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Posted: 14 years ago

#401

wow !!! both part present and past r perfectloved it

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mysteriousmilli

@mysteriousmilli

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Posted: 14 years ago

#402

Beautiful part...
loved to see that maan made geet's parents to forgive her...😊
I am really confused with geet - dev relationship... 😕😕
😕and scratching my head to understand the reasons behind maan's marriage to sameera...😕
waiting to know the next...

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love2_soma

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Posted: 14 years ago

#403

awesome update dear...

wow...maan ne geet k mummy papa pe bhi jadoo chala diya...kya baat hai...geet toh bhi thoda bahut feel karne lagi maan k liye...dekht hai kab dono pass ate hai...

i love parth...mmmuuuaaahhh...sooo cute...

its really amazing...

i loved it...

thank u sooo much fr such a lovely update...

continue soon plz...

waiting...

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 14 years ago

#404

Oh...I am scratching my head when reading update...

if he was so fast in approaching Geet and knew that he wants her then why the hell he married Sameera...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...

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Mdworld

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Posted: 14 years ago

#405

thanx for all your lovely comments...😃
glad that you all loved parth...😉
k guys..so my break s geetng over...
so you guys won't be geeting regular updates...😭😭
hope you enjoyed this week of regular updates...
anyways, i will try updating whenever possible...
for now here s the next update...so enjoy...😊

RECAP:oh...that s on my way...come i will drop you...he sweetly offered...
now the driver was shocked...he turned around to tell that i will fall a bit differently...
but maan gave him a glare that was enough to make him shut...

thank you so much sir...but its all right...i will manage...
oh come on geet...not many people get a chance to travel with MSK!!!

geet chuckled...and nodded...thank you sir...just one minute...
let me inform my friends first!!! she went back and came back...
and settled on the seat besides maan...when maan signalled driver to start the car!!!

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**PART 18**

AS THE DRIVER STARTED THE CAR...

maan engrossed himself in his mobile again to check his mails...
o rlet us say pretended to...

he spoke without looking out from it spoke...
so how s your studies going on geet??

hmm...geet was busy making patterns on her bag...
fine sir...she smiled looking towards him...but no use maan was busy in his mobile...
she looked back towards her bag and again started making patterns with her fingers...

so,when s ur final exams?
sir..in march...

and what arre you planning to do after that??
b.arch...i want to have a degree in architechture...

so,any specific choice of college??...
SPA or any NIT will do...sir i want to pursue from a reputed college...
good...thats all he replied...

there was silence again...
geet was not geeting bored...and more than that she was pissed off...
she looked out from the window..tried finding something interesting...but of no use...
she looked towards her babajee and prayed...
ye itne boring kyun hai???
mai apni puri life me itna bore nai hui jitn mai 15 mins me inke sath ho gai...
babajee bachao mujhe...
aisa chalta raha to i will end up being a mad person....
she was continuously blabbering...

maan was observing all this from corner of his eyes...
he silently chuckled looking at her antics...

geet agar tumhe mujhse problem hai to mujhse bolo...
why bothering your babajee...maan smirked keeping his mobile aside and looking in her direction...

geet who was busy complaining...stopped abruptly and made a oval face...😲

han geet tell me...why are you disturbing your babajee???

toh ap sb kuch sun rae the??
that s not the answer to my question geet???

phle ap btaie...all this time you were only pretending...
does that mean you were intentionally making me irritated...geet said all gearing up!!!

geet...you didn't hear me correctly...am asking that...
but before he could complete...
geet pointed a finger at him...that was so mean of you Mr.khurrana!!!

geet...meri baat to sunno...maan spoke getting scared of her all of a sudden charging up...
but geet was in no mood to listen...no MSK sir ab ap mujhe sunege!!!...she told while getting up from her seat...
geet...don't get this hyper...maan tried cooling her down...

first of all you offer lift showing that you are so sweet...then you intentionally irritate me...

ye apka koi plan to nai tha na???
plan??? maan spoke making a wierd face!!! what plan???
ha...ap mujhe kidnap to nai kr rae...babajee ab meri sam di ka kya hoga...she spoke looking above...
even maan started looking above with her...and then he lowered his face and looked towards her face...
kidnap and me!!! even he was shocked at her claim ...he shook his face...iss ka kuch nai ho skta!!!
he again looked towards her babajee.. iss ka kuch kro...please!!!

