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Posted: 14 years ago
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I didnt write in Hindi because I stink at writing in Hindi! Sorry! Please tell me if I should continue or if I should write a new one! Thanks!

Dabbu: Manvi di please don't go leaving me all alone I don't want to go to Allahabad alone!

Manvi: Dabbu try to understand I can't go'I uh I uh um'have to stay'because if I go then who will take care of the house, right??

Dabbu: But di'

Manvi: No buts or else, now go pack your bags, you have to leave early tomorrow remember!

Dabbu: Fine!

After Dabbu stomped out of the room, Manvi went to the window, she looked up in the sky while holding back tears she hated lying to her family members, but she knew she couldn't tell them the horrific truth! While she looked up and started crying her phone rang'. It was Virat!

Virat: Oye Manvi! Did the plan work? Are you going to Allahabad? Cause if you are I have another plan?

Manvi: (Wipes away her tears, and takes a long breath of air, so Virat doesn't find out that she was crying) Huh! Yes the plan worked I am staying back home, and after Beeji and everyone leaves I will call you, so you can come pick me up.

Virat: Manvi you can't hide anything from me. I know you were crying, Manvi we will fight this until you're the old Manvi again the one that everyone loves, not this emotional and sad Manvi.

Manvi: What are you talking about? I wasn't crying!

Virat: Yes you were! Well whatever I just know that once your treatment starts in Chandigarh you're going to be in tip top shape, I have the highest degree doctors in town just for you because I love you.

Manvi: Wait what did you just say? Did you just say that you love me?

Virat: WHAT? No! I said that everyone loves you, and that um' that nothing will happen to you!

Manvi: Yeah Yeah! I might have a deadly disease and all, but my ears are still like a hawk!

Manvi and Virat share a short laughter.

Manvi: Virat tell me something, did you tell Jeevika di, yet?

Virat: I didn't have the guts to, so I was going to tell her after you come here.

Manvi: Virat I won't be able to'

Virat: I will be there don't worry Manvi! Calm down! Well call me the second Beeji and everyone leave, so I can get ready and be there early.

Manvi: Okay I will see you tomorrow.

Manvi ends the call, and a strong breeze of air hits her face, she knew that her lying to her family members was wrong but she didn't want them to ruin their plans to go to the wedding. She wipes away her tears, and prays to god hoping that everything will be fine when everyone comes back.

In the morning everyone is running around everywhere, Manvi is packing food for her families ride to Allahabad, Dabbu and Chachu are putting their bags in the taxi, and Beeji and Pinky are doing last minute packing! Finally after everything is packed and ready to go Beeji and Pinky tell Manvi say their farewells for a month.

Beeji: Manvi beta, I will call you every day to make sure your fine, and please don't do anything stupid please!

Manvi: Beeji don't worry I won't and Manvi can never do anything stupid!

Manvi and Beeji share a laugh, Manvi hugs everyone, and waves them goodbye! After she cleans up the house she starts packing her bags for Chandigarh, while calling Virat'

Virat: Yes Manvi I am on my way I will be there in about 10 to 15 minutes

Manvi: Okay take your time I am still packing

Virat: What? Manvi after I pick you up we are going straight to the doctor's office. Hurry!

Manvi: Calm down! I am almost done! Okay well take your time! See you in a bit.

After Manvi finishes packing her bags, she goes back to the window in her deep thoughts of how things might turn out, she knows that staying at the Vadheras for a month will make Dadaji and Swamini Bua mad, so she arranged for a flat close to the hospital, where a nurse will come everyday to check up on her due to Virats urging.

Virat: MANVI WHERE ARE YOU I AM HERE!

Manvi was still in her trance of deep thoughts.

Virat: OHHH MANVI. MANVI?? MAN...

