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Hello Everyone..
I am sure many of u don't recognize me, but I am here in this forum from last 2 months, reading storys and all ur posts but I haven't replied much except for FF, SS or OS...I love to read them. I will not say that this is my first attempt t wrote anything, I have written 4 fanfics before but Its my first try to write anything on ArShi...So, let me know how it is...😳

Tears, yes it was her tears which has brought him closer to her. She know how much her tears affected him. It has been the most unbearable sight for him to see those tears on her face. She remembered how he reacted when she hugged him. Even, she didn't knew the reason for this one...She was asking Her Devi Maiyya for courage and the answer she got was him. He would have wiped her tears if he was not the ASR. She has seen the actual Arnav behind the ASR when he kept his hand on her head trying to say that everything will be fine and He will be there for her. His eyes were telling her that she is not alone and he is there to protect her from every harm that would come her way. His memories made her cry even more. She is feeling like a part of her is going away from her. She has recognized her fellings for him long back but something inside her was holding her and now, today she has closed all the doors that can lead her to him.

She knew that he is not a perfect man who will promise her everything but somehow, she knew that he is the man who can do anything to bring smile on her face, she remember her sister saying that how will she find a person who will complete her every stupid need...that time his face came to her mind and she wanted to tell her that she has found that person.

The moment she has realized her love for him was the moment when her aunt has been pressurized her more to marry some other person. She tried to say no many times but was not able to tell them the reason behind her no, and now she has stopped arguing with them, and simply said yes for the marriage and now, she will have to forget him. The more she is trying, the more it is getting worst for her. Tears were flowing through her eyes and now, she knew that he will not be here to promise her that everything will be alrite. But she wished he was there.
She came in front of RM praying in her heart that she will not be able to see him, but when she knocked...It was him who opened the door for him. He looked at her and ask "Tum theek ho?"
and this was enough for her, the tears which she was holding in her eyes started flowing and she ran inside.

Let me know if u guys like it...
Preet
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SARUN.fangirl18 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😳please continueee sooon
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Originally posted by: KhushiHRaizada

😳please continueee sooon



Thanks Dear...But I am not much sure about continuing it or not..but will def try...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi preet! oh darlin it's too short for me cuz yeh dil maange more!
since ur not willing to continue this, next time make sure to write a looong one ok?!?!

much love 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi preet plz continue...so much fine writing...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: NaDzGirl

hi preet! oh darlin it's too short for me cuz yeh dil maange more!

since ur not willing to continue this, next time make sure to write a looong one ok?!?!

much love 🤗



Hey...Thank u so much Dear...🤗
Actually, there r already many OS or fics going on the same track...so, I dont want to do something in the same track, but if something different will came in my ming, then I will def write more...
and I am so sorry for a small part, I am planning to wrote one full fledged FF on ArHi soon...So, will def give u a big part there...😳
Love Preet 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: imaan

hi preet plz continue...so much fine writing...



Hey Dear...thank u so much...will def try...let me think for some time...😳
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Thanks a lot Dear 😳
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Originally posted by: rechus

Nice.. Pls continue



Thank u so much...will def try 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Pls continue and do PM when you update next part and make it a long one coz your writing is really nice.
Good start 👍🏼

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