Dil ne jise apna kaha, PG 12 updated....

sgumi82 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#1

Hello everyone... how r u'll doing.. well Im here with another Fanfic... this time I will keep a continuty in this ... and will continue the other FF very soon...

okie this is the part where Bani is hurt becoz Jai is not able to understand her love for him.. and that she broke his trust again and misundertood him regarding the Park road raaz...

Jab Bani ne Jai se Park road ke sachayi ke baare mei puch toh Jai bina bataye chale gaye. Bani is left in the room shocked by this reaction of Jai and she doesnt know what is going around...

She keeps thinking " Mei ne aisa kya kiya jiski saza aap mujhe is tarah de rahe hei.., mei sirf sachayi jaan na chati hoon. Aap ko taqleef mei nahi dekha jaat hei mujh se. Mei aapki taqleef baanta chahti hoon Mr. walia... kaash aap mujhe samajh paate...toh aaj yeh sab kuch nahi hota... "

Its almost night and Bani keeps waiting for Jai's call.. there is no call from him neither can Bani reach him as his cell phone is turned off.. She falls on the bed.. crying her heart out.. and feels like " mei ne unse aisa bartaav kyun kiya.. unhe bahut dukh pahucha hoga.. pata nahi ab kaise hei woh, kaha hei, aur kya kar rahe hei...Unhe dekhe bina mei ek pal nahi reh sakti...Kyun kiya mei ne aisa...kyun..."...

Its morning and Bani opens her eyes as the sunrays fall on her face... and she says to herself" .. Pata nahi kab neend aagayi.. Mr. walai aye honge ya nahi...".. She gets ready fast and rushes into the living room.. and comes across..Aditya.. and asks him if Jai has come back home.. Aditya says .. haan woh Jai ne kuch der pehle phone kiya tha..woh keh raha tha tumhe inform karne ke liye ki woh shaam ko pahunchega ghar.. bus bani sirf itna kaha Jai ne.. Bani seems sad and just gives a relieved expression as Jai is safe .. Aditya sees bani tensed and asks " kyun bani kuch huva kya tum dono ke beech.. Jai tumhe bata ke nahi gaya kya kal raat ko .." Bani replies " Nahi Aditya uncle.. woh keh ke gaye hei.. pur kab ayenge woh nahi bataya unhone.. isliye.." and she retires to the kitchen...

Okie.. gonna continue..

luv,

savi

Edited by gumisavi - 19 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

98

Views

18.2k

Users

39

Frequent Posters

indiandoll89 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 19 years ago
#2
This sounds good!!! please continue soon!!!
SIKinLoVE thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 19 years ago
#3
ohhhhhh.. cont soon!!!!!.. i wanna know wat happens next.. well DUH!!!!!!!!.. LUVEDDDD IT 👏
balh_luvr thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#4
oh wow it is great savi ji please continue soon 😃
great job savi ji 👏
sgumi82 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#5

PART 2 :

Bani goes into the kitchen but doesnt feel like doing anything as her mind and heart do not permit her to do so 😕. She goes to her room and lies on the bed. She just keeps looking up and the argument between her and Jai keeps rolling in front of her eyes. She then turns on to the side of the bed where Jai sleeps and keeps her hand on the bed and says " Mei jaanti hoon Mr. walia aap mujh se naraaz hei. Aap ki narazgi jaiz hei. Galti meri hi thi.. plzz.. jaldi ajaiye.. mei aapko dekhna chahti hoon.."😭😭

Then she looks at the pic of jai on the table and pics it up.. She keeps staring at it with tears rolling down her cheeks.😭.. She then just kisses the photo and keeps it close to her chest.. closing her eyes.. and says " Mei aap se bahut pyar karti hoon .., aapke bina nahi jee sakti Mr. walia.."..😭

Its almost evening, Bani then thinks to make dinner for Jai.. goes to the kitchen and starts cutting the vegetables.. She then tells tony to inform her when Mr. walia arrives. Tony agrees and continues to do his work. Bani is busy preparing food for her hubby as she is happy he will be home any moment and is desperately waiting to see him. After an hour Tony comes in and informs her that Mr. walia had come home and he is looking for her. She immediately tries to rush out when accidentally her hand hits the knife.. and cuts her finger… She just doesn't care about it and rushes to her bedroom.. She just hurriedly enters the room , but comes to a hault and freezes when she looks at Jai in the room in front of the mirror trying to comb his hair.. Jai looks at the mirror and sees bani standing behind him like a statue.. and gives her a smile.. and lowers hie eyes to just finish his combing when suddenly his eyes expression changes and is shocked , turns towards bani and says " Bani yeh kya huva…"…😳

To be continued…..

luv,

savi

zara18 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#6
WHAT HAPPENS NEXT..... ooo i hope he hugs her lol
SIKinLoVE thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 19 years ago
#7
awwwwww.. haila.. he saw her finger.. rite?!?!? plz cont soon 👏
balh_luvr thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#8
great job savi ji please continue soon aap ka fanfic bohat hi jada acha aur interesting hain 👏
SRKfever thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#9
👏 👏 awsome part
please continue soon
thanx 😳
goldie_ever thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#10
kya huva????? he saw blood???? savi darling post soon this suspence is going to drive me carzy...side not your ff are always written so well...will u cont the other as well??
luv seema

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".