Humsafar - Khirad&Ashar CLOSED Indefinitely - Page 14

Originally posted by: Escapist

Confused...mein yeh story zaroor padhungi lekin pehle mujhe samhajo bhai yeh sab kya confusion hai...good 30 mins toh yeh samhajne mei gae k...Khirad is girl and Ashar is boy :O
and yaar who is this Sara now...bandi apne haath wath kat rahi na..and if K and A are married what is S all about ?? ex-lover ya extra martial affair ?? aur aur yeh Khizar banda kaun hai...aaa 😕

And is the story originally based in Chicago ya my dear author you did :D

Please clear this confusion nai toh aage ki story will go blurry...btw I loved the video and also the song and I so love Fawad (the hero...loved him since Khuda K Liye times..hehe) 😃

And m reading this story once this confusion vanishes..just read the prologue !!

Cheers,
Fatima

Originally posted by: Escapist

Confused...mein yeh story zaroor padhungi lekin pehle mujhe samhajo bhai yeh sab kya confusion hai...good 30 mins toh yeh samhajne mei gae k...Khirad is girl and Ashar is boy :O
and yaar who is this Sara now...bandi apne haath wath kat rahi na..and if K and A are married what is S all about ?? ex-lover ya extra martial affair ?? aur aur yeh Khizar banda kaun hai...aaa 😕

And is the story originally based in Chicago ya my dear author you did :D

Please clear this confusion nai toh aage ki story will go blurry...btw I loved the video and also the song and I so love Fawad (the hero...loved him since Khuda K Liye times..hehe) 😃

And m reading this story once this confusion vanishes..just read the prologue !!

Cheers,
Fatima

Originally posted by: .SilentPrincess

Chapter 1 was beautiful. I wonder what made her move out... She seemed kind of disturbed, even when her friend asked. I'm curious to know what happened between them.

Chapter 2 was interesting.. Ashar remembering Khirad. The memory of Ashar-Khirad's encounter was sweet. I guess he liked her a bit and then the marriage news came and he buried those feelings innside him.
He seemed quite excited to meet Khirad, but a bit nervous too.
So Khira moved back toh Hyderabad? Or is it just Ashar's imagination. But he can't just start thinking of her all of a sudden...

Beauitfully written chapters.. Sorry I don't know your name...
But please do continue soon, and thanks for the PM. :)

.SilentPrincess

Okay so this might seem irritating now.. But Shaheen.. is that Khirad's friend? Did you mean Afsheen?The friend Khirad is living with, before Ashar came back into the picture?

Originally posted by: .SilentPrincess

lol. Yes Khirad is a girl and Ashar a boy..
Sara(in the drama) is Ashar's childhood friend. Sara is Ashar's mother sister daughter. Khala ki beti..
Khirad and Asher married under some tough circumstances, both got married but they really didn't want to. Sara loved Ashar that's why she's cutting her wrist and all. But Ashar don't love her, well not in that way, he looks at her like a friend and he told her too.

Khizar in this story his Khirad's husband. But in the drama.. He's Sara's cousin, who loves Sara alot.. he can do anything just to get her. No, its happeninh in Pakistan in Hyderabad and Karachi.

Originally posted by: 6thElement

😆 Yes I didn't have the patience to find out the right pronounciation of Khirad's friend. So I put in my friend's name.

No Khirad has moved in with her friend close to the high rise in which Ashar is living. The scene where he watches her from the shadows is from his past: When the family had to go Hyd to help with Khirad's mom's situation.

Thanks for writing back.

Call me Hasini...

PS. Thanks for pitching in to help Fatima.

Originally posted by: .SilentPrincess

I thought they were all back in hyderabad. But everyone is currently living in Chicago...
Okay... Now the story is getting interesting. :)

Originally posted by: 6thElement

Yup...there you go. 😊

But I want to call out that Ashar's parents are still in Karachi.

Originally posted by: .SilentPrincess

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When are you updating, I'm really eager now to know what happens next. I firstly thought you would follow Humsafar track with their marriage and all, but your story is going in another direction.. and its really interesting. :)