| Sach?| ArMi Short FF Part 1 Pg 4 (UPDATED 26/2) - Page 4

Originally posted by: teddybear66

its really nice... Do continue... 😊

Originally posted by: ayaniie-chan

RAEEE!! You're truly amazin' at this!! You MUST continue!! I really like it!! Esp loved how you portrayed both their POV & it is so descriptive and you've taken care of like every little details, movements, arjun's presence of mind, his thoughts at every passin' moment!!.. LOVE IT!! Don't know how she'd react in today's epi & I'm now even more eager to read how she reacts here!! Please update soon!!

Originally posted by: ksgfan

I loved it!!
loved how arjun's state of being uneasy and uncomfortable at every moment was expressed..and omg am waiting for the next part already!

Originally posted by: sen_madhuban

first of all...apologies for reading it sooo late...ought 2 have read it b4...

u got d correct hang of d characters dear...& d situation too...

i like arjun's fear...he shud be 2...

d song...pal..pal...pal...is sooo appropriate...

LOVE LETTER!!!...dat is sooo lakshmi style...definitely natural for her...

& he got his inaam...we all now how much he longed for it...but not a very good time 2 b rewarded wen he is sure 2 get a punishmnt!!😆 😆

so my fav parts are:

"LOVE LETTER!" Lakshmi interrupted him, the gleam back in her eyes as she all but bounced on her toes...this was her first official love letter! Of course she had helped many write it before, had read the ones her friends had received, had even sneaked a peak at the letters Saraswati didi got from Jijaji but this was hers! Her own!

Lakshmi started reading the letter and Ajay stared at her retreating back, he drank her in...an unknown fear gripping his heart, like someone had splashed his entire being with ice cold water. He could only hope that all this were just nerves and that nothing would actually happen...that Lakshmi would be angry but she would understand, she would forgive him, she would accept him...she would be with him.

Ab main aapse baad mein baat karti hoon...zara apna pehla love letter toh padh loon!


loved dese lines...

plzzz do PM me...

Originally posted by: Ashwin.kk

You have worked hard.thanks for sharing.

Originally posted by: xTimax

Beautifully written Rae:)

I love your version on how he reveals the truth. Please continue want to know about Lakshmi's reaction.