sudden brakes were applied in the car...due to which she fell on his lap...
due to sudden force...she was pushed back on him...her face fell on his neck and her lips touched his nape...
maan closed his eyes feeling her lips as soft as petals on his nape...
she held his neck for support...

you doing all this to take revenge from me...haina...she spoke taking her face off from his neck!!!
revenge??? for what??he asked while gaining his composure...
he smiled thinking...she didn't realize her position...she s busy with her own thoughts...

don't act so innocent maan...uss din when i came before your car...
i wasted so much time of yours...thats why you are doing all this...she spoke pouting cutely while sitting in his lap and her arms around his neck...
wasted??? he asked her while his hands moved very slowly to hold her waist so that she can sit properly!!!

he smiled looking towards her...who told you that moment between us was a time waste!!!
that was the most beautiful moment...he thought...
i met you for the first time then how can be a time waste??

never call that time waste geet!!! i never do anything to waste my time!!! he spoke sternly...
i met you there...if it wouldn't have been that moment how could have i met you??..he asked...
and how could have i found a new friend?? he asked while cupping fer face..

friend she asked?? but we are not friends..she asked frowning...
but we can be one...he smiled assuring her...
so friends...he asked moving his hand forward...
she smiled and gave her hand in for a hand shake...

but then why did you irritate me???...
wo...i was seriously busy in my mails...
just got over when you were complaining to your babajee...and i didn't want to disturb you...
as i loved looking at your facial expressions..
to which both of them chuckled...

waise we both are only friends...but not boyfriend-girlfriend types!!!
waise am a boy and your friend that means your boyfriend...and you being a girl are my friend...so girl friend...
he spoke as now the topic was getting interesting for him...

arrey...its not like that...she spoke while giving expressions as if he didn't know anything...
gf-bf relation is different...

in what sense?? you mean like the relation between you and the boy that was talking to you when i came!!!...
he spoke while remembering...that boy...

you mean dev!!! she chuckled...according to him am his gf...but not for me...
am not that serious...but he likes me ...may be..she poke while thinking...

i don't like that boy...he spoke suddenly...to which she looked towards him from questioning eyes...
i mean...he doesn't seem to be a good person...you should stay away from him...

you also talk like sam di...apki jodi khoob jamegi...
geet...he spoke sternly...
acha baba...i will try to stay away from him...

k...so as we are friends...tell me what do friends do...
umm...they share everything...they don't hide anything...and they chat at nights...
but apke pas to time hi nai hoga...she pouted cutely...
who told you mere pas time nai hoga!!!
tum call to krke dekho...
k...dekhlenge...she spoke and gave her no...
both exchanged there no...

it was then when geet had to store his no. in her mobile...she didn't find her mobile...
she saw it lying on her bag...
she then realised her current position...

she felt embarrased now...she lowered her lashes and tried getting up..☺️
when maan held her tightly...
and spoke...abhi nai geet!!!...sternly...

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P RECAP: **behne de..mujhe behne de**☺️

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NEXT UPDATE:PART 19

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Edited by Mdworld - 14 years ago

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anky_1205

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Posted: 14 years ago

#406

Nice...liked geet's nonstop chanting.
Very cute.

Waiting for the next one

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Zohamaaneet

@Zohamaaneet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#407

wow awesome update dear
do u mind giving me another update today plz plz plz plz plz dear
and geet with her chanting nonstop lolz
that to sitting in msk lap
how cute they both look
and maan being naughty with her
precap is interesting dear
continue soon
but plz give update na plz yaar

Edited by zohafarheen - 14 years ago

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@jssood

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Posted: 14 years ago

#408

I knew geet wont bow down so easily in to maan favour she is also stubborn like him
and love their NOK JHONKgeet sit in his lap and does not noticed her positin love her and your creativity

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Anisha

@anisha_maaneet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#409

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Mdworld

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Posted: 14 years ago

#410

Originally posted by: zohafarheen
<div align="center">wow awesome update dear
do u mind giving me another update today plz plz plz plz plz dear
and geet with her chanting nonstop lolz
that to sitting in msk lap
how cute they both look
and maan being naughty with her
precap is interesting dear
continue soon
but plz give update na plz yaar
</div>

Sry yr!
Wnt b able 2 update 2day!
Anyways thanx 4 likng it 😃