OS: Ashu's incomplete Words - Page 4

Originally posted by: apurvafan

Deepa, Thank You...

I am waiting for this scene and I am sure this will surely come one day or other... Without Ashu completing these words... The chai is incomplete...

Originally posted by: deepa_jd

pleasure is all mine sweety..


here is to u writin more OS ...

Bass aap likhte rahiye..hum ashu nidhi ki duniya me khote rahe ...

aap sapne bunte rahiye..him us buni hue blanket me warm hote rahe...

aap imagination kii halki halki barsaat karte rahiye...hum us baarish me bheegte rahein..

alia kya se kya ho gaya ...ashu tere pyar me...iam becomin a poet (bekar hi sahi) ,big time..

Deepa, shall I add one line here?

aap pyar ke phool khilaate rahiye...hum us nandanvan ka mehek lete rahe...
aap sundar lamhe ke indradhanush mein hum sab ko swargalok vihar karaate rahiye...

Deepa and Mudra,

Originally posted by: apurvafan

Deepa and Mudra,

your poetry is much better than what I wrote...

Big bow to both of you...

aww ..such modesty...

brilliant write-up AF!👏

thanks for completing the thoughts of Ashu in that scene.. which was spoiled by mallu's entry at dat time.. 😡 really hope the cv's bring this scene later on in the show in the same way as u hav written...😍

Originally posted by: ronnie85

brilliant write-up AF!👏

thanks for completing the thoughts of Ashu in that scene.. which was spoiled by mallu's entry at dat time.. 😡 really hope the cv's bring this scene later on in the show in the same way as u hav written...😍

Thank You Ronnie... Hope this scene comes up in the show...

Hiii Just came across your oS very nice ,,, please if you written other OS can u pm me links

Originally posted by: oaz30

Hiii Just came across your oS very nice ,,, please if you written other OS can u pm me links

I have written one 3 to 4 days back... I am very new to writing. Will send you the link