Ek Ladka tha aur ek ladki thi...

Thank you to everyone who loved my previous post that much, Thank you sooo much, I wasn't expecting such a great response. And I was afraid before of posting threads, but you're encouragemnent has given me a bit of confidence so thank you very much.

I have made some Arhi poems, just on Arnav and Khushi and how they are, so do tell me what you think of them.

Arnav:

Arnav ke liye paisa paisa hi hain

Kuch idhar udhar toh dekho to anokha jaise bhi koi hain

Uskke ghusse ne uska naam rakhdiya laad governer

Par chupke se aur andhar se bus pyaar kar kar

Usne kiya toh phela pyar lavanya se

Par logon ko na samajh ayi aur poonche yeh kaise

Ek hi advice hain Arnav bitwa ke liye

Khushi ko apnaalo aur dekho life asai bhi jiye.

Khushi

Hain toh badi haasmukh humari jalebi bai

Aur pasand hain simple life, na kuch Hi-fi

Idhar udher jaati hain aur milti hain rakshas ko

Pata nahin tha ke is ke liye maar mithe gi wo

Pyaar kiya pheli baar, aur samajh na aeyi uss feeling ki

Jab ehsaas hua iss baat ka ussi main hogaiye saagai

Khushi ko kya patha tha ke Shyam tha iska fiance

Par iss baat ka dukh tha ke arnav se rehne abh door se

Khushi ki life hain kuch khatti kuch meethi

Hain uski puri life sirf ama, bauji aur Jiji

So do tell me what you guys thought of this bad attempt, do press like and comment so I can improve, and if you guys would like me to do other character poems like these as well. Thank you for you're lovley support, love you all.

Thanks are you sure it's, good??? Your going to say it's good! But thanks very sweet!

awww thanks thats really sweet, it's a bad attempt at poetry, but thank you!😃

That's really sweet, I didn't get that many likes and hits,boohoo!lol. Doesn't matter you appreciated it thats made my effort worthwhile, thank you.😛 xxx

Nice words of wisdom there, thank you.

I guess I'll post after my exams so in feb now. 😆