..The Confession..VirMan Story...!! Part 5, Pg 16

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Hi Guys 🤗
I am still under the VirMan hangover and during another sleepless night they've became my saviour 😛 😆...I just wrote whatever came into my mind...I know its no where near any of ur SS, OS n FF's but since I've written it I thought to share it with all of u...please feel free to comment...n I really hope u guys like it 😊

The Confession...!!

The New Year's celebration was over and so was Manvi's stay at the Vadhera house...it was her last night...and again she was blamed for everything that happened that night...Swamini Bua left no stones unturned to demean her infront of the whole family...Manvi didn't utter a single word but her eyes spoke volumes...and Virat who standing just next to her read the unsaid words that Manvi's eyes spoke...he tried to defend her but everything went in vain...neither Swamini Bua nor Dadaji was in a mood to listen anything specially from Virat's side...so all he could do was stand there and see HIS Manvi get insulted...after all the drama that happened that night, the whole family went to sleep...but there were two people who could not sleep that night...cuz, one was busy finding answers to all the questions that were popping up in his mind...n the other was just sad and happy at the same time with whatever happened that night...

Virat's Room

Virat lied on his bed trying to sleep but the moment he closed his eyes all he could see and think was Manvi n how sad she was...so he got up and sat on his bed thinking to himself...

"Since the day I first saw her I knew there was something about her which remains a mystery...behind those twinkling eyes there's a hidden pain...behind those smiles n the laughter lies a tear which flows only when she is all alone...she comes across as a open book but there's a page which still remains unopened..." she was sad and that was all he could think about...he didn't like seeing the tears in her eyes...he didn't like her standing quiet...and more than anything he didn't like the fact that Manvi was all alone blamed for everything that happened when it was his fault too...

"but how can I let any random guy misbehave with her...how can any other guy even touch her...she was with me and it was duty to protect her...Bua and Dadaji should not have spoke to her the way the spoke..." he got up from the bed and walked towards the window

He stood near the window and looked at the sky and he recalled everything that happened after they sneaked out of the party...soon he found himself smiling for no reason...he knew this was the best new year party of his life and all because of his bandariya...

Manvi's Room

Meanwhile in Manvi's room...Manvi is packing her stuff as she was leaving home the next day...while packing she was thinking about

"whats wrong with this chep?? Why he always gets back to the Angry Young Man mode???...huh!!! this guy never fails to surprise me...rather shock me...what was the need to get into a fight with those goons when I got back to the car safely...bas herogiri dikhani hoti hai har jagah...agar woh iss jhamele mein na padta toh na hum jail jaate na hi bua ji se daant khaani padti"...gadha kahinka..."

Saying this she again got back to packing her stuff...but even while packing all she was thinking off was how they celebrated the night, how he fought with the goons for her and how he tried to defend her infront of the whole family...she was liking it...it felt different...apart from Jeevika someone else was there for her...to protect her, to defend her and to make her happy...she was lost in her thoughts and was smiling to herself..."jitna bhi bada chep ho meri didi ka devar...dil ka accha hai"...and she smiled at herself again...

HUH!! Manvi snapped out of her thoughts..."its very late now...and rather than thinking about him you should be sleeping..." Manvi said to herself and walked back to her bed...

Virat's Room

Still sleepless..tossing in his bed says to himself "I don't think mujhe neend aane waali hai...I guess I need some fresh air...I badly need to stop thinking about Manvi now"

Chhupte chhupate Virat gets out of his room and walks towards the terrace and while passing through the corridor he finds the door of Manvi's room slightly open...he opens the door a little more n peeps into the room but since Manvi is facing the opposite side he coudln't see her...so he walks in the room and goes and sits besides Manvi's bed...

The moonlight was falling directly on her face making her look absolutely angelic...Virat keeps on staring at her..."yeh Jhansi ki rani sote waqt kitni maasum aur shaant lagti hai"...and lightly brushes his hands over her face..."I wish I could capture this moment and keep it with me forever"...

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..Index..
Part 1- Pg 1
Part 2- Pg 3
Part 3- Pg 9
Part 4- Pg 13
Part 5(last part)- Pg 16
Edited by ..luv_shahid.. - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Tooo goood... continuee sooon!!! <3 :D
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Really nice plz update soon and pm me
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pm me and wen u write again
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Amazing do continue and plsz pm me thanx
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woww loved it! i thought i commented.. but guess i didn't lol! please continue and defo pm me 😃
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Superb start, do continue. I really can't wait for the confession. Please PM me when you update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMGGG dharuuu my partner,,u changed ur id,suku told me itz u,,🤣🤗..tui ekhane?VIRMANARIA 🤣???/ki khobor?kemon achish?omggg abaro same jodi fan amra?wowww,,,pehle ragvir now virman wah wah🤣cant blv this..soo happyyy my partner is here...keep rocking in this forum too🥳...and ur storyy superb,,loved it,❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great start..waiting 4 the confession scene...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Talli-

Really Nice Story Yaar.. I Totally Enjoyed Reading It.. Though I Really Wanted At Least Viraat To Confess His Feelings.. Do Continue Soon..



I am really glad that you liked it... 😳
Virat will soon confess his feelings and thats gonna be maha filmy 😆

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