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Here is a FanFic for after the India episode when Shyaam sees Radha in a bus. We're behind in the UK so forgive me if I''ve started off from da wrong place! Lolz neways..I hope u like it..I spent quite a lot of time and I havnt really written a FanFic before..Also my Hindi is quite bad so if dere r sum lines which dont make sense den forgive me! 😊
FanFiction: PKDN-ERES
Shyaam shouts out "Shyaama" and Radha turns towards him suddenly. She frowns and continues to stare at him.
Sweetie: What are you looking at?
She also turns and sees that it is the same boy from Manali.
Sweetie: OMG Radha..yeh to wahi hain! Woh ladka..who you hit in Manali!
Shyaam: (Still in car) Shyaama! Finally I've found you!
Sweetie is confused.
Sweetie: Radha...yeh tumhe Shyaama kyun bolaraha hain?
Radha is also confused. She shrugs and frowns at him angrily.
Shyaam hears that Sweetie called Shyaama Radha and realises that Radha is her name in this birth. He shouts over the traffic.
Shyaam: Radha..tum mere Shyaama ho. Yaad karne ki koshish karo Radha. Tum Shyaama thi. Humne kasam kayi thi..har janaam mein saath rehni ki. Try and remember Shyaama...! Try and remember Radha...!
Radha suddenly gets a flashback of herself as a village girl but shrugs it off (ignores it) and angrily shouts at Shyaam
Radha: How dare you..Didn't I tell you Sweetie..these types of ladke never change! Wase ki wase rehjate hain!
Before Shyaam can say anything, the traffic begins to move again and the bus drives away. Shyaam drives as fast as he can to try and catch up but the bus gets away. He bangs his fist on the steering wheel angrily.
Shyaam: Nahin Adi..I lost her again! Why is God doing this to us? Why won't she remember?
Adi consoles Shyaam telling him to calm down, that everything will be okay and he will definately meet Radha soon.
Adi: Now you atleast know her name..it will be easier..and one of these days she's bound to remember. Tum parishaan math ho Shyaam. Sab kuch teek hojayega!
Radha reaches home and throws her bag on the sofa angrily, irritated with Shyaam. Her sister sees her.
Sister: (I've forgotten the name sorry!) Arreh Radha..tumhe kya hua? Tum itni parishaan kyun ho?
Radha: Kuch nahiin Didi..bas yunhi
Her sister shakes her head.
Sister: Acha phir..jaldi seh fresh hojao..tab tak mein kana lagathi hoon.
Her sister walks off, leaving Radha alone, still frustrated.
Everyone is at the dinner table eating. Radha is quiet, still angry. She doesn't eat and instead uses her spoon to play with her food..lost in her own world.
Papa: Arreh Radha..tum kana kyun nahiin karahi ho? Sab kuch teek hai na?
Sister: Ha Papa..yeh to subhe seh hi aisi hain..jab seh yeh mandir seh ayi hai..bahut parishaan hai..patha nahiin kyun
Radha: Nahiin..kuch nahiin Papa..bas aisi hi..actually I'm not hungry. Mein sone jao?
Papa: (Confused) Um..sure
She goes..leaving everyone at the table bewildered.
At night, Radha is lying down in her bed, trying to sleep. She tosses and turns and gets flashbacks of Shyaam in the car shouting out "Shyaama" and then a
flashback of Kisan in the previous birth shouting out "Shyaama" aswell.
She gets up shocked.
Radha: (To herself) Yeh kya horaha hain mujhe? Kyun mein uske baremein soch rahiin hoon..aur pathe nahiin kyun mujhe aisa lagraha hain ki maine use pehle kahiin mila..kyun?
She suddenly hears a piano playing the title track faintly in the distance..she gets up and looks all around.
Radha: Yeh dun..maine kahiin suna hai..lekin kaha?
She runs out of her room and goes outside. The song becomes louder. She runs down the road and the song once again becomes louder. She sees a building and now the song is really loud. She runs inside and it is a dancing hall. At the back of the hall, there is a piano with somebody sitting playing the tune. She can't see who it is because he has his back to her.
Shocked, she steps forward to see who it is but before she can see him or ask who it is, he stops playing the tune. There is silence for a few minutes, Radha is still confused. She is once again about to ask who it is when he starts playing the tune again, but this time...more slowly. Radha begins to dance like she danced in the flashback..you can hear her payal with the music as she is dancing. She continues to dance until he stops again.
