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Posted: 14 years ago
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Dev had his dinner, goes to his room!!!! His thoughts still wondering around Radhika! feels restless to talk to her! but doesnt dare to go to her or even step out of the room!!

He takes the pic frame of Radhika in his hand! looks at it with not so intrested look!! then he stares at it!...he frowns with many thoughts in his head!...he feels restless!...he open his mouth as if he wants to gush all his thoughts in words but stops there right there with small sound!...he again frowns but with a helpless sigh falls on the bed(sitting position)...He keeps looking at the pic with calm face!!...he moves and leans back to the bedrest, keeps the pic frame on his chest and puts his one hand behind his head for support!!! He tries to rest his mind! but the thoughts doesnt allow him too!!...the time passes and it gets quite night!!...and after some long hours, he moves and rests on the pillow and...





He walks with a bowl of sweets in his hands!!! and he sees Radhika in the kitchen! He stands there adorning her! and finally moves forward and before he could surprise her, she turns back!! Stunned that how she knew that he came inside when he was so careful with his steps, he parts his lips in wonder!...seeing his expression and silent for long!...


Radh: Kya hua!!! aise kyun dekh rahen hai!
Dev: Tumhe maaloon chal gaya, ki mein aa raha tha! asks in astonished tone
Radh: Han!! tho ismein konsi badi baath hai!!
Dev: Radhika!!! he exasperates....mein tumhe surprise dene wala tha aur tumne tho poora hi khar...( poora hi kharab kar diya) says with disappointed and little stern tone!!
Radh: Surprise!!!!??? asks in amusing tone!......kaisa surprise!!
Dev: Nahi ab chod dho!! aisa kuch abhi nahi tha!!! still little disappointed
Radh: Aap bathayena plz! kaisa surprise!!!
Dev couldnt resist and says
Dev: nahi!! woh... tum bahut cute se khadi hui thi tho maine socha ke tumhe mein peeche surprise karoon! with little mischeif in tone!
Radh: Tho accha hua aisa kuch nahi kia! warna aap mujhe dara hi dethe!!!
Dev: wahi tho mein chahtha tha!! with a naughty smile!
Radh: Aap bhi na! jayeye mujhe bahut kaam hai!
Dev: Aise kaise!!! dekho mein tumhare liye kya laya hun!!
Radh: Kya hai! asks in just normal tone!
He shows the ladoos and a gives a puzzled expression!
Radh: ladoo!!! kis khushi mein?
Dev: Arre!! khushi ki tho baath hai! aur sabse pehle tumhara haq bantha hai mooh meetha karne ka!!!
Radh still looks puzzled as which sudden happiness he was talking about! Dev reads her thoughts! ...takes some time and he changes into emotional tone, thankful tone!
Dev: Radhika!!! mein bahut khus hun poore parivar ko ithne khus dekh kar!! Jab se Barkha ki shaadi ki baath chali hai sab bahut khus hai! sab kuch tumhari wajay se Radhika!! aur iske liye mein tuhe dhanyavad kehna chaltha hun!!
Radh: Aap bhi na kaise baath karthe hai! ismein dhanyawad kehne wali kya baath hai!! yeh tho sab mein hamare pariwar walon ke liye tho kar rahi hun na! priwar ke khushi ke liye!!!
Dev shakes his head with her emotionally!! he takes the sweet and feeds her!!! and they stare at each other lovingly for long! and suddenly they hear Urmilla's voice calling Radhika!! Dev hearing her voice gets scared and gestertures Radhika and walks out as fast he can! Radhika gives a cute smile seeing him shakes her head!


Dev was standing at the window with his folded hands with his thoughts looking at the moon!! Radhika walks in stops her steps at the door step seeing him!!! Dev turns back to look at her!! they stare!...after some moments Radh walks in slowly!! and Dev too start closing the distance!...Radh starts speaking softly while walking forward...
Radh: Mein soone ja...!!!(soone ja rahi thi!!) but her words stop and her tone changes to concern.....Aap abhi tak wahan khade hai! sooye nahi?...now almost they were standing infront of eachother! ...
Dev: in a heavy tone! Nahi! neend nahi aa rahi thi!!! and looks at her!!
Radh: after a while...woh mein kehne aayi thi...ki mein soone ja rahi hun!...Dev gives a nod with heavy sigh, nodding his head!!! Agar aapko kuch chahiye tho batha digiye!!!
Dev: He looks at her deeply and says Hmm!!!!!! They share a look! as if so mcuh pain showing in thier eyes!!!!...
Radh slowly turns and takes a step forward but unable to bear the distance, Dev holds her hand and she turns back!!...there's a silence for a moment! she has a questioning look!!...he doesnt know how to say it!!...he stammers but the sound doesnt comes from his throat!
Dev: Woh!!!...woh!! he still stammers in soft tone!
Radh comes little forward and in soft concerned tone says kya hua!!
Aapko kuch chahiye!!
Now how could he reject when Radh herself was asking what he wants!...he makes himself stong and says...."TUM".
Radh stunned hearing...just stands...Dev comes more close to her and says
Mujhe tum chahiye Radhika! Plz alela chodke math jao!! mein paas hi raho! speaks with a tone as if he's trying hard to speak, with heavy tone!!

He goes more near, almost few inches away from her!! Looks deep into her eyes! keeps his hand on her cheek rubs it lovingly!! Bas Tumhara yeh ehsaas chahiye Radhika!! plz mujhse dhoor math jao!!...they just stare for a while!...and Radh moves forward and Dev embraces her into a hug! She holds him tight, almost her head at his neck and hands tighly wrapped around him! Dev holds her tightly not wanting to let her go away from him!




but some sounds keeps disturbing him! as if the weird feeling that RAdh again is going away from him but he tighten his hug as if not wanting to let her go!!!!!!!!!!!!


And the smile lingers on his face, his lips curves with smile and he slowly wakes up!...he opens his eyes slowly and sees the bright sunlight in his room! he turns his head sideways to look around! and gets up slowly and feels something on him!! and sees the pic frame of Radh on his chest! He takes it up! sits up and looks at the pic and smiles!...He feels very fresh, cheerful and never like in long times!!

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Nihariikaa thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Friends just written from Dev's POV!

hope u liked it!!!😃

Merry chrismas and Happy New Year!😃
Have a great holidays!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks Niha for describing Dev's dream that cvs did not show us the other day.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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NiHa Perfect!!! Wish they had shown this when Dev was calling Radhika's name and smiling while he was dreaming. I found it more emotional and heart touching than romantic...showed Dev's fear regarding loosing Radhika and his need for her, specially when he is dreaming about it.
Edited by misti73 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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NiHa,lovely OS.So romantic. Hope to get these scenes in the show soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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its os romantic...cos cv's showed this...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wowww!! very nice!! and marry christmas!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it, and merry xmas to u to
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Posted: 14 years ago
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so cuteee ,its so so much beautifull and ur writting made it so emotional .
Misti said right fully ,its so heart touching than romantic and dev's fear can be fully imagined.
thanks NiHa.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow amazing niha hope cv's wil show it

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