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Just a Try. If I bore you with my writing I m really very sorry :(


DESTINY

PART ONE

Anjali and Khushi went to the temple for shiv ratri. The snake planned something really bad for his wife. But who did know that destiny will change the plan. ASR yes ASR and not Arnav who died the day when he saw khushi and the snake hugging each other. He promised to lock his heart forever for his Di's happiness. He was now a person without a heart. ASR had to pick Anjali and his khushi from the temple as requested by his Di. But being workaholic he couldn't do so. His khushi was in charge of Anjali now. Yes HIS khushi'she was indeed his, no one was allowed to touch her, love her, hurt her, only he can do so. He had the right to do anything with her. She was his.

As they were coming down from the temple the snake's plan started. As they temple was located in a crowded place traffic was a really very major problem. Too many cars, buses, trucks passing by and it was very difficult to cross the road. Snake's plan was plotted so beautifully that no one would be able to save Anjali and the khushi will be blames and everyone will throw her out of the house. He hired some goons to kill Anjali and portray it as an accident. As Anjali was going to cross the road a truck would come and hit her. As it was planned it happened like that but with some little changes. Anjali while crossing with khushi behind her saw the truck coming. She couldn't react as she became numb. Even khushi saw that she screamed "Anjali jiii" and --------BOOM----------- everything was over'

Arnav reached hurriedly with all his family members in the city hospital. He asked the reception about Anjali's room. He started crying as he saw her sister lying on the bed and crying. Yes she has lost the baby. The doctor said Mr.Raizada we are sorry we couldn't save the baby. Arnav couldn't utter any word. He just said 'Di'. She went on crying as it was the most precious thing to her. She said "Chote..Khushi" and cried more. Arnav's jaw tightened and eyes were red as he got angry. He thought Khushi was responsible for this. He went out of Anjali's room in search of Khushi. He was angry because the person he loved was responsible for his Di's condition. He wanted to ask khushi why she did this. As soon as he went out of the room he uttered 'Khushi' As he turned around, his face turned pale. He this time murmured her name as low as possible. He saw a body smeared with blood all over. The doctors were taking her to the OT. He didn't know why fate was playing games with him. He couldn't react, he just said " doctor 'khushi'my wife.." he couldn't say a full sentence 'he was not in a condition to say anything.


He saw everyone crying. Her amma, bauji, bua, payel, his nani and everyone present there' tears were also flowing down from his eyes. The doctor said her condition was critical as she lost lot of blood. Yes khushi was hit by the truck and not anjali. She just pushed anjali to the other side but the major accident happened to her. Arnav was given some papers to sign. The papers were it was written that if anything happens to the patient the hospital will not be responsible. Somewhere in his heart he knew that he didn't want to lose khushi therefore he married her. He requested the doctor "please save my khushi'please'" Everyone was shocked to see ASR's this side. He didn't allow anyone except his Di to see this side. He was crying badly in front of everyone. The nurse came and gave him khushi's earrings, bangles and the most important thing the mangalsutra. He clutched them tightly. His eyes were saying something 'his eyes were now like an ocean where he could just see his khushi. Khushi coming into his life, khushi making him smile, their dance, their kiss, their fights and everything. He was shocked as why did she endanger her life and save his Di. There was more to this story which he had to uncover .


To be continued...hopefully tonight or tomorrow morning :)

love debadrita :)


DESTINY

PART TWO

Arnav saw payel shouting at the snake that why did he do this. Payel came to know about the whole thing as he heard shyam shouting at someone over the phone and telling him his plan has failed. Payel left from that place. Arnav had heard everything. If law was in his hands he would have killed the snake. He called payal and confirmed everything. Yes the truth was revealed and even he revealed the truth to payel that why did he marry khushi. Payel was shocked and blamed Arnav for everything as if he had not married khushi,she would have not been here. But to save his family khushi was bearing all the pain. She did not even tell payel about this marriage. Arnav was not able to hear this anymore. It was true that everything happened because of him. If he had sent shyam tp the prison before everyone would have been saved. He just called the police and filed a case against shyam. Everyone wa shocked to hear the truth. Anjali couldn't believe that shyam her husband whom she trusted so much would do something like this. She couldn't cry anymore as somewhere it was her fault to believe him blindly. She just prayed to God that pure justice should be done to khushi and her family and punishing him as much as possible.

