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_Shabru_

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey guys.. dis is my frst evr ff...Thnx 2 suzi 4 helping me...hope u guys lyk it.. leave ur cmmnts..😊Join me on Fb
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CHARACTER SKETCH

Reyaansh khurana happy go lucky person... a big flirt.. Jahan ladki dekhi line marna shuru krdeta hai.. He has nt experienced true love in his life.. He is an NRI 4m london.. Who has falied in his MBA.. Nd has cum 2 Mumbai to cmplete his MBA.. He has a vry big frnd circle.. Nd people luv him alot.. Rey leaves wid his dad...Whom he luvs alot..

Shashank Khurana(Rey's father): He loves his son alot.. Nd he has given all d freedom to his son..he holds a popular construction company Named as khurana constructions..

Kriya Mohan a gorgeous gal... Beauty wid brains... Vry intelligent...studious...Doing her MBA ... nd her college topper...she s Serious kinda person...lives in Mumbai wid her parents ... She has oly 1 frnd childhood buddy calld Rani laxman..

Rani laxman is a vry shy character.. She studies alot bt wen it cums 2 marks she doesnt cross 50%.. She wears a big chashma...She is kriya's classmate..

Prithvi Mohan Kriya's father.. Who runs a general store... He s a vry strict person.. He is a vry disciplined person..orthodox...

Maya Mohan Kriya's mother she is a house wife.. Nd a vry friendly mother.. She wants her daughter to get married soon.. Har din ghr pe kriya k liye ek naya rishta leke aajati hai...

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Part 10
Part 11
Part 12
Part 13
Part 14
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Part 16

Edited by shabru098 - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

loved the chrcter sketch..plzz pm me when u update😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

loved it plz continue and pm me

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Posted: 14 years ago

pls continue
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Posted: 14 years ago

awsum dear !!!! do continue and add me to the pm list !!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

AWW!! please continue soon and don't forget to PM me =D BTW this was just AWESOME! =)

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Posted: 14 years ago

AWESOME CHARACTER SKETCH PLS CONTINUE AND PLS PM ME WHEN U UPDATE

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_Shabru_

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 1

Rey laughng loud vid his frndz nd goin towrds d notice board.. to chck d result..
Rey: Yaar jst pass hojaun.. Bas..
Raghav(reys frnd): dnt wrry yaaarrr.. Tu pakka iss baar bhi flunk hone wala hai.. Padta toh nai.. Hmesha party krta rehta hai... Aur sochta hai pass hojayega..
Rey: Dnt talk rubbish
(raghav chcks out d result)
Raghav: Dude!!! U
Rey: wat?..
Raghav: u failed lyk always...tera ovr all % 20 hai..
(hearing dis Rey bents his head.. A weak smile on his face.. All his frndz r passd oly he has faild.. He leaves d place)
(while goin he meets his teachr)
Joseph(his teachr): so rey did u chck ur result.. Hw r u feelng my boy.. feelng proud.. (rey luks at him nd he gives a slight smile)
Joseph: u r smiling?? Wat a shameless student.. Horrible..( he leaves)
Raghav: ry ab tu kya krega..??
Rey: dad k pass chala jaunga.. Mumbai..
Raghav: ab tjhe unki daant sunni padegi..
Rey: dad aur mjhe daantenge.. Reyaansh Khurana ko?? Kabhi nai..
(rey leaves sayng bye to all his frndz)
Rey goes 2 his home nd calls his dad
Shashank: Hello..
Rey: hello dad..
Shashank: so tell me rey wats ur result..
Rey: dad.. I.. I.. I flunkd..
Shashank: kya?? U flunkd..
Rey: yes dad..
Shashank strts laughng.. Nd says arrey koi baat nai beta.. Yeh toh bs ek chota sa xam tha..
Rey: wahi toh..Nd he laughs too.. nd says luv u dad.. Dad mai mumbai araha hun..
Shashank: thik hai beta.. Tm aaj hi ajao..
Rey: mai rakhta hun dad.. Packng krni hai.. Bye
Shashank: byeee..

In mumbai..
Kriya goes 2 chck her result.. Her bcom final year result is out... She has topped d clg.. She is vry happy..
Rani: wow kriya.. Tmne fir se top kiya hai.. Congratz..
Kriya: thnxxx..
(Rani has got 50%)
Rani: kriya maine itna pada fir b mjhe bs 50% aaya hai.. Kash bhagwan ne tmhare jaisa dimag diya hota..
Kriya: koi baat nai agli baar tm isse b accha krogi..
Rani: i hope so..
Kriya: chalo pehle baba ki store pe chalte hai..(kriya calls her dad as baba)
Rani: haan chlo
(Dey reach d stores)
Prithvi: pari(he calls kriya pari).. Tu aagayi.. Tera result kya aaya?? Top hi kiya hoga meri pari ne..
Kriya: haan baba..
Prithvi: arrey wah..!! Yeh le pari tere liye chocolate..
Kriya: thnk u baba..
Rani: uncle mere liye..
Prithvi: haan beta tu b le..
Kriya: Baba.. Chliye.. Mumma k pass chlte hai.. Unhe b toh batana hai..
Prithvi: haan beta chl..
Kriya: rani chl..
Rani: haan chal..
Prithvi: ruk pari mai store close krdeta hun.. Kriya: thik hai baba..
(dey were on der way 2 home.. Kriya sees a cute teddy.. Nd tells her dad)
Kriya; baba dekhiye yeh kitna cute hai..
Prithvi: tjhe pasand aya pari.. ruk mai leke aata hun..
Kriya: wow!! Thnk u baba..
Prithvi smiles nd goes 2 take d teddy.. Nd he brngs d teddy nd gives 2 kriya..
Kriya is smiles seeing d teddy..
Kriya: kitna pyara hai..
Prithvi: bilkul meri pari jaisa..
(dey reach home)
den Suchita(rani's mum calls her..)
Rani says bye to Kriya nd prithvi nd goes..
Kriya enters d house..
Her mom is preparing food..
Kriya hugs her mom 4m back..
Maya: agayi meri pari.. Result kya aya pari
Prithvi: wahi jo bachpan se araha hai.. Fir se top kiya hai meri pari ne
Maya: kya?? meri pyari pari..
Nd she hugs kriya..
Nd prithvi says arrey maa beti milke mjhe bhul gaye..
Kriya: baba aapko kaise bhul sakte hai..
den kriya maya nd prithvi hug eachothr..

Edited by shabru098 - 14 years ago