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Posted: 13 years ago
hello yaar r u fine 😕😕😕😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
plz update yaar... after this frustrating week comes the even more frustrating weekend🥺 ur FF is the only survival, pllz plz update :plz:
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shamma92

Waiting for the full update. As for whether to write details or not, if its written well...(which you do anyway) then no probs...do post! 😊


sorry was out of town will try to update it in an hour
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Siacutie

Very nice update continue soon


thanks glad u liked the update
next update within an hour

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sorry was out of town was supposed to come 2morrow
anyways will update it soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

sorry yaar for making you wait
will update it soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: viny_queen

hello yaar r u fine 😕


hey thanks for the concern but was out of town
will update it soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Anamika163

plz update yaar... after this frustrating week comes the even more frustrating weekend🥺 ur FF is the only survival, pllz plz update :plz:


sorry yaar was out of town
i was supposed to come 2morrow but work was completed so returned today
i just read yesterday's written update was really frustrating
will update it soon with in an hour

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: M_n_h


sorry yaar was out of town
i was supposed to come 2morrow but work was completed so returned today
i just read yesterday's written update was really frustrating
will update it soon with in an hour


yeay!! m waiting😃 take ur tym aur achchiwali update karo🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi friends sorry for the late update
here is the update enjoy it
hope it makes ur weekend

Scene: 21

RaYa's romantic moments-2 Consummation

Precap:

Ram: tumhe darne ki kya zaroorat hai main tumhare hi paas hoon na Priya smiles seeing her smile he gets lost in her beauty and without knowing he moves towards her Priya senses that Ram was close to her she meet his eyes and sees what he wants so she closes her eyes he places his lips on hers and starts nibbling her lower lip she parted her lips he deepned the kiss making her forget everything except the feel of his lips on hers. She too forgetting her shyness put her hands around him holding him close feeling his love and forgetting herself in that moment

Update:

Ram and Priya separated after some time he looked down at her she hid herself in his chest he put his arms around her and carried her to his room. Priya looked at the room whole was beautifully decorated with flowers and candles

Priya: mujhe niche chodiye na Ram kept her down she roamed around the room then she saw the bed decorated with flowers feeling shy she lowered her eyes Ram observed that Priya was feeling shy

Ram came towards her: Priya… and makes her turn towards him and kisses her on her forehead and bends down towards her lips Priya being shy runs away towards the window.

Ram goes towards her holds her: kya yaar tum bhi itna sharmaogi tho main daadi ko kya jawab dunga

Priya: daadi ka iss sab se kya lena hai I mean daadi ko kya jawab dena hai

Ram scratches his head: main bhuool gaya shayad tumhe batana

Priya: kya batana bhul gaye aap

Ram: daadi ne apne par pote ke baare mein pucha tha ab tum inta sharma rahi ho tho main unhe kya jawab dunga

Priya: matlab

Ram: main unhe kya kahuga ye ki unki bahu bahut shramili hai… tho time lagega

Priya hits him on his hand: aap bhi na bilkul besharam ho gaye hai

Ram: ab maine aisa kya keh diya

Priya: ye aap puchrahe hai

Ram: Priya main tumhare liye gift laya hoon

Priya: gift… magar uski jaroorat nahin hai

Ram: suhaag raat ke din gift diya jaata hai na aur aaj humara suhaag raat hai… I mean agar tum chaho tho… tho gift laya hoon

Priya lowers her eyes: iski jaroorat nahin thi

Ram: arreh kyun nahin thi… jaroorat hai… and he asks her to close her eyes takes her hand and places a braclet on her hand and asks her to open her eyes

Priya opens her eyes and finds a beautiful braclet on her hand of gold and observes that there was something written on it with small diamonds and reads it: RAYA ye kya hai

Ram holds her hand: Raya means Ram and Priya Ram se Ra aur Priya se Ya, mill ke bana RaYa… aur jab hum dono ek hone ja rahe hai tho humare naam bhi ek hone chahiye na… isiliye… kaisa laga

Priya: bahut sundar hai

Ram: aur tum par ye bahut acha lag raha hai he looks at her lifts her head with a finger under her chin but Priya lowers her eyes: Priya meri taraf dekho

Priya slowly raises her eyes to meet his Ram bends down towards her lips but stopped himself looked into her eyes Priya closed her eyes then he moved towards her lips closing her's with his holding her from her waist pulling her close to him so that there is no space between them she put her arms around him, Ram kissed her deeply teasing her lips with his tongue as though asking her to part her lips she parted her lips he kissed her deeply and passionately then he moved towards her neck Priya moaned in pleasure he kissed all along her collar bone he moved further down to her cleavage pulling her pallu aside but Priya turned always shyly he held her from back putting his arms around her he nuzzled her nape saying: aaj nahin… aise mat jao I have been waiting for this moment for so long I wont allow you to move away from me today he moved her hairs to one side with his hand slightly touching her skin she became stiff at his touch kissed her back then he saw the strings of her blouse which were tied into a knot he opened the knot pulled her blouse slightly from her shoulders and kissed her bare shoulders then he kissed her neck making her moan in pleasure and he turned her towards him, he moved towards her lips covering hers with his holding her from her waist slowly he took her to the bed kissing her.

Priya was lying on the bed Ram bent over her she looked at him with her heart in her eyes he kissed her forehead as though telling her everything would be alright then he kissed her eyes then her cheeks and he moved to her lips crushing hers with his then he moved down towards her neck making her moan in pleasure she held him tightly he then moved towards the cleavage and they made love that night telling each other how much the other person is meant for them.

Next morning Priya woke to find herself wrapped in Ram's arms she tried to lift his hand but was unable to lift it and thought loudly how can one hold so tightly even while sleeping she turned to face him saw him sleeping peacefully so she pleaded him: please chodd dijiye

Ram was sleeping silently there was no response from him so she kissed his fore head please ab tho chodd dijiye but still there was no response from Ram so she kissed his eyes then also there was no response so she again kissed his cheeks Ram then pointed his finger towards his lips.

Priya: no way aap bhi na and tried to remove his arms but he held her more tightly then she kept her hand on his lips and then kissed her hand: please ab tho chodd dijiye

Ram opened his eyes this time: ye kya hai tumhe kiss karna bhi nahin aata hai kya

Priya: nahin aata aap mujhe choddiye

Ram: aaj se har subah jab tak tum mujhe kiss nahin karthi main tumhe choddne wala nahin

Priya: aap ye kaisi baatein kar rahi hai maine abhi tho kiss kiya tha na lowered her eyes

Ram: kiss… kab kiya

Priya: abhi tho kiya tha

Ram: usse tum kiss kehti ho Priya nodded her head

Ram: main tum batata hoon ki kiss kise kehte hai and he kissed her deeply and passionately on her lips making her to hold him for support


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