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honeypriya

@honeypriya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: shybabe

its not odd meri times of india editor...😆 bahut accha hai...😳

Coming from u THE ULTIMATE expert...thanxxx 😊

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himabindu05

@himabindu05

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Priya...u write so beautifully yaar..loved the poem...loved the pic..want to make me cry today😭Him standing with all that hurt in his eyes and her standing with her back to him..turning away from happiness...

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zonera1

@zonera1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

That was very nice!!So appropriate for their scanario!!!

lets hope this andheri raat passes at a decent pace and gives us a sweet and hopeful "Subah"!!!

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honeypriya

@honeypriya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: himabindu05
Priya...u write so beautifully yaar..loved the poem...loved the pic..want to make me cry today😭Him standing with all that hurt in his eyes and her standing with her back to him..turning away from happiness...

thanxx dear ...

when I saw the pic,suddenly remembered those lines...its such a trying moment in their story...but still hopes all there...coz we dont know wat he thinks...its going to be all fine...just wait nd watch 😊

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honeypriya

@honeypriya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: zonera1
That was very nice!!So appropriate for their scanario!!!
lets hope this andheri raat passes at a decent pace and gives us a sweet and hopeful "Subah"!!!

thanxx...ya lets ust hope and wait for that !!!

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shwetachauhan

@shwetachauhan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

debu!!!!! what is this!!! i had no idea you are so good at poetry!!! 😲 have you been doing it since long??
first let me tell you.. thats a beautiful poem.. 😊 such beautiful verses and the emotions they portray!! i just loved it!! its an added charm that it suits arhi so well.. given the current situation and what we last saw..
a very deep, moving piece of random lines i must say!! you should write and post such poems more often!! 👏
if you have written other poems, will you mind sending them to me in the inbox? or anywhere else where i can have a peep??😳

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Lurvebooks

@Lurvebooks

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

I'm far more Hindi challenged than you ... but very lovely poem. 👏

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Anjudreamz

@Anjudreamz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Nice poem, liked it. U seems to be very talented dear

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honeypriya

@honeypriya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Anjudreamz
Nice poem, liked it. U seems to be very talented dear

Likw button not working 😕 thanx a lot dear...😊

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honeypriya

@honeypriya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: shwetachauhan
debu!!!!! what is this!!! i had no idea you are so good at poetry!!! 😲 have you been doing it since long??
first let me tell you.. thats a beautiful poem.. 😊 such beautiful verses and the emotions they portray!! i just loved it!! its an added charm that it suits arhi so well.. given the current situation and what we last saw..
a very deep, moving piece of random lines i must say!! you should write and post such poems more often!! 👏
if you have written other poems, will you mind sending them to me in the inbox? or anywhere else where i can have a peep??😳

thanx hun...I do it randomly...ya long as in since my junior school...but in hindi very rarely...when my lazy mind suddenly wakes up 😆

thanx and happy u liked it