi n dis is my 1st ff.i m nt use 2 write any ff before n dis is my 1st so i wnt to dedicate to my swetheart ash,khush n khusnav.so guys hope u like it n plz cmnt hows it.


Part 1- pg 1
Part 2- pg 2&3
Part 3- pg 5
Part 4 pg 6
part 5 pg 7
part -6 pg - 9
Part-7 pg- 11
part- 8 pg 12
part-9 pg- 14



INTRO-
Manvi chaudhari- A 21 yr old girl daughter of a very well known businessman. A grl wit ful of attitude but inside havng a pure heart n a beautiful singer.
MR Dhanraj chaudhary-Father of manvi chaudhary.
Prem yesverdhan-A 22 yrs old guy.son of a lawyer and an honest person havng a fun typ attitude towrds life n he sing only for his frnds.
Mr yasvardhan-A grear lawyer n father of prem.
Frnds of manvi- puja,atul n arjun.
virat sing vadhera-arjuns frnds

part 1-
manvi has returned india few months ago after completng her studies in US
Scene 1
manvi's home
manvi-gd mrng dad...
dad- gd mrng bete...
manvi- dad mai soch rai thi ki mall ghum kr aau qki ghar me toh kuch h nai krne ko toh socha thodi shoppng hi krlu.
dad- ok bete as u wish but the driver will drive yr car nt u ok
manvi-ok dad
in mind dad ko chale jane do unhe pta thodi chalega ki ise maine drive kia kya driver ne.

