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yongshin

@yongshin

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#441

Bestest ff .. And loved AR relation...

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Neha

@SurrealFantasy

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#442

Originally posted by: ..Maitree..
UM.UPDATE.

Comment kar jaani. You didn't comment on the other one either :/

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#443

Hey Neha

Awesome insatllment

Though it was short

Love AR

Do try to conitue soon

Take care

Geet

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Munchkin.

@Munchkin.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#444

The installment was short, but since it was after so long, I loved it anyway <3

The hesitation, the nervousness, and the sudden confidence and acceptance - it was all there in this tiny installment, and I loved every part of it.

And of course, all the feelings which were indirectly depicted were justified. Riddhima's nervous because she has to stay with 3 guys now, and of course, she's hesitant because she's the only girl. But then the sudden splurge of confidence that she gets, because she's accepted the fact that her home is where Armaan is. And plus, she knew she would be alright as far as Armaan is with her; so she doesn't need to worry.. It all brought out her faith in him..

And at the same time, the installment showed how much she respected him, when instead of saying Thank You, she says Goodnight. She knows that he isn't doing everything as a favor, but because he loves her, and that silent confession was out of the world! That respect she has for him - it is adorably sweet.

Loved the update Neha, thanks a lot for it, been so long since I read something of AEIP and LOL (which btw, you need to update A-S-A-P!)

Shru <3

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Sanaa

@Sanaa629

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#445

pshht..I'm an Awesome stalker..!! I don't need a pm for updates..!! :D :D I will know through my magic powers..!! :D :D

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Sanaa

@Sanaa629

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#446

And now I'm off to read the installment..!! :D

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Sanaa

@Sanaa629

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#447

ITNAAA CHOTUUU update..!! :(

But anyways..I loveeedd how you expressed their feelings..!! I felt like I was there, watching them..and all those feelings being reflected through their eyes.!! Amazingly described..:) Loved every single thing..!! But i think the thing that really caught me was Armaan offering her the keys, then both of them going inside the house together..I know that was the previous update..but yeah..still man..!! It was the bestt..!!

and LOL!! Bachelor pad..hope prithvi is no trouble to AR...I like Rahul..he's cool..!! :D lolxx..!!!

Cont soon..!! SOrry can't give along comment..!! I'm rushed for time..!!

love,

Sanaa

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Aanya

@Aanya.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#448

Nehaaa <3

I loved the installment! It was so chhotu though 😆

I adore how, without too many words they communicate so effortlessly!! <3

Can't wait to read more!! :)

xoxo

Aanya

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Maitree

@..Maitree..

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#449

Ok alright,This part was ADORABLE <3 I love how they communicate so well,and beyond words..their gestures speak out their love <3 Ayye Hayye,can this be any more WOW and fairytale-romantic? *sigh* I can stop staring at the screen and smile stupidly..I love their walk, their hesitation..the gestures,the warm fuzzy feeling...Ah your Writing is So Magical,Nehu !! :)

Tee-hee,That part was So obvious when he had to take out thousand things to find his key..and his whole apartment(or house) was messed up,that is so SO Bachelor-house like...Its like my brother's house,he lives alone with his three friends too 🤣 Mom goes mad shouting over him when we go there LOLZ!🤣 Okay sorry I got off the track...but eh,I loved adored the last bit...where she says "Goodnight" Aww <3

I love the way you show her feelings as well as hers. The track is going very promising,and I know you're gonna make it even more exciting for us..Riddhima alone with three boys, but Armaan is there for him...Without any backup,and how they are gonna get it work..And problems,then solutions,then awkwardness and proximities..Ah! Its gonna rock <3

Update soon girly,I love AEIP to death <3

Love,

Maitree :)

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#450

AN UPDATE after so long :O but such a cute part. The previous parts had been really eventful for the both of them, taking such huge decisions and they hadn't got the time to think how they would manage now. But in this part you've beautifully depicted what they are both going through now, that the feeling of being together has started to settle. Staying together isn't going to be as easy as it seems. Riddhima will be the only girl in that house which was a bachelor pad till now. And its a huge responsibility for Armaan to manage :| But I suppose he'll do it extremely well. He is Armaan after all :| I loved the shyness and at the same time a lot of the moments were extremely adorable as well. Opening the house together, walking hand in hand.

Beautiful update Neha :D Loved it <3

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