OS: Unbreak My Heart (Part 2 - Pg. 18)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow..amazing..waiting eagerly to happen such things on show..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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That was amazing! Loved it!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awwh...I liked it! 😳
and I can surely imagine something like this happening between them down the road...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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this is really good
i really think u should cont it
and if u do plz do pm me:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awww that was absolutely beautiful Shreya! (:

I loved it! I can't wait to see something like this in the show! :D

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey there! I really liked the OS, especially the latter part. The breaking of Khushi's resolve is very beautifully written.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beautifully written
and more likely to happen :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It was such an awww OS, really touched my heart!!
Gosh so much pain and anguish between ArHi that I'm praying for their brighter and happier days to come soon!!
Brilliant work dear!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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have a small doubt... did khushi leave arnav or planning to leave?
sorry for askin
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh, this was great!

Loved how you started it ... without any preamble, straight to the realization.

Please do continue ...

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