ArHi FF: Bairi Piya - A Vengeful Lover Ch. 5 Pg-23

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Hello There!

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Welcome to this insane thing called we're writing an FF together! YAY! *claps* You've seen Aishu around right? Yeah, you have, admit it, just don't bring up the whole update thing...it's a touchy subject. But NAINA! She's the new kid on this block. Well not really, she's like the bhatakthi hui aatma, always here but never writes for us...

JK! She wrote an OS on ArHi! *Congratulate her people*


Anywho, the point is, we're writing an FF together. Before anyone comes in yelping about plagarism, it is our original story, we just may have written it for another couple 😛 But we took a look see and decided it would be great for ArHi if we tweaked a bit.

So, we're tweaking, and after tweaking, we bring you this!


We hope you like this story! Do read and leave your comments!


Cheers!

Aishu and Naina


PS: If you read this and fall amazingly in love with how amazingly amazing we are, you can check out what else we've done by clicking Here for Aishu and Here for Naina.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Index:

Prologue: Page 1
Chapter 1: Page 6

Chapter 5: Page 23
Edited by naishu - 14 years ago
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Prologue:

"It's not that I don't love you Khushi! You know that!" Shyam knelt at her feet, his eyes searching her face. "Khushi, you're my best friend, I love you more than anything. But I can't do this right now."

Khushi looked away, not wanting him to see the tears in her eyes; couldn't he see she was miserable?

"Khushi I don't want to hurt you."

Too late. Her hands clutched at the chair, wanting this to be over, just say it already.

"But I don't want to get married now, I can't get married now! Khushi, sweetie look at me." She looked up, hesitant to meet his eyes. His eyes softened seeing the unfallen tears, "Please baby, don't make this harder!"

A sob escaped her, This was hard for him? She was the one getting her heart crushed into a thousand pieces!

"Khushi I'm not saying we'll never get married. Just not now!"

She sniffed, promises promises, he should know not to make promises he couldn't keep.

Somehow she found the courage to look straight into his eyes, "It's now or never Shyam, and you know that."

He looked down this time, torn. She scoffed slightly, and then stood up, her mind made. Shyam got up slowly, still unable to meet her gaze. "Go Shyam," she said. His head shot up in surprise as confusion dawned on his face, "What?"

"Go. You're right; this is a chance of a lifetime for your career-"

"Khushi-"


"You should take it, I don't want to hold you back Shyam."
He shook his head sorrowfully, lips opening in protest.

"And please don't hold me back either," She continued."I think we should break up."

He gasped, his hands almost instinctively reaching for hers, "No baby."

She gently pulled away; he was the one crying now. "Yes Shyam, neither of us should be forced to wait for the other. I think it's better if we just move on."

"Khushi!"


"Bye Shyam. Just so you know, I don't regret this, and I hope one day we can be friends."
And with that she walked away before he could pull her back, back to him, back to his hesitance.

"Khushi!"
he shouted after her, "Come back!"

But he didn't chase after her, and that was the last Khushi Kumari Gupta heard of Shyam Manohar Jha.






Edited by naishu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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mya, are you seriously already here? seriously?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Shut up Aishu ;) res

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whoops forgot to edit! teehee. Aishu! you should hav told me!!

anyway, YES SHYAM IS GONE! 😃 Sorry that is the only thing I can think about!!
I bet he will come later since tht snake seems to love to slytherin and kill screen time 😉

Anyway, great update you two! Can't wait for more!😃
Edited by AquaBluez17 - 14 years ago
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Wow Aish, you are crazy with the color. I'll leave all that to you. I'll stick to my good old B&W. d:
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Posted: 14 years ago
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you know i love you child 🤣

nainz its all BRIGHT! and HAPPY!
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Hey Aishu,
Another one ...this time teaming up with ur buddy? Expecting Double dhamaka hun.Well the concept looks cool except I hate the name Shyam Manohar Jha(as horrible as him😡)
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Shyam nd khushi???????? Wat the...
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well add me in...m so interested to read this!!!!

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