Virat saw Manvi looking out to the beautiful scenery, he knew exactly what Manvi was thinking, he slowly went and stood beside her staring at her beautiful eyes, but with one thing he utterly disliked Manvi's tears.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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It was brilliant loved it plz pm me once u update u write so beautifully I lived wen virat had a tongue slip and said I love you. It was perfectly described and written loved it to the core. This was really amazing. Please continue soon and do pm me plz plz plz
Edited by Brklyn_gal - 14 years ago
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Oh this was excellent!
So heartfelt. I almost cried because I could feel the sadness

I loved reading this. I will love to read more

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Posted: 14 years ago
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please pm me wen u write again...=)
loved it
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Heyy its realy gud plz pm me wen u update 😊 😃
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This part was amazing! Continue soon and If you have a PM list do add to me to it! 😃
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Ooohhh, I like it cont soon!
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Awesome!!! Pllzzz pm me when u update!!!
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Part 2

Virat slowly placed his hand on Manvi's cheek. Manvi was surprised but still very saddened by the thoughts of her having Blood Cancer. She started crying prompting Virat to give her a tight hug; they might have stood there for about 10 minutes. Manvi released herself from the hug as she knew that it was getting late, she wiped away her tears to see Virat wiping his cheeks as well.

Manvi: Virat…Omg… Virat Singh Vadera is crying.

Virat: (Turns around to face the wall) What are you talking about? Stop imagining things Manvi.

Manvi: Oh really, then turn around, and shouldn't you be consoling me, but you are here crying. Great!

Virat: Manvi, I wasn't crying. There was just something that got into my eye something flew in from the window, damn Rishekesh and your pollution.

Manvi: Sure! I believe you! (With the biggest smirk on her face)

Virat: Manvi I will be downstairs waiting in the car come down Quick! (Virat runs out of the room)

Manvi stared right at him while he was running out of the room she knew that he was crying because he cared for and was clearly frighten just by the thought that due to this disease he might lose his love. He had never confessed his love to Manvi, but once she had heard him saying something to someone on the phone that she probably shouldn't have heard, and since then Manvi's feelings for Virat had also developed, she now view him as a person that she could look for comfort in.

FLASHBACK

She remembered Virat was in the garden talking on the phone to someone, while she was walking behind the bush to go find where Dabbu had went because Pinky chachi needed to get him ready for the Reception party.

Virat: Yeah sure dude we will meet up some time after this wedding only if I have time…

Manvi: Who is he talking to, and what about the wedding? (Prompting Manvi to eavesdrop)

Virat: Well your coming to the wedding reception tonight right…Good I'll show you the girl I keep talking about that I think I might be falling in love with...she has a beautiful smile and lovely dark brown eyes…during this short time since I've known her every day I step deeper into love with her…her name is Manvi.

Manvi couldn't believe what she had just heard, and since that day she had been on a plan to make Virat confess his love to her.

PRESENT

Manvi locked the door to the house after checking everything was in perfect order, and went to go sit in the car, and Virat started on their journey back to Chandigarh.

Manvi: Virat, can I ask you a question?

Virat didn't say anything as he was trying to determine if he should tell Manvi that he was madly in love with her.

Manvi: Virat…Virat..VIRAT

Manvi thought to herself "Great now he's mad at me, how do I make him happy again?" While Manvi thought of ways to make him happy, Virat turned on the radio to help him divert his attention from thinking about him confessing his love, prompting Manvi to also give up on ideas, and to just sit quietly and listen to the music.

Radio: Here's out to those people that need to confess their love, song from the movie Bodyguard, just say the three magic words I LOVE YOU!

The song I love you from the movie Bodyguard plays! Virat quickly changes the radio station as to the growing awkwardness in the car. He changes to another radio station!

Radio #2: Out to all my friends madly in love. (The song My Dil goes Hmm from Salam Namaste plays)

Once again forcing Virat to change the radio due to the uneasiness both of them were feeling

Radio #3: Let rock the day out with one of our favorite songs! (The song Saibo from Shor in the City plays)

This time Virat didn't change the radio station because he knew that this was Manvi's favorite song, and was his as well. While both of them were listening to the song they both had concluded that they needed to talk to each other quick, making Virat change the idea of going to the doctor's office to go to a place he knew would be perfect for talking, and where no one could disturb them.

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Omg awww virat cried. That was so cute and really sweet. Ha ha loved the radio scene. It was really nice. Wished it was longer thought still lived it plz continue soon and do pm me and also thnx for the pm. Lovely ss
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