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Angel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#371

Loved the story

please update soon and pm me

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thekolgal

@thekolgal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#372

Hey an amazing update..

Geet n Maan playing naughty naughty holi 😳

and Geet in Maan's arms 😆

waiting for the next update 😊

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shalini_s

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Posted: 14 years ago

#373

wondering what happened in the past that Maan married Sam and not Geet.. hoping that Maan did not kill Sam to be with Geet..

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Nikki...

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Posted: 14 years ago

#374

all parts from 13 to 16 are very well writtennice updates👏👏

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Muskan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#375

Lovely part

Sweet holi moment😳

Ruined by her family

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awesomepooja

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Posted: 14 years ago

#376

Waiting 4 next part.

Edited by awesomepooja - 14 years ago

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Mdworld

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Posted: 14 years ago

#377

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9
👏me first
wowww

on update it is short yaar

and hey
geet parents are not happy with this marriage😡
its a news

now lets see what will be the reaction of maan
after seeing geet cry
waiting for next part👏

I DID MENTION ABOUT GEET S PARENTS BEING ANGRY IN PART 6...
and yes congrats for being first...
and thanx for liking...😃

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Mdworld

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Posted: 14 years ago

#378

Originally posted by: paponecon
geet to gayi puri tarase maan ki dream me...bt i have a query...iss tarha ki dream kya sirf av aye uske mann me ya pehli v the...lets c...

you will have to wait for that!!!😆

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Mdworld

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Posted: 14 years ago

#379

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

awesome update...

Maan wished Holi first to Geet...very sweet gesture...

he is desperately trying to woo her...

Geet's parents are not angry they just worried about her...

anyway if she is happy then they should accept and now she is already married so nothing can be done...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...

yup...you got it right...😳
they are not angry but worried...
they wanted her to live her life and not sacrificing her happiness...
thanx for liking it...😃

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Mdworld

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Posted: 14 years ago

#380

I am back with next update!!!
so how was ur guy's holi...mine was fun...
thanx for lovely comments...got 101 likes in PART 14
AND 91 on previous update...🥳
so a big round of applause for all of you...👏
and yes maan s a bit of grey shade...but not that bad also...
enjoy the next update...

RECAP: geet we would have found a way for that...but what can we do now!!!
you did whatever you felt was right and let us do what we feel is right...

geet couldn't take it anymore...her tears were on verge of falling...
she ran from there...when she dashed into arms of maan...
se didn't have to look who it was...his warmth was enough for her to know who it was...
she broke down in his arms...and started sobbing...

maan was coming towards geet and her parents when he saw her running back and on verge of crying...
before he could say anything she dashed in his arms!!!

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GEET...geet kya hua??? tum ro kyn rai ho??
maan sked patting her...

wo..mumma papa abhi bhi mujhse gussa hai...she spoke while crying...

maan smiled...bs itni si bat pe itne sare asun?? chalo rona band kro...
geet came out of his embrace and looked at him in confusion...

ye bs itni si bat hai?? she asked while cutely pouting...
he chuckled and cupped her face...
geet firstly.. aj holi hai... its a very auspicious day...
toh aj rona nai hai...
and secondly...rai bat tumhare parents ki to i will look after that you go
as annie was asking for you...ok...now give me a big smile...
she smiled and left from there...😃

maan then proceeded where her parents were standing...

he greeted them...
but before he could say anything...

her father spoke...maan beta agr tum geet ke bare me koi bat krne aye ho to
bta do...becoz hum usse naraz hai and usse maafi nai milegi...
let her realize what she did was wrong!!!!

i know that...but pappa think from her perception also...
ap logo se wo do din se jyada dur nai rai...
and here she s beginning with her new life...with new people...
she need your people's blessings and support!!!...maan spoke in order to convince them..

but beta when she took this step..she didn't have our support...
and don't forget maan what she did was wrong...we are her parents...
we also want her happiness...we can not sacrifice our one daughter's life for other's happiness...her father spoke sternly...

