*GOa GAmBLe for Love* -KriYaansh SS Part 2- 2/3/12

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Snigdha

@Snigs.

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Rey (To Kria through his eyes )- Baatcutter !! Please forgive me !! I didnt invite Nicole mam to sit besides me !! I had reserved that seat for you ...but how Nicole Mam sat over that !! How can I tell her NO !!!

Kria (She gives him a scornful look ) (Speaks with her eyes) - Ohh ACCHA !!! Mr. LINE-CUTTER !! You sit with your dearest Nicole and I will try to enjoy My BOOK (She takes a book from her bag and starts pretending to read it with her full dedication ... After some minutes , She peeped through her book to see what was Rey doing . To her surprise , he was cheerfully talking to Nicole Mam !! She felt like getting off the seat and Screaming !! ) Kria , stay calm !! Why are you getting bothered let him do whatever he wants ...(Starts reading again )

Rina - ( In a past pace) Ohhh My !!! Kitna Dashing hai woh !!! Hayyyee iske jaise Hotties Goa ayenge toh enjoyment double Ho jayegi !!!!!!

Kria - kya kaun ?? (She noticed Rina looking at Rey . She hits her head with her book and nods in disbelief ) Tum CHUP karogi !! Dikh nahi raha mein padh rahi hoon ...

Wow it was worth reading d above lines..i loved it esp wen kriya hits dat rina wid d book wen she was drooling over rey...=)

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Himani

@Infinities

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

NOTE -

Guys Please add me in your friendlist for PM"s ...Its very difficult for me to PM you all individually and sometimes I miss out on some of you ...Hope you understand 😊 .

Edited by kriyansh117 - 14 years ago

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Tanishtha

@JugHo786

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

amazing!!! especially the last 2 paras were BRILLIANT!!!

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chetna

@crazysky

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#74

awesome
loved each n every line
loved it

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

awsummm update...love it ❤️...u showed true feeling of rey towards kriya n wen rey pulled her towards him n dat lines jst awww...dil chura liya yr...n dose red eyes wich kriya notice was showed dat hw much she loves her linecutter...amazing update...n thnx4 pm n plss update nxt part soon 😊