Scene shift: Mall
As soon as manvi enters d mall.she striks wid a guy.
manvi- Hey!!!!! Dekh kr nai chal skte kya????? Aankhe hai ya button!!!!!
( D guy was non other dan our handsum guy. Prem)
prem- sry mam!!
manvi- sry!!! tm... mhe apni sari cold drink mujh pr gira di!!!!! agr ldkiyo se itna taksane ka shauk hai toh do char ko sath le ker q nai ghumte kmse km stranger se to gaali to nai khani padegi
Prem- listen tmse jitna tamiz pe bt kr rha hua tum to utna hi sar chad rai ho.had me rho apni.
manvi- had haa... tm hote kaun ho mujhko mre had sikhane wale n sry feel krne vajaye tm attitude dikha rhe ho .cloody down market..
prem-wat did u say down market... hello madam dekhiye ap kuch jda bol rhi hai.n wait a min mai apko bp kyu bol rha hu suno tm mra dimag mt khao smjhi mujhe or v kam h.
manvi-ha to mai kaha bol rhi hu ki tnhe kam ni h or kamhota v to yu mujhse half an hr sf argue. ni krte smjhe.
prem-God!!!! yeh ladki bhagwan jane kaun jhelta hoga ise-
both leave frm dere.prem got out of d mall n manvi entred. she has done wid her shoppng so she also left d mall within 1 hour.both reached there home..,
The Next day...
manvi-dad i m gonna go bye see u in d eveng...
dad-take d driver wid yrself
manvi-i can drive well dad.plz i can go alone plz plz plz pjz dad plz.
dad- okay bt be safe while u driving.,luv u beta
manvi- luv u 2...dad bbye
while drivng manvi was bsy in litsning song which was being played in her car.which is as loud ap d whole city can hear it. suddenly se met wid an accident nt major a ninor one as her car strike a opposite car? a man came n shout at manvi guss whom Mr yaswardhan (prem's dad)
manvi- sry uncle glti se lg gya..
man-its ok beta. but be slow as it is a crowded area n u should drite slow n don't take d benifits of yr father's status...
manvi-sry uncle !!!!! i m realy vry sry bt how do u know my dad.
man-i n yr dad r frnds n he told me to judge yr drivng.
manvi- so i m pass or nt??????
man-no beta u should nt play loud music while drivng it breaks yr concentration while drivng.
manvi- ok uncle i will tk care of it.
man- so come lets go home in my car my driver wil tk yr car to my home.
manvi-ok uncle...
man- so tm us se kb aai
manvi-jda ni bs 1 week before n pta h india m kuch msti krneko ni h,so i feel bore at home..
man phone rang
hello
ms chadu-helo mr yasvardhan
mr yas- yes mr chaud.
mr chaud-kya ap mri beti ko kuch dino k liye apne sath rkh skte h wo mai actuly ek meetng k lie us ja rha hu-
yarh- oho.. yer offcurse
chaud-thank u
yarh hang up d ph
manvi- so uncle wats up
man-beta apko hmare sath rhna h kuch dino k liye
manvi-ok
scene shift(at yash home)
d bell rang
prem- yer cmng dad
manvi-bda antryami h apka beta use pta chal gya li aap ho well nice.
dad-helo beta
prem-tum
manvi-oo no... nt again.
prem-yes nt again
dad ap ye kisko utha kr le aye ho
manvi- yeh u mind yr language.
prem-ohh realy... mra ghar h m ho remember dat.,.
manvi- watever
dad-come beta go n get fresh
manvi-ok
prem-dad ye ldki...
dad- ye mre dost ki beti h n no more question n plz iska dhayan rakhna.
prem-dhayan...my foot.
after fews day dey both become frnds n botg. fall in luv wid each other .their F*Ly agree n dey will get marry soom
1 week before marriage
manvi ph rang
manvi-helo
prem-helo mri jaan
manvi-oho mri jaan haa
prem-ha ab to hmri sadi v hone wali h
manvi-kaha ho
prem-drive kr rha hu
manvi-kya???drive krte waqt mujhse bt kr rhe ho... dad ko btau kya.
prem- ni ni pagal ho
aftr dat she hear accident sound
manvi-helo helo prem tm tik to ho helo he...helo
a man cme n pick prem's ph n say mam ap jldi hospitl aiye mai apke husband jao waha le ja rha hu...n ha city hospitl..
manvi shout papa n brust on cryng papa wo...wo ...prem, mujhe jana h
dad-manvi prem kya kuch to bolo...
manvi she ran n reached hospitl where prem lyng in d bed n countng his lst breath ruko mai tmknm ajub
prem-manvi
manvi-prem...tmko kuch ni hone dungi bs thora ruko
prem hold her hand n see manvi cryng n said. jaan mujhse ek vada kro tm kvi v apne ye aakho me arhu ni laogi plz,
manvi-ha pr tmko kuch ni hoga n she hold his hand den d machine beeps indicatng a straight line as sun as manvi see d machine she turned towards prem n is vry helpless seeng her life her luv separatng frm herself
aftr dis accident manvi's dad snd her back 2 us so she joind d famly business...
prcap-virat entry...
so dats it fr now hope u guys like it n plz cmnt wether it is gud or bad yr cmnt r most welcmn will i cntinue ...,
luv u all...
sammi...

sammi that's awesome yaar. loved it to the core and sorry dear for reading it late. got fed up with some work. you should continue soon . i am eagerly waiting for virat's entry.

Awesome yaar you should definately continue...this is such a different concept i think virat will get our mischievious manvi back uff cant wait for virman scenes... When u continue please pm me

Originally posted by: AR_fan1

<font color="#0000ff" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="2">Thank you so much for dedicating this to me love :) It means a lot... You are such a sweetheart...I like the concept, it's different to all the other FF's on VirMan... Refreshing change...😊</font>

<font color="#0000ff" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="2">Omg...Maanvi's love dies 😭Desperately waiting 4 Virat's entry!!!! 😳Pretty sure he is gonna get the chirpy Maanvi back again...continue soon and please do pm me...</font>

<font color="#0000ff" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="2">Thanks for the dedication again😛</font>

thank u dear n yes i will pm u...

sammi that's awesome yaar. loved it to the core and sorry dear for reading it late. got fed up with some work. you should continue soon . i am eagerly waiting for virat's entry.i feel really happy that you dedicated the part to me. thank you so much. here is a big hug for you
thank u khus...i will cntinue sun. 😉

continue plz

Wow sweet please PM me when you update