papa you are right but just for once keep yourself at her position and then think what she did was wrong or not???
both of you know how dearly geet loved sameera...they both were so close...
whatever geet asked for...sameer fullfilled all her wishes...
then how can geet deny her last wish??? how difficult it would be for her stand against all her loved ones
only keep her promise that she did to her sister!!!
even she could have been selcentered...even she could have denied this proposal...
but no...she stood for parth..as he is the last remembrance of her sister!!!...maan sighed

geet's parents had tears in their eyes...why didn't i never thought so...and they just rushed to geet..

geet was standing alone in a corner...when her father came and hugged her...
mujhe maaf kr de beta...
geet who felt so happy by now spoke...papa ye ap kaisi bat kr rae hai...

nai geet aj bolne de...meri ego merei liye itni jayda important ho gai
thi that i forgot about my own dughter's turmoil...i didn't think
even for once what you were going through!!! mujhe maaf krde...
i didn't realise that meri bacchi kb badi ho gai!!! he spoke drowning in his guilt...

geet who was crying by herself...wiped his tears...papa ap please roiye mt!!!
wo meri galti thi...ap mere papa hai and you never bhi wrong...
her father smiled again hugging her...mera bacha!!!

geet while hugging her father saw maan standing besides her mother and smiling...
she thanked him with her eyes...to which he frowned and then smiled...making her chuckle!!!

geet and maan celebrated holi with all the family members...
and yes how can we forget our parth..

it was his first holi afterall!!!
a small tikka was aplied to him to which he gave his cute smile!!!

geet who busy conversing with annie...didn't realise that maan was standing behind her with a bucket full of water...
he called her...GEET...
she turned around...and
**SPLASH**
the bucket was emptied on her...geet was too shocked..rather say too numb to react...

while maan and annie were laughing like fools...
geet was fuming by now...maan apki to mai...and started chasing him...
she took a thali full of gullal and emptied over him and started laughing looking at his face...
maan was by now lost in her laughter...it has been such a long time when he had heard her laughter!!!

both geet and maan's parents were smiling looking at both of them and prayed to god that unki khushiyon ko kissi ki nazar na lage!!!

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~~PAST~~

maan was coming back from a meeting when his car was stopped at the red light...
maan was busy checking his mails..when he heard a musical laughter...
it automatically brought a smile on his face...he looked towards the source...
he saw her passing from there with her friends...
she was in her school uniform and was carrying her back...it looked like as if there school just got over...

geet was busy gossiping with her friends...when all of a sudden dev came from back and poked her from back...

geet i want to make it official...wil you come on a date with me...
all her group cheered and whistled...

dev...i told you am not that serious...
but geet i love you...i seriously love you...
i know that dev...but am not serious about this entire relationship...you know that...
theek hai geet...but a date wont spoil anything...
geet smiled...but before she could utter a word...she heard a horn of car...
she looked towards the audi that came to halt besides her...

she didn't need anyone to tell to whom it belonged...
maan lowered his window and looked towars geet while removing his glasses...
hi MS.GEET HANDA...he spoke...

when maan saw her laughing...he noticed dev approaching geet...
ye toh wo hi ladka hai jo uss din...he unknowingly clutched his fists...

driver...park the car at your right towards that group of students...
but sir its red light..
i give a damn to it...park the car means...park it...

driver without uttering a single more word proceeded the car towards them...
he then saw dev asking her something...to which she smiled...
before she could speak...maan asked the driver to blow the horn...
and thus the car was parked besides her...when he lowered the window and spoke...
hi..Ms.GEET HANDA...

geet was surprised seeing him there...she left dev in between and rushed towrds man..
What a pleasant surprise sir??? how come you here??

UHH...i was returning from a meeting...
and what about you??

sir...my school just got over and was reurning to home!!!

k...waise where do you live?...
sir vasant kunj...she smiled...

oh...that s on my way...come i will drop you...he sweetly offered...
now the driver was shocked...he turned around to tell that i will fall a bit differently...
but maan gave him a glare😡 that was enough to make him shut...

thank you so much sir...but its all right...i will manage...
oh come on geet...not many people get a chance to travel with MSK!!!
he smirked...
geet chuckled...and nodded....thank you sir...just one minute...
let me inform my friends first!!! she went back and came back...
and settled on the seat besides maan...when maan signalled driver to start the car!!!

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PRECAP: exchanging no.s...me wondering what will
maan do now???

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