Fan-fic-PM after marriage-Completed-pg-22

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Posted: 19 years ago
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After reading a lot of fan-fic I thought I would make my own,if u think I should continue then pls tell me!!

Here was Mukti in her red sari ready to get married to the person she loved or maybe still loves, but this was her only option.

Little bit about the background: Couple of days back Mukti's father Jeevan was on his last stage o goof leukaemia and his only wish before dieing was 2 see Mukti get married 2 Prem (Who Jeevan still thinks Mukti loves).At the same time 'The Sharad rape case' was reopened because public found Prem in some way guilty aswell.The only option left 4 Prem also is get married 2 Mukti so it looks like he 'loves' and 'cares' 4 her!!

Just as Mukti was finishing her final touches of jewellery in front of her body-size mirror when Prerna came.

Prerna: Hurry up,Mukti

Mukti: Just hold on a sec, chotima

After sometime Mukti was brought downstairs 2 the mandip where she was seated next to Prem who looked least bothered. The Pandit started to chant the prayers and asked the Mukti and Prem 2 take the saat phera's for the next seven lives together.

Jeevan:Come on Mukti get up.Prerna repeated the same 4 Prem.The couple then slowly and reluctantly got up!!

"I don't know if I can live seven days with you", whispered Prem loud enough so that Mukti can hear it.

After the marriage Prem&Mukti were now an official couple.At the Bajaj house Prem&Mukti were congratulated by everyone and then were sent 2 their room.

"I am sleeping on the bed and you'll sleep on the couch, understood"? Mukti yawned as came out of the toilet wearing her cute nighti.

"This is my room, basanti", Prem said as he sat on his bed gesturing to claim it.

"Correction,Mr Prem I am now ur wife I have full rights in this room as much as you"

"Fine"

"OMG, Prem tumne itni jaaldi haar marli"taunted Mukti

"Mai itne jaaldi haar manne walo se nahin ho,Mrs Prem Prerna Sharma",retored Prem.

Mukti got fed up and went 2 sleep. Nxt morning Mukti came out wearing a cut yellow salweer-kameez with sindoor. Prem sat on his bed while Mukti brought tea that Prerna had told her 2 bring 4 Prem.

"Here's ur tea, honey", said Mukti sarcastically

Prem:Don't cal me honey leave that 4 the party in the evening

Mukti:Wat party

Prem:Its a party me and my friends r having 4 our unfortunate marriage .My friends weren't allowed 2 cum due 2, Mother India she said that they would create a scene.And I also challenge u Basanti to look the hottest in the club 2 nite even though I noe u can't.

"I accept u r challenge ,anything that would u suffer at the end!!",said mukti with a determined face.

Will Mukti be able 2 keep her promise??

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow! nice fanfic-i like the way he said mrs prem prerna sharma-i can't wait to read the nxt bit-count soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey dat was rely gud 👏 👏
please cont soon!!! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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very nice, thanx for sharing
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Posted: 19 years ago
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cool yaar i love readin PM fanfics
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Posted: 19 years ago
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very nice... 👏 ..i willl be waiting 4 ur next part...make it soon plz... 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its reely nice plz continue! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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yah it was gr8 plz continue it!i cannt wait 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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In the Evening:

Everyone was enjoying the party except Prem,he was really angry with Mukti cause she was late.

Prem's 2 best friend Rahual who was here with his 6 th fianc ,lily(international model) and Raj who was Prem's other best friend also known as a "ladies man" were eagerly waiting 2 see Mukti.
Thts the dress
All of a sudden the lights went off and there was smoke from the smoke machine. The smoke had started to clear when making an entry was a gorgeous babe wearing a black sleeveless mini dress. She was the prettiest girls any guy ha ever laid eyes on.
"I AM DEFINITELY GOING 2 DANCE WITH DIS GIRL!!" said Prem with his mouth still open with astonishment.

"Me too" said Rahual still staring at the girl.
"Sorry boys ,both of u r taken I am the only single" smirked Raj as he went after the girl 2 ask her 4 a dance.Prem went with him 2 get a closer look.

Prem got the shock of his life it was having a bad dream. The girl was no other than our Mukti which meant Prem lost the challenge!!!!!

Prem quickly got back into reality and pulled Mukti over.
"Mukti wat r u wearing??" shouted Prem!!
"Wats wrong", Mukti said calmly.

All of a sudden their conversation got cut by Prem's friends.

Raj: So...this preety lady belongs 2 u!!
Rahual: Good choice Prem, she's hottttt!!

Prem just smiled and put his hand around Mukti 2 claim her but Mukti pushed him away while no one was watching.

Guys after guys started 2 cum up and asked Mukti 2 dance but Prem was the 1 shooing them 2 stay away from his wife!!
Part 2:

Prem got sick and tired of ppl flirting so then finally he took Mukti home.

When they reached home every1 was standing and then behind Prerna Debonita came out.

Little bit of the history:
Debonita was Prem's gf who he promised 2 he marry but then she had 2 g uncle's house because he was sick.Now she is BACK!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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OHHHHH y is she bak 😆
kl fanfic
count soon

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