Then it is silence again and she walks up to him. His back is still to her and you can't see his face. She puts her hand on his shoulder.
He turns around.
It is Shyaam.
To be continued..
Plz reply with ur comments..only den Ill continue it 😛
FanFiction: PKDN-ERES
Shyaam shouts out "Shyaama" and Radha turns towards him suddenly. She frowns and continues to stare at him.
Sweetie: What are you looking at?
She also turns and sees that it is the same boy from Manali.
Sweetie: OMG Radha..yeh to wahi hain! Woh ladka..who you hit in Manali!
Shyaam: (Still in car) Shyaama! Finally I've found you!
Sweetie is confused.
Sweetie: Radha...yeh tumhe Shyaama kyun bolaraha hain?
Radha is also confused. She shrugs and frowns at him angrily.
Shyaam hears that Sweetie called Shyaama Radha and realises that Radha is her name in this birth. He shouts over the traffic.
Shyaam: Radha..tum mere Shyaama ho. Yaad karne ki koshish karo Radha. Tum Shyaama thi. Humne kasam kayi thi..har janaam mein saath rehni ki. Try and remember Shyaama...! Try and remember Radha...!
Radha suddenly gets a flashback of herself as a village girl but shrugs it off (ignores it) and angrily shouts at Shyaam
Radha: How dare you..Didn't I tell you Sweetie..these types of ladke never change! Wase ki wase rehjate hain!
Before Shyaam can say anything, the traffic begins to move again and the bus drives away. Shyaam drives as fast as he can to try and catch up but the bus gets away. He bangs his fist on the steering wheel angrily.
Shyaam: Nahin Adi..I lost her again! Why is God doing this to us? Why won't she remember?
Adi consoles Shyaam telling him to calm down, that everything will be okay and he will definately meet Radha soon.
Adi: Now you atleast know her name..it will be easier..and one of these days she's bound to remember. Tum parishaan math ho Shyaam. Sab kuch teek hojayega!
Radha reaches home and throws her bag on the sofa angrily, irritated with Shyaam. Her sister sees her.
Sister: (I've forgotten the name sorry!) Arreh Radha..tumhe kya hua? Tum itni parishaan kyun ho?
Radha: Kuch nahiin Didi..bas yunhi
Her sister shakes her head.
Sister: Acha phir..jaldi seh fresh hojao..tab tak mein kana lagathi hoon.
Her sister walks off, leaving Radha alone, still frustrated.
Everyone is at the dinner table eating. Radha is quiet, still angry. She doesn't eat and instead uses her spoon to play with her food..lost in her own world.
Papa: Arreh Radha..tum kana kyun nahiin karahi ho? Sab kuch teek hai na?
Sister: Ha Papa..yeh to subhe seh hi aisi hain..jab seh yeh mandir seh ayi hai..bahut parishaan hai..patha nahiin kyun
Radha: Nahiin..kuch nahiin Papa..bas aisi hi..actually I'm not hungry. Mein sone jao?
Papa: (Confused) Um..sure
She goes..leaving everyone at the table bewildered.
At night, Radha is lying down in her bed, trying to sleep. She tosses and turns and gets flashbacks of Shyaam in the car shouting out "Shyaama" and then a
flashback of Kisan in the previous birth shouting out "Shyaama" aswell.
She gets up shocked.
Radha: (To herself) Yeh kya horaha hain mujhe? Kyun mein uske baremein soch rahiin hoon..aur pathe nahiin kyun mujhe aisa lagraha hain ki maine use pehle kahiin mila..kyun?
She suddenly hears a piano playing the title track faintly in the distance..she gets up and looks all around.
Radha: Yeh dun..maine kahiin suna hai..lekin kaha?
She runs out of her room and goes outside. The song becomes louder. She runs down the road and the song once again becomes louder. She sees a building and now the song is really loud. She runs inside and it is a dancing hall. At the back of the hall, there is a piano with somebody sitting playing the tune. She can't see who it is because he has his back to her.
Shocked, she steps forward to see who it is but before she can see him or ask who it is, he stops playing the tune. There is silence for a few minutes, Radha is still confused. She is once again about to ask who it is when he starts playing the tune again, but this time...more slowly. Radha begins to dance like she danced in the flashback..you can hear her payal with the music as she is dancing. She continues to dance until he stops again.
Then it is silence again and she walks up to him. His back is still to her and you can't see his face. She puts her hand on his shoulder.
He turns around.
It is Shyaam.
To be continued..
Plz reply with ur comments..only den Ill continue it 😛
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