On the other hand someone was also praying yes it was Arnav standinding in front of khushi's Devi maiyya . "khushi always prayed to you. Why did you do this to her. It should have been me in her place, I m the one who gave her so much pain. Never thought Khushi was doing so much for my family and bearing so much pain." He was crying in front of the idol and going on saying one thing "please save her please'."

Akash came and informed that khushi is alright and the operation was successful and doctor said not to worry anymore. He was really very happy as heard the news. He looked at the idol and just said "thank you. You are really there. I m sorry for not trusting you." He ran towards the room and saw everyone one inside the room talking to her. Yes khushi aka our sanka devi was back she was happy to haer about everything about shyam ji being arrested, arnav praying and everyone knowing the truth. But someone was really angry on arnav i.e Buaji. She didn't allow arnav to come near khushi and warned him not to even show his face to khushi as everything happened because of him they didn't trust her because of him. Arnav was going on saying "sorry" but no one listened to him. Here arnav was dying to see her face just a glance would also do and even khushi's eyes were searching him. But destiny was playing games with them again. Buaji said khushi won't be going back to Raizada Mansion as they don't believe in such contract marriage and arnav may try to hurt her again. So for her safety she would be staying in gupta house. Khushi tried to protest but everything went in vain.

Arnav didn't know how he would meet khushi. It was difficult for him to live without khushi. She was a part of him. His heartbeats depended on khushi. But here no one understood him and therefore he wasn't allowed to meet her as everyone feared that he will hurt her again. Khushi was also missing arnav but she was also not allowed to step out of the house. She was also missing her bangles her mangalsutra given by arnav it was her life as she loved them and loved him. Arnav decided to go to gupta house. And this time it will be an official visit to gupta house. With the help of his Di, Nani and akash he got a plan to get back his khushi. And this time he would not let her go.

As they were standing out of the gupta house Arnav was scared and nervous because he he feared that if he fails this time he would not be able to live. His life depended on this day. Buaji opened the door and was surprised to see everyone. Nani being the eldest spoke first that they wanted to talk to the gupta family about something very serious. Everyone came out to their drawing room including khushi. Arnav and khushi were seeing each other after so many days and hours it was like a lifetime for them. Their eyes were speaking to each other. Both had so much to talk to each other. But this time he couldn't waste time. So Arnav started speaking, "whatever happened earlier happened because of me and I m sorry for that and I know its hard to forgive me but I don't want anything wrong happening this time so I have come here to ask khushi's hand for our marriage and this time the contract will last forever." Khushi's eyes were full of tears it was the day for which she had been waiting. She saw Arnav bending on his knees holding her hand as he said "khushi, will you marry me? This time I won't force you, it will be your decision. It won't be an arrange marriage but it will be a marriage full of love. Will you be mine forever? I won't promise anyt hing as promises are meant to be broken but I can say I will try to keep you happy as much as I can and I will love you forever and if I hurt you please do forgive me. I love you khushi kumari gupta so will you marry me again? " khushi couldn't control her tears she looked at her family and so everyone smiling with tears in their eyes. Everyone was touched but arnav's words'they were not only words but those feelings which he had been suppressing for days. Khushi just hugged arnav this time both cried in front of their family. Khushi said "Yes Mr.Arnav singh Raizada . I will marry you. I love you."

This time the marriage was done with all rituals and everyone was happy this time. Anjali got her true love, her childhood friend Arjun who was ready to take her as his wife as he secretly loved her from childhood. And arnav and khushi was happily-fightingly-romancingly-married. :) They were destined to be with each other. :)

THE END

thanks for all loving comments :)

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Note:(18-01-2013)

A VERY BAD TRY...I realize it now..With Very Bad English..But still thanks whoever read it...

Trust me I am a very Bad writer..It was just a TRY...Thank you everyone :)


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if its bad still do comment that i can improve my writing :)
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yes i will do so :)...
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Originally posted by: jacobharry10011

Awesome start...Do pm me
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i would have completed it now...but didnt get time... will try to complete it by today itself...thanks for commenting :)
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Brilliant start!!!!
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