OS:VIRAT AND MAANVI MISSING EACH OTHER!!!!!!!!!

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hello friends...Writiing has been a passion for me from school days .I have written few stories this is the first fan fiction i am writing i am totally impressed by VIrat and Maanvi and their relationship .Now iam upto the craziness of writing a story based on them 😆.but sorry guys i am not very good at Nhok -jhok and fun . so ll not b able to present that fact here .Any way friends read and plz plz leave Comments , because ur opinion is much valued for a budding writer like me.

sorry for swmini fans as i am making her a bit negative here


PART 1:
A teary eyed Jeevika is nearing Maanvi 's bedroom .She is keeping on thinking "how will i say Maanu that she has to leave to Rishikesh now.but i ll be the only person who can make her understand that she has to leave as soon as possible as everybody is annoyed with her ".Tears are rolling down her cheek .Inside the room Maanvi is talking with god as usual "Oh god , again i have creted problem ,i just thought i will do something good for jiju but i am helpless".she is continously rubbing off her tears .Just then Jeevika opens the door and on hearing it Maanvi rushes towards her "DI, i am sorry ...Phir se mein apko problem create kar diya ...par di ...meine soocha ki..."jeevika stops her " deko Maanvi ab tum kuch maath bolo ...tumare vajey se jo kuch b hua hai hum usey badal nahi kar sakthey ..."Maanvi starts again"lekin di..."Jeevika says "aab tume jaldi iss gar ko chodna padega.."Jeevika turns away from Maanu and starts crying she thinks "oh god ...i cant see a heart broken Maanvi ...:"She rushes outside the room quickly and locks herself in her room.Maanvi is left speechless she unable to come up from this shock .
In virika's room jeevika is sobbing and cursing herself"meine meri maanu ko itna bada duk de diya ..."she is stiil sobbing .Viren come near her . She hides her tears and says "JI , viren ji meine maavi ko ready hone ke liye kaha hai ...wu abi thayaar ho jayegi"Viren hugs her and says"i can understand your pain..."jeevi hugs him tightly and cries her heart out out .

after an hour everybody are assembled in hall.VIrat just pops out of his room .He is shocked to everyone standing out.He tells to himself "hare koi assembly ho raha hai kya sab log itna serious kyun hai..."he notices Maanvi with her bag and is shocked ."aare ab choudrayan ji ja rahi hai ...kya"Viren enters the house and says to Maanvi " Here are ur tickets and i ll drop u in the station "Swmini's face seems to quite happy . But everybody else is unhappy .Maanvi hugs everyone and when she comes near Jeevika Swamini says "don make it late ...u are already in hurry now"Viren in a hurry pulls Maanvi's hand and rushed outside the house.Jeevika still crying that Maanu dint say bye to her .She rushed inside the room and cried her heart out .




VIrat is not able to believe that Maanvi has left and he has no one there to spend some jolly moments . He is stunned that Maanvi has left unspoken.



Maanvi reaches Rishikesh .she locks herself in the room . Jeevika could not stop herself from talking to Maanvi .She immediately calls Manu.A crying Maanvi picks up the call. Jeevika says "Maanu tune muj se bye bi nahi bola ...kya itni badi galti ho gayi mujse .."Maanvi says "Nahi di me apke anke mein asoon nahi deh sakthi ...iss liye mein ne ...aap ko kuch nahi bola .."Jeevika says "tu fikar math kar ...iss gar mein sab kuch teek ho jayege "Maanvi replies"DI i kown my sister is capable of handling any kind of tough situation ...so vadhera is not any more tough for u"Jeevika starts smilling .Both keep down their phone happily as their emotional fight is resolved now.But Maanvi feels she is missing something .Dabbu enters the room .Dabbu asks "di ...aap ka new year celebration kaisa tha .."Maanvi jumps on the cot and tells"hum log dabbey pe gaye they aur vahaan itna maja aaya ki mein aapne aap ko itna enjoy nahi kiya ..."she goes on telling about the fun she had with Virat .Dabbu is confused why is she continously talking about Virat .
In Chandigar Virat is sitting in the Dabba and thinking about enjoyment they had .He thinks if Maanvi was there with him.It would be really great.Suddenly he asks to himself "from yesterday i have been thinking about only her and it really hurts me when i feel she is not with me at this moment".Tears are rolling down from his eyes .He again thinks "Within four days of her presence i feel she has done something to me...i keep on thinking about her .."


In Rishikesh Maanvi is cooking with the help of Dabbu .Dabbu says " aach di aap ye bathavo ki ...kal se aaj tak aapne virat ki bare me hi bathey karthey ho...aapne kissi aur ke bare kuch nahi kaha .."Maanvi replies " aare budu ...kuch bakwas tho kartha hi rahta tu .."She leaves the kitchen .She still feels she is missing something .She thinks " i ll call jiju ..." She makes a call to Virat instead of viren nobody is picking the call . She cuts the call and realises it was to Virat whom she had made the call.She feels disturbed and decides to go for a walk . On her walk she notices a dabba and gets reminded of her fun and enjoyment she had with virat .


Here Virat is not able to feel the pain that Maanvi has let unspoken and without telling him.He feels he would clear out this issue by talking to her. He notices the missed call in his mobile and calls her back but as She has gone out she is not picking the call . An angry Virat decides to meey her and leaves to Rishikesh but telling lies to everyone in Vadhera.
Maanvi is still sitting in Dhaba .After hours she decides to leave the place. On her way she is shocked to Virat before her .He nears her and asks "meine tuje bada bada help kiya aur tune kabhi muje kuch bi nahi bathyaa ...tu bina kuch bole gar chod gayi..."Maanvi says "aisa kuch nahi ...mein bahut duki thi.."Virat replies "Kya tu aapna duk mujse nahi baat sakthey ho.."Maanvi is shocked .Virat says "u r silence has killed me ...do u know that."A shocked Maanvi starts cring and says"Kal se mein tumko Bahut miss kar rahi hoon ...Muje tho sirf tumari hi yaade aathi rahthi hai ..."Virat is shocked to know this and replies"kya tum b mere jaise miss kar rahi thi.."


😛both of them hug...A BEAUTIFUL HUG FOR A START OF A BEAUTIFUL RELATIONSHIP...





My frnds ur comments are most valued plz plz do comment!!!!!!!!
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dharaa thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awww...this was really cute 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow very nice i lovd it n plz continue u r a very good writer
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It was very nice, please continue and PM me when you update. Loved the line A Beautiful hug for a start of a beautiful relationship 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beautiful hug <3 Okay wow!!! it was a nice start and i'm sure u will continue it very nicely and id love to read more from you! Do PM me when u continue:) thanks!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hello frnds thanks a ton for replying...i am glad that you ppl loved it...and thanks a lot for ur lovely comments ...i ll surely send a pm to all when i find time to update it ...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@reva i don know how to tell thnanks to u ... i am happy tat ...u loved the ending... @guluna wow ur words hav touched a lot ...ur appreciation means a lot to me
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: kzs04

rly nice job on the OS

hey thank you so much yar!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Superb Os...just loved it and the ending was simply superb and mindblowing!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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WOW So Beautiful OS ,👏 I loved the sisters scenes especially this really touched me,👏

Jeevika could not stop herself from talking to Maanvi .She immediately calls Manu.A crying Maanvi picks up the call. Jeevika says "Maanu tune muj se bye bi nahi bola ...kya itni badi galti ho gayi mujse .."Maanvi says "Nahi di me apke anke mein asoon nahi deh sakthi ...iss liye mein ne ...aap ko kuch nahi bola .."

And the Virman scene at the end was Awesome.👏👏👏

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