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Posted: 19 years ago
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It was night time in the Walia Mansion and everyone was asleep, everyone except for Bani. She hadn't been able to sleep correctly for the past few days. Something just kept her in her thoughts. She couldn't believe what had happened. She and Mr. Walia ... it was a dream right? No, it was reality. she kept on thinking about it until the mere thought of what happened put her to sleep. As usual, she woke up at 8:00 and made breakfast for everyone. Everyone comes down for breakfast and starts eating. Jai and Bani can't make eye contact. They both are fully aware of what had happened, but can't seem to accept the fact that it did happen.

After breakfast, Bani is clearing the table, when she feels sick. She runs to the bathroom and vomits. Rano sees this and says, "Di, are you okay. What happened. you were fine just yesterday. Di, you should go consult a doctor." Bani replies, "Rano, don't worry about me, i'll be fine. it's probably just the stomach flu or something. it's no big deal. there's no point in calling a doctor. i'll be fine in a couple of days" Rano isn't very satisfied with Bani's reply, but knows that there isn't any point in arguing with her.

Bani goes to the livingroom where everyone is sitting and talking about the marriages which are about to take place in the Walia Mansion. Bani suddenly feels sick again and decides to rest. While she is walking to her bedroom, she feels a bit dizzy. she doesn't know what's wrong with her. She suddenly faints. Everyone runs towards her to make sure that she's fine. Jai carries her to their room and calls a doctor to make sure that there's nothing wrong with her. After the doctor check Bani, he comes outside and with a smile he says, "congratulations, Mr Walia, you are going to be a father. Mrs. Walia is pregnant."

THE END!!! hope you guys liked it, if not, i'll stop right there cuz i know that i'm not that good of a fan fic writer.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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omg plz continue!!!!...i wanna know ppls reactions!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thank you for your pleasing comments. Since you all have been so kind, i guess i HAVE to continue. So here it goes.

Jai was shocked. he couldn't believe what he was hearing. For that one night, he has to pay such a big price. Aditya, Dadi, and Rano all knew that Bani wasn't that kind of person and that it had to be Jia's child. Jigyasa and Roshini both knew that this couldn't be Jai's child. Jai and Bani didn't share that kind of relationship. They both were sure that Jai would definately throw Bani out this time. There was no one else's report to get mixed up with. This had to be the truth that Bani is pregnant.

After the doctor left, everyone went into Bani's room to congratulate her and Jai. Bani was unaware of what the report had contained, and therefore had no idea of what everyone was congratulating her for. Masi was the first of the lot to say anything. She congratulated Bani, "congratulations Bani, par itni bi jaldi kya thi. Shaadi to kali theen (3) mahinany hogaya." Bani couln't fathom what they were talking about. She asked, "what happned? is everything fine? what did the doctor say?" Jigyasa replied in an evil manner, "your pregnant". Bani was shocked!!!

After everyone had left the room, Jai and Bani started to argue. Jai wasn't ready to accept this child. After losing 2 loves, he wasn't ready to love anyone else, especially after how he had lost Pia. He had promised never to love again and he was going to fufill that promise no matter what happened. For that one mistake of his, he had to pay such a big price. Bani replied, "so you call this child that is living inside of me right now, you call it a mistake? well, it's too late now b/c your 'mistake' is already living." Jai replied, "no, it is not too late. you can still get rid of it. you can get an abortion." "maybe i don't want an abortion. what did this child ever do. it did nothing, then why should it have to die b/c it's father isn't ready to accept it?" "you have to get an abortion. you have no other choice. i'm not giving you another choice" "well, i'm not getting an abortion because if Masi knows that i got an abortion, then she will be suspicious and want to know why i killed that innocent child. what will you tell her? that you weren't ready to accept the child? and second b/c i don't believe in getting abortions. why would you want to kill the innocent child inside of you. it hasn't commited any sin, then why does it have to be punised for your 'mistake'".

Jai leaves the room in anger. He knows that what Bani is saying is true, but he will not accept that child, under any circumstances. he will make her get an abortion and if she doesn't, well then, there are other ways of getting rid of a child. 😈

hope you liked this part. if not, still not too late to stop.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow that was good
make jai accept his child 😡 😭 (i have a feeling something like this will happen in ektas show 😡 😭 )
please continue soon 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 wow thats really good!! 👏 👏 👏 but a pretty sad one!!! 😭
Edited by xsimzxchickx - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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omgggggggggggg 😭 😭 😭 that was nice.. cont soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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How sad😭

NOT FAIR! y isnt he ACCEPTING his OWN gOD DAM child😡

NICE FF! PLEASE continue!

~Maddi~

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Posted: 19 years ago
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well, thank you all for your very pleasing comments. i will continue, but not today b/c i just got home and am tired.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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it was perfect 👏
plz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: neetusekhon

it was perfect 👏
plz continue soon



i wouldn't say it was perfect, but thanks. 😛

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