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ShwePoo

@ShwePoo

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#171

WOW...

Awesum story...!

Loved the way u have written...

Pls do write more... Ur stories r jus beautiful...!

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crazymayurian

@crazymayurian

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#172

what an ending superbb

loveddd it

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Jiya

@Jiyyaa

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#173

Lovely ending but em sad

Its hard to find FFs lyk this.. FFs which touch ur heart, they make u cry,smile,laugh,blush etc

Not an order bt a request for you to pleeasee write another long MayUr FF. I dun care if its lyk dis with Sajan and others but mainly the story should be based on MayUr.

Pleeease mulan write another long mayur ff <3

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Amrita

@Maahzabeen

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#174

Ended :(

but this was one of the best story i have ever read! loved it to the core mehak.

thanks for giving us such a beautiful story.

please write something soon

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#175

omg u ended it!🥺.. bt dey say na.. all good thngs cum 2 an end one day!😊
luvd d ending... esp.. MN finally confessd each other... n going 2 b parents soon!😳

The beauty of their relation was he didn't fell on his knees for her… nor did she fell on hers… bcz they were too busy standing beside eachother… holding their clasped hands on her stomach welcoming the new life…

des lyns r really beautiful👏

waitin 4 a new MN ff!😛
luv ya!🤗