FF : chori kiya re giya PART 2 AT PG 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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In this ff there is love marriage of naksh and 1 week is remaining in their marriage And thus thry r not allowed to meet each other ,
from d situation continues .


Part 1 ****


At maheshwaris ,
dadi , rajshri , sunaina , varsha , AKSHARA r seated in d hall and doing chit-chat .
Two men enter telling radhe krishna . One of them was long in height and other one was short . Both had moustache . They wore a paghdi a
nd were dressed in kurta - dhoti . They carried a big box of bangles .
Rj asked who were they ? They said that kunvarsa's health wasn't good so they sent them to show u d bangles .

Those men came in and showed d bangles . That short fellow w



as showing bangles to others while long fellow was showing to akshara . Akshara saw the kada in that long fellow's hand and even d ring which were really familiar to her , she kept thinking 4 a while and finally recognizes it was none other than >>>> NAI TIK >>>>>
A big smile appeared on akshara's face . Naitik started showing d bangles and choosed silver bangles telling that they will suit akshara and put them on akshara's hand . She naughtily said that they aren't so good . Then naitik choosed red bangle
s 4 her and put them on her hands , she again made a face telling that they weren't so special [ ACTUALLY SHE WAS LOVING D WAY NAITIK WAS CHOOSING BANGLES 4 HER ]
All these kept on going and gopi dadi called dadi 2 taste d food . Meanwhile anshu called sunaina , rj too went and varsha hung up on phone
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice 1 do update nxt part soon n plz me wenever u update
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it was really nice n luv ur thinking it was jst awsome👏

keep it up n cntinue the ff

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Posted: 14 years ago
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good start.nice part.👏. continue soon.
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Kya starting hai. Just luvd it. Plz continue.
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please continue soon i rilli wanna no wat happens after everyone else leaves ☺️ 😉
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nice start part was also nice
continue soon...
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nice good part plz when u write next part send PM.
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pls post ur part waiting 4 it eagerly
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PART 2 ++++
Naksh r alone in d hall .
A : aap , yahan , i mean ye moustache , paghadi and all .
N : pyaar kiya hai to nibhana to padega na
a : by the way aap bahut kute lag rahe hai .
N : ye sab baad mein . Aap raat ko 11:00 baje ready rahiye ga , h
um date par jayenge .
A : naitik , its not possible . Aur aaj to bilkul bhi nahi .
N : kyun , KISI AUR KE SAATH DATE PAR JA RAHI HAI !!!!!!!!
A : plz naitik . Mai jab bhi aapse milti thi to hamesha ye baat dadi aur varsha ko pata rehti thi aur aaj
Shaurya dadu , varsha aur dadi meri ek cousin ki shaadi mein ja rahe hai , infact vo ek ghante mein hi niklenge aur kal shaam vo wapas aa jayenge . Plz naitik aaj nahi par kal pakka .
N : akshara , humne pichle 1 week se aapas mein acche baat nahi ki
Hai . Phone pe baat karte hai to koi na koi bulaleta hai ya to phir room mein chala aata hai . Plz akshara , mujhe aaj apke saath time spend karna hai .
A : naitik ye possible nahi hai aur aaj to bilkul bhi nahi . Aap samajhne ki koshish kijiye .
N :
Aap kyun nahi samajh rahi .
A : plz naitik .
N : thik hai rahiye akele .

He left making a face .

Akshara calls naitik for several times but he doesnt respond .
At night (11:00)
in naitik's room .

Akshara jumps in from the window , while naitik is lying on d bed .
Akshara exclaims in joy HIII .
Naitik gives no attention To that .
A : how rude , :mana ki mai acche se taiyar hoke nahi aayi , par thik -thak lag rahi hun , itni bhi buri nahi ki aap meri taraf dekhe hi nahi .
Still no response from naitik .
N: pata nahi jab se akshara se milke aaya hun tabse kuch
Ajeeb ho raha hai .
Kabhi mujhe vo t.v mein dikhti hai , to kabhi laptop mein , to kabhi aaine mein unka haasta chehra , aur aab sabse ajeeb mujhe vo meri room mein dikh rahi hai , matlab ki vo mere room mein window se jump karke aayi . Wowww !!!!

Ek kaam karta hun , akshara ko hi phone karta hun , ki ye sab kya hai aur waise bhi aaj maine unse bahut rudely baat ki thi , vo bhi preshan hogi .
